The moments emotion by Como

, Submitted: 2004-12-28, Updated: 2004-12-28, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 230, Comments: 4, Views: 88
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Some deep thought given to time...It's sort of twisted and hard to understand so sorry if you got confused...

4 Comments

Jul 18, 2005 08:07 PM by: Liedetector16 chapter 1

I like this one. Like it a lot. I think i'll fav it. *favs* Past, Present, Future; I love that line, "why cry for what is no longer?" Love it!!!!!

May 1, 2005 11:43 AM by: unloved_poet chapter 1

wow...i'm like freaked out beacause I actually understand it!! usally when I read a poem I'm like 'what the heck' but this is as clear as water. And very true. I like it alot ^_^ Oh and thank you for the 13 comments you gave me. It kinda freaked me out at first lol

Jan 5, 2005 08:08 AM by: noamidaprincess chapter 1

That is very deep. It's wonderful. Keep up the great words that flow that head of yours.

Dec 29, 2004 06:08 PM by: bishyboylover chapter 1

HOLY shoot!!!!Damn!You really are better at writing then I am!I admit it too!Read my poems and you'll see what I mean by yours being a million times better!