Chapter 1 - I still shed a tear
Submitted December 28, 2007 Updated December 28, 2007 Status Complete | alright.....this is about a recent heart break. NOTE: i did not go out wiht this guy, i just really loved him.
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Chapter 1 - I still shed a tear
Chapter 1 - I still shed a tear
He was the hope
In my life
I would think of him
In my time of strife
I would call him
Just to hear him speak
When he hugged me
My knees when weak
His smell, so sweet
Like milk and honey
He made my day shine
When it wasn't sunny
But then she came along
And took that all away
And i was there
On that fateful day
When they held hands
And smiled at each other
My heart would split
A little bit further
When i got home
All i could do was cry
Grab the blade
And let it fly
If flew across my skin
Making a deep red line
And all i could think
Was he should be mine
I had to stop talking to him
Because every time i did
I would cut and cry
And make myself sick
The pain is not as strogn as before
But it is still here
And every time i think of him
I still shed a tear.
In my life
I would think of him
In my time of strife
I would call him
Just to hear him speak
When he hugged me
My knees when weak
His smell, so sweet
Like milk and honey
He made my day shine
When it wasn't sunny
But then she came along
And took that all away
And i was there
On that fateful day
When they held hands
And smiled at each other
My heart would split
A little bit further
When i got home
All i could do was cry
Grab the blade
And let it fly
If flew across my skin
Making a deep red line
And all i could think
Was he should be mine
I had to stop talking to him
Because every time i did
I would cut and cry
And make myself sick
The pain is not as strogn as before
But it is still here
And every time i think of him
I still shed a tear.
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pizza24 on December 30, 2007, 11:32:31 AM
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thats so sad!!!!!!! But it is ok becouse every one likes honey.
sisaTao on December 29, 2007, 8:05:38 AM
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TKxKari224 on December 29, 2007, 1:54:12 AM
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firetempesttakashi on December 28, 2007, 10:57:34 AM
artyfowl on December 28, 2007, 10:25:48 AM
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what a lovely written poem! it really hit the spot that it was supposed to. but, to cut yourself for a guy is to wish for idiocy (NOT that i'm saying you're an idiot! far from it!). you shouldn't hurt yourself because HE'S the one who made the mystake! if you just gave it some time, the RIGHT guy who was meant for you will come and you'll see the difference in your real love. hang in there watery eyes, you have much much more hope
Nekogal411 on December 28, 2007, 10:13:31 AM
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