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Chapter 1 - Once Upon A Time

Yea, the titles meant to be ironic. And...yea...inspired by YoriXYamiForever...well...i got the idea from seeing her "Dark Kel" pic..(go look at it^^) anyway yea...please comment^^

Chapter 1 - Once Upon A Time

Chapter 1 - Once Upon A Time
Dark, they say.
As black as night,
Is my heart, my soul.
They tell me
I was born from darkness,
That I shall die in darkness,
That I am darkness.
Of course they say this,
For they do not know
My past, my history, my story.
They only know the now,
The soul that has been burned,
The heart that has been enveloped
In pain, and in hate.
What they do not know
Is my beginning,
The light from which
I once drew existence.
A light that is cast still,
Though blocked now by
The very things
Which sustain me today.
Now that light,
So weak and fragile,
Is blocked, still,
Blanketing me in the shadow,
The shadow of fears,
Of worries, of revenge.
But the point remains,
There was a light,
Once upon a time...
And now they know,
I am not darkness.
I am a shadow.

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hinatagurl123 on March 26, 2008, 3:06:37 PM

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hinatagurl123i true master piece i felt my soul tearing to peices as i read

DeathNoteSurvivor on March 27, 2008, 7:30:27 AM

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DeathNoteSurvivoro0 im sorry =(

KelekiahGaladrian on January 30, 2008, 7:01:10 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianO_O No way.... *dies*

hayly125 on January 25, 2008, 12:37:52 AM

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hayly125this is a great peom! keep it up!! these look like u pored ur heart and soul into them! *faves* ^-^

wolfmoon on January 22, 2008, 10:33:59 AM

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wolfmoonwoah, deep. One thing to remember, there can't be shadow withot light, but the shadow blocks the light, blotting out it's own creator.

Blackwolfmoon on January 22, 2008, 5:05:45 AM

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Blackwolfmoon it's wonderful.... it gives a vivid picture when you read it... but not an extremely vivid picutre which is nice ^^......*faves*

YoriXYamiForever on January 21, 2008, 12:06:17 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverOMGOSH!!!!! That was awesome JT-kun!! And it fits Kel so well it's insane! I love it! It's another of my top faves now! Very, Very, Very well written!!! GREAT JOB!!