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Chapter 1 - Puppet

well....its a poem...with words....and.....rhyyyyyymes....and....wait no thats about it XD anyways comment...oh and if you figure out what the hand is lemme know...actually just everyone guess anyway XP

Chapter 1 - Puppet

Chapter 1 - Puppet
The world is a stage,
Or so they say,
Leaving little room
For doubt.
They also say
Its a kind of a play,
Beginning to end
Planned out.
And with everything gone,
The curtains are drawn,
The stage having
Now been set.
It now appears
The stage is cleared
Except  for
A marionette.
Though surrounded by none
The solitary one
Does not seem to play
A significant part.
A vessel in disrepair,
Left hanging in the air,
Suspended by the strings
Of a thousand broken hearts.
The hand that rests above,
A shadow cast thereof,
Moves the being
Devoid of will.
With all freedom now removed
It follows every move
That the hand creates,
And then lies still.
The soul that hides inside,
Trapped in empty eyes,
Tries desperately
To be heard.
But try as it might
It loses the fight,
And no one
Hears a word.
So again it starts to try
To learn how to defy
The mighty hand controlling
All its movements.
But so fragile and frail,
'Tis to no avail,
It continues,
But with no improvement.
But now and again
The hand begins
To loosen 
Its mighty grip.
And only then,
As the strings grow thin,
Does the doll
Begin to slip.
One by one,
Until its done,
Each string is
Cut in two.
Because from the start
It had the heart,
Although it
Never knew.
With soul returned
And lessons learned,
It finally
May walk free.
At last relieved,
The puppet leaves
To create
Its destiny.


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hinatagurl123 on March 26, 2008, 2:58:32 PM

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hinatagurl123arent we all just puppets in this messed up stage
but it was very good

uchihagirl on February 26, 2008, 8:58:36 AM

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uchihagirlwho amazing meez lovez it ^^

I think the hand might be destiny or the past...just throwin that out there

YoriXYamiForever on February 26, 2008, 7:49:08 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverWow, I. Love. It. ^_^ The rhyme is addicting lol Great poem as always!! I love the last part about walking free and creating a destiny ^^

Let's see... the hand... I just have a guess ^^; I was thinking something like memories. Cause you said the strings were broken hearts so when they're cut you're leaving the past behind and moving on to walk free right? *blushes* Just a guess he he

Blackwolfmoon on February 25, 2008, 8:06:43 AM

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KelekiahGaladrian on February 25, 2008, 7:46:48 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianThat is so cool JT! You are amazing! I can't rhyme to save my life, but that is just awesome! I don't get the hand thing much at all so....