Chapter 1 - Immune
Submitted January 3, 2008 Updated January 3, 2008 Status Complete | Its a poem...read it....comment....your done. See how easy that is?
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Chapter 1 - Immune
Chapter 1 - Immune
I know it should hurt
When the blade
Pierces my skin,
When it buries
Into my chest
And the blood
Spills out,
But it does not.
I expect it to hurt
When I slam my fist
Into the wall,
When all my hate
Rebounds against me
Shattering every bone
In my arm,
But I am numb to it.
I am sure it will hurt
When the ones I love
Turn their backs on me,
When they leave,
Never to return,
When they leave me
All alone,
But I remain unscathed.
I almost want it to hurt
As I lie in my bed,
Tears mixing with the blood
Dripping from my face,
Falling to the floor,
But it does not.
I guess pain
Just doesn't hurt as much
When it's all you've ever known.
When the blade
Pierces my skin,
When it buries
Into my chest
And the blood
Spills out,
But it does not.
I expect it to hurt
When I slam my fist
Into the wall,
When all my hate
Rebounds against me
Shattering every bone
In my arm,
But I am numb to it.
I am sure it will hurt
When the ones I love
Turn their backs on me,
When they leave,
Never to return,
When they leave me
All alone,
But I remain unscathed.
I almost want it to hurt
As I lie in my bed,
Tears mixing with the blood
Dripping from my face,
Falling to the floor,
But it does not.
I guess pain
Just doesn't hurt as much
When it's all you've ever known.
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wolfmoon on March 19, 2008, 6:52:32 AM
wolfmoon on
T_T Depressing.hayly125 on January 10, 2008, 2:01:20 AM
hayly125 on
T_T it so sad!!! but i like it! nice job!B on January 7, 2008, 7:23:47 AM
B on
o_o That was awesomeBlackwolfmoon on January 5, 2008, 12:28:03 AM
this one is really dark and has a lot of emotion too it J.T, and i'd never turn my back on you or leave youuchihagirl on January 4, 2008, 7:15:53 AM
uchihagirl on
I totally agree with YoriXYamiForever on this one, and its absolutelly amazing, one of your best yet even though it is depressingmyartmaybebadbutatleastitry on January 4, 2008, 1:46:49 AM
Awesome *appluads* Just awesome that's all I can say.YoriXYamiForever on January 3, 2008, 1:59:13 PM
Oh my gosh. I have another of my absolute favorites of yours to add to the list. This is really well written, it's very painful and that makes it personal. The last three lines are just.... wow.... Really great job! I promise I'll never leave! And I'll freaking stab anyone who causes you pain! >_<KelekiahGaladrian on January 3, 2008, 9:04:26 AM
I'd never turn my back on you JT-kun, nor would I leave you, unless you asked me to. I like it, it's depressing, but good anyway. Great job! ^^