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Chapter 1 - Questions

God I'm sick of descriptions....um wrote this during school cuz of a sustitute, (he's a question talker XP) Comment please^^

Chapter 1 - Questions

Chapter 1 - Questions
Where to go
And when to leave
And What to do
When you get there.
How to speak
And how to act
And what you
Need to wear.
The worries that
Concern you so,
Formalities
Say I.
I focus on
The bigger things:
How to live
Or even why.
What does the future
hold in store,
And how, then,
May we find it.
Why is it
We learn so much
With the intention
To forget.
Is the sky
An endless mass,
Or just what
We can see.
Do races exist
Beyond our own,
Or is it just
You and me.
You ask the
Immaterial,
Irrelevant,
Say I
You ask who
And when and where,
I ask
How and why.

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hinatagurl123 on March 26, 2008, 3:12:00 PM

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hinatagurl123so much meaning twisted togther in one poem nicely done

myartmaybebadbutatleastitry on January 20, 2008, 9:42:57 AM

myartmaybebadbutatleastitry on
myartmaybebadbutatleastitryWow......... Just......... Wow..........
I think that's how I respond to all of your poems... lol

hayly125 on January 10, 2008, 1:55:55 AM

hayly125 on
hayly125thats great!!! i wish i could write peoms like that...

YamiRevea on January 9, 2008, 8:42:27 AM

YamiRevea on
YamiReveaThat's awesome *o* amazing, I like how it Rhymes, beautiful!

Blackwolfmoon on January 8, 2008, 8:39:58 AM

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Blackwolfmoonthat's really awesome J.T, i like the rhythm  to it, and the meaning ^^

KelekiahGaladrian on January 8, 2008, 6:10:43 AM

KelekiahGaladrian on
KelekiahGaladrianOh that's kool. I like that JT-kun. It has so much meaning. That is awesome. And you made it rhyme too! That's so cool!