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Chapter 1 - My Life

uhh its just a poem

Chapter 1 - My Life

Chapter 1 - My Life
“My Life”


I will never tell
How all my life I’ve been in hell
Pain and tears of unspoken fears
Will never escape these lips

You’ve beat me down
And told me off
Yet you don’t understand
What else I’ve been through

Life is not easy for many of us
And you are making things worse
Just leave me alone
Quit telling me what I lack

I’m sorry I can’t be all you’ve wished
But I’ve lost my soul in a dark abyss
Since no one has cared or shared
The love and kindness I asked for

So hide me
While I slit my wrists
And mourn in darkness all my life
With pain and anger consuming me

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fallen_wings93 on March 15, 2006, 12:49:00 PM

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fallen_wings93...i love your poem... its soooo depressing... well in a good way...kinda.. but i STILLL LIKE IT HUN!!!!

Hylian_Ice14 on March 1, 2006, 5:44:55 AM

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Hylian_Ice14This is unbelievably deep... not to mention it beats the living crap out of any poem I've ever written. O.O

Ichidou_Daisuke on February 3, 2006, 5:26:51 PM

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Ichidou_DaisukeAwesome flow. Great poem.

Teemu on January 23, 2006, 11:11:02 PM

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Teemuwow ô.ô

GannysGirl on January 22, 2006, 8:53:28 AM

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GannysGirlo.o D.E.E.P. I like it! Remember Hil, You are loved! ^_^

Lychee on December 29, 2005, 3:18:47 PM

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LycheeLo-VA-ly!!!! its awesome, i love every word of it!!!!

raven_titan on December 27, 2005, 5:18:28 AM

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raven_titanwow....thats deep...

steph on December 27, 2005, 2:54:28 AM

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stephthis is SO deep....*favs*

orangegirl on December 27, 2005, 2:53:32 AM

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orangegirlok just to let u all know.. i didnt title this thing lol one of my friends did cuz i couldnt think of anything