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Chapter 1 - dragon story

its about a realm of dragons....its only the start of a story but i like it.....ill add more soon ;)its sort of quest.....

Chapter 1 - dragon story

Chapter 1 - dragon story
Two different Realms
Chapter one (entro and getting to know Night Shade)


This story begins in a land where the creatures roamed free and myths and ledgens were true. And where there were four main cults that ruled over the land, one of which is a myth and know one has ever found. These cults all had marks that they get branded on to their skin when they turn 16, each different. One of the cults, Whispto, was a peaceful cult. It reached from the edge of the White Spirit Forest that covers most of the land, to the wide-open valley that is full of lost spirits and souls. The other two cults were called Thenaha and Anforoo; these two cults lived on the same side of the wide-open valley. One cult was peaceful like the Whistos, but their goodness didnt brush off on Thenaha. Now, very few creatures has entered the realm or even set eyes upon, the realm of Hallowmore, it is said to be through the forbidden door which is somewhere in the White Spirit Forest. But only few dragons know where it is, so nobody can destroy, or enter it, if they dare try.
Brothers have rivalries. And so do Gods of Elements, but it only happens because the darkness is already inside them, deep down. And you only need the smallest thing to set it free, for it to be unleashed out onto the world.

Very few dragons leave their cult, but for the few who do are never seen again. But are they? And what happens to them?

I still can t believe youve made it this far Papaya said walking along the rose petal covered road.
"Well I could hardly miss my best friends Marking, but are you sure you want to be Marked into this cult"
"How many times have I said this, yes, now go, other wise you'll be seen by your brother? Hes my brother not my mother, he cant tell me which road to take, I chose this one, to be free not to rule over other people
You know some people would do anything just to get what you have
A place in a group to deicide what other people need to do, mmmmmmmmmmm, dont think so, not me Night Shade said turning around Ill see you around
Yeh if you make it through the day
Me not make it through the day, youre the one being marked today. Do you know how painful it can it can be, and even more if you deicide to leave the cult of Whisto Night Shade patted him on the back.
Its not that painful right
Im sorry, but my words are true, now go other wise youll miss it Papaya started to run to the city boundary and flew over the fence.
He is going to scream like a baby phoenix hahahahaha he said watching him run over to the wall. He looked at Papaya again and gave another laugh.

As Night Shade got ready to fly he felt a cold breeze on the back of his neck. Oooh he said shivering. He slowly turned around, facing the White Spirit Forest. And quickly jumped because, as he looked through the woodland into the forest, he saw to eyes glowing in the dark. But it couldnt be, their kind vanished years ago in the darkness of the elements. Shadow closed his eyes and stared to remember how it happened, as he got flash backs of how his brothers colt got vanquished, his legs became uneasy and he fell down smashing his head on a rock, making him fall unconscious. As soon as that happened the person in the woodland rushed out, her cloak flying behind her. She knelt down beside him and whipped out a pouch from her belt, she put her hand into it and pulled out, which looked like green and sliver dust, sprinkled it over him and said loudly. I call upon the Spirit of the White Forest to hear me as I call,
heal his wound,
and I shall show him all
As soon as that was said the image of the spirit appeared from a gust of the wind and said. Are you sure he would want to know, its been kept a secret for all the ages?


Second chapter (Shadows fight with Moon)

As the sun rose over the horizon, Shadow watched its light scatter over the land. Once the light hit the crystal pendent around his neck, he turned around and slowly walked back to his cave. As soon as he got to the entrance of the cave the sun light pured in through the gap on the ceiling and struck Angles fair body. Shadow softly walked over to her and held her cold hand. As he looked at her hand his eyes wondered to the clear crystal on Angels finger he thought about Moon. Suddenly he felt this rage inside of his heart and started charging out of the cave palace and shoot along the path. Not stopping or slowing down he jumped,

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scarlet11 on July 19, 2004, 8:53:21 AM

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scarlet11wow! very detailed indeed. i enjoy this story. or wut written anyway. i really really really hope you write more soon!

pink_blossom on June 9, 2004, 5:41:39 AM

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pink_blossomaw thanks...... im so glad you like it..... i really need to put some more up for this story... *smiles*..... thanks for the comment!!

MusicBitch on June 8, 2004, 2:50:42 AM

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MusicBitchI like this story great job! ^_^