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Chapter 1 - Stranger

well..here....sorry its been so long >.> This is Dedicated to BreathlessAngel

Chapter 1 - Stranger

Chapter 1 - Stranger
You see me in your nightmares,
And you wonder who I am
I’m the keeper of the broken,
I’m the leader of the damned.
 
I’m the shadow standing in the street,
A phantom taking flight,
I’m the faded silhouette
That you swear you see each night
 
Neither demon nor a human
Instead I’m stuck between,
I’m the shadow that both hides and lurks
In the scariest of dreams
 
I lean over your shoulder
And whisper in your ear
I’m the cold and evil voice
That only you can hear.
 
The thoughts that you were thinking,
But never talked about,
I’m the one that turns them dark
And then makes them pour out.
 
I’m the shiver down your spine
And I’m the chill upon your breath
I’ve had many names throughout the years,
But you can call me Death.

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YoriXYamiForever on January 22, 2009, 6:36:23 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverOh my gosh! I can not believe I never commented on this!!

I absolutely love this poem. It send chills up by spine. ^^ Absolutely perfect way to describe Death. You are by far my favorite poem writer ever!!!!

wolfmoon on April 13, 2008, 8:23:15 AM

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wolfmoonHoly crap. I've had that staring in my face too many times not to be scared a little by this. Just a little.

KelekiahGaladrian on April 1, 2008, 11:05:26 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianThat is an amazing way to describe death, simply amazing. I'm glad you're writing again, even though I know how hard it is sometimes. Great job, it turned out awesome!

BreathlessAngel on April 1, 2008, 8:52:34 AM

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BreathlessAngeloh wow..for me! What a surprise! =0
This is amazing J.T I love it so much <3 This is a definte fave. <3 Thanks again J.T <3

DeathNoteSurvivor on April 1, 2008, 8:57:25 AM

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DeathNoteSurvivorno problem Catherina^^ you inspired me to get back to writing XP