Ray and BB poems by NeverMore

, Submitted: 2005-01-08, Updated: 2005-01-09, Chapters: 2, Size: 1K, Words: 234, Comments: 6, Views: 188
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These are some short poems I wrote. I think they're pretty good. The first ones a little scary but thats what you get when you mix koolaid and soda. enjoy.

6 Comments

Jan 1, 2006 08:55 PM by: toxic_dreamer chapter 2

DUDE....those poems were awesome.....I LUV IT....really...i'm in 'awe' .....and i honestly can't think of the right words to describe it.....but thnx for the great read....^_^....keep up the good work

Sep 25, 2005 09:42 AM by: TerraShallDie chapter 1

Awwwww....thats so sweet...
+favs

May 11, 2005 04:03 PM by: RavenGothGirl chapter 2

i love it! i love the love theme you used in this one and the last keep on writing! mehbeh one day you'll be a fameous poem writer....

May 11, 2005 04:01 PM by: RavenGothGirl chapter 1

i dont think tis scary either...i really like it tis very good it's like true love too like how one feels when they fall into a deep deep love(dudes, i can totally relate!). and if this is the result of KoolAid and Soda then im going food shopping!lolz but have you ever tried SODA and POP ROX!?

Jan 15, 2005 06:46 PM by: girlinpink2 chapter 2

It sounds good read slow or fast. Very good. I saw that episode, and the poem ties in very well. I love the rhyming scheme, once again. Very good ^_^!

Jan 15, 2005 06:41 PM by: girlinpink2 chapter 1

I don't think it's creepy at all. I find it very beautiful. Lovely poem. I like the rhyming scheme as well. Very good job! ^_^