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For lack of a better title, its called "Confusion" Its a short story I had to write in English based off one of the emotions presented in Poe's "The Pit and the Pendulum". I chose confusion. I hope this conveyed the feeling well.



Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted: May 23, 2009 • Updated: May 23, 2009
Word count: 4547 • Size: 24k • Comments: 2 • views: 160


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KokoroTsuki24 on May 24, 2009, 1:46:58 PM

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KokoroTsuki24lolz. i doubt he/she wouldnt like it. its rly good! and i HATE writing stuff for English. its much more fun writing spur of the moment things you know? like my poem i just decided to write. i showed my english teacher and i got extra credit! i was so excited. i bet ur gonna get like an A triple +. XD

hipeople on May 24, 2009, 2:20:41 PM

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hipeopleYeah,i dun like writing essays, and our only other short story was an in-class one, so it kinda flumped. But I had been meaning to write something forever and we got this project and most everyone else did a poster on fear lol I think she doesn't like my essays/stories b/c they get so long. After I wrote it, I asked her how long it should be and she told me about 2, 2 1/2 pgs. Then she asked me how long this was and I was like "...7 pgs..." Its actually about 6 3/4, but

KokoroTsuki24 on May 24, 2009, 5:10:51 PM

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KokoroTsuki24see, i like writing essays, but i can never finish them in class! DX i always stress about not finishing and then what i DO write is a complete fail. and this was 7 pages? wait was it written or typed? cuz if it was typed... then WOW! ive think ive only gotten a maximum of five. i might even put it up here... actually ive just thought of that but i still think it could be a good idea... ^.^

hipeople on May 25, 2009, 2:04:16 AM

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hipeopleIt was typed lol I type all my stuff b/c its easier to fix in the long run. I can't remember what my longest chapter was, I think I had an 11+ pg one but I think I skipped lines like crazy XD Yeah,put it up!I will read =)

KokoroTsuki24 on May 25, 2009, 7:07:18 AM

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KokoroTsuki24k. but its not very long... i was talking about the whole story. i mean i havent finished yet, but the chapters are like two to three paragraphs long *hehe* and im only on like the fifth or sixth page. yeah kinda embarrassing. im WAY better at writing poems. in fact i have one up here. its called The Murder. check it out if you like! ^.^

hipeople on May 25, 2009, 10:11:27 AM

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hipeopleThats how my first few stories were (though they are no longer up and they are buried in the depths of my computer where I plan for them never to arise again..) Yeah I read it a couple days ago...or yesterday...or...I can't

KokoroTsuki24 on May 26, 2009, 10:21:11 AM

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KokoroTsuki24haha! yeah some of my stuff is like that too. but i write stories in my poems so its okay!

hipeople on May 26, 2009, 12:00:51 PM

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hipeopleYeah I wish I could write poetry but... I FAIL miserably at that hahaha

KokoroTsuki24 on May 23, 2009, 1:59:50 PM

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KokoroTsuki24whoah. im speechless. this is SO GOOD!

hipeople on May 23, 2009, 2:13:55 PM

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hipeopleThank you very much X3 Let's just hope my teacher thinks the same thing hahaha