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Chapter 1 - Deja Vu

This is a song I wrote for a friend cuz shes doing some band competition thingy XP

Chapter 1 - Deja Vu

Chapter 1 - Deja Vu
Every morning when I wake up
'Soon as my feet hit the floor,
I get that familiar feeling
That I've done all of this before
And it's hard to just look past it,
Nothin' new to do or to say.
So I'm stuck in the same ol' story,
Day after day after day after dayyy...

AND NOW I'M
Losing all sensation
MAKING
Useless observations
AS I
Show no hesitation
To break down, to break do-own.

(Chorus)
And I'm not quite sure what's
Been going on,
But it's been going on for way to long
It's like my life's just
A broken record
Playing the same damn song.
And I don't know why it's
Happening to me,
But there's not much that I can do,
All I know is that tomorrow's gonna be
Just another Deja Vu

Now, don't try say it's different,
'Cause ya know as well as me,
That now and then and forever,
It's repeated history.
So I just try to go on.
And I try to find a way
To keep my life from becoming
The same as it was yesterdayyy...

AND NOW I
Feel the desperation
DEALING
With all of the frustration
AND GIVE
Into temptation,
And break down, I break do-own.

(Chorus)

And I find it so redundant
And I find it kinda strange,
That no matter what I alter,
There's nothing I can change.
But still, I keep on living,
Or existing, I should say.
'Cause I can't see what seperates
Tomorrow from todayyy...

Because it's just another (Ya know it's just another)
Yea, it's just another dayyy...(Spoken: Didn't we already say that?)
ANOTHER DAY OF DEJA VU!

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KelekiahGaladrian on January 20, 2009, 12:31:47 PM

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KelekiahGaladrianI feel bad that I didn't notice this before. Must be because FAC isn't sending out anymore story alerts.

Um, all I can say is "WOW" 'cause it's THAT good.

Although it's not POUNDING through my head, I can hear music, vaguely and faintly, but it's still there.

That kinda sounds like my life a little. Just the same thing everyday.

I love the lyrics and the rhyming and just about everything about it. Your songwriting/poemwriting skills are amazing and I ADORE them. It's a wonderful talent to have and I'm glad you take the time to share them with us (even if it does take me five months to finally find and read and review them). I love it. ^^

Blackwolfmoon on August 19, 2008, 7:42:29 AM

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Blackwolfmoonthat's really good Josh! ^^ i love the chorus!

YoriXYamiForever on August 18, 2008, 12:41:24 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverO_O Oh.......my.......gosh........................

THIS IS FREAKIN AMAZING JT!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! No, I ADORE it!!! Omigosh how did you write this?! It's fantastic! I can almost hear the music in my head while I'm reading! You did WAY good on this, MORE than good!

Oh my gosh, can I ask a huge favor?! Can I please please please use this song in my story?! It's INCREDIBLE! It's........ I'm running out of words to keep going! I ADORE it! ^____^

YumeXItachi on August 18, 2008, 12:27:25 PM

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YumeXItachiOh,Wow...
truly Amazing Song,J.T.
Ii can't really say anythiing.
Except for,
W-O-W.

<33
This
Song
:D