Hope you didn't feel too lonely when you wrote this. Good poem nonetheless though! ^^

Hope you didn't feel too lonely when you wrote this. Good poem nonetheless though! ^^

another good poem u've written :D

thats good i always find it hard to think up poems but u've done it quite good.

oooooooooooo a pwetty horse!!!!! they rock!

Same I said about the first poem,but i agree with Vampire-Queen-Gothika.

I know how you feel.And your poetry is 100 times better than mine.

not bad
i almost cryed
i'm going to add it to my favourites

i love this poem. great description. continue writing it would be great to see more.

Nice job! Keep it up.

Heh, not bad! I liked it.

Hey good one ^^ not much to say annymore

awww i know the feeling but i also just like drama and sad stuf keep it up girl ^^

wat a lovely horsey....this is sooo perfect...yea,i agree with you guys,i think the 1st one is a lot better! ^o^

awwwww...the loneliness...this is great,great job!

oh my goodness thats so cute!!!:::trys to hold back tears!:::

i like it a lot do more do more

I liked this one too!!! Perfect description of the horse and the order of words. It's a really nice peice of writing. Well done!!! ^-^

I love this!!! A lot of talent you've got there. I didn't laugh, so don't worry. I thought it was quite sad to be honest, but it was a nice poem. Being lonely is one of the worst things in this world...

Oooh I like, this is good very good!!!

it's beautiful.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

r we twins cuz im also always ignored

Good, nice way to show the relationship between a horse and its owner. Yet again, I think that there would have been better use of words in the story, but it's nice. A little editing here and there, and it will be perfect. ^_^

Hmm, how interesting. This reminds me of those 55 fiction stories, which has to get the plot and everything down in 55 words. It's nice, and the ending's bittersweet. Try and extend your choice of words a bit and then the poem will be perfect.

oh yeah....dont kill me.

AHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHa...no im just joking its good real good, i should've asked you to help me w/ my poetry project.

THis is REALY NICE! I WUV HORSIES! ^-^

pwees write more! ^-^

THis is nice!

You're a good poet and you didn't know but you're feet show it cause they're long fellows!

sorry....my english teacher said that to me a few days ago!

keep it up!

*sniff* SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

is this a poem? eh...maybe more stanzas please? i don't understand. it's like a story with no climax...sort of boring. (but i am not laughing.)

you are a very good poet! you should become professinal!^^ never stop writing, your to good to stop! +favs!^^

this is a very good poem! it really expresses a lot. awesome job!^^+favs!

LoVELY DISCRIPTION OF HORSE! I ACCTUALLY HATE HORSES AND THEY TASTE NICE WHEN YOU GO TO FRANCE CAUSE THEY DON'T EAT STEAK THEY EAT HORSE! NICE POEM ANYWAYS!

You do have a really nice way of doing things here. Your language is very puntual and have you read any of my stuff? If not, please do!

I like the first one a lot more...your a good poet ^-^

It's good! I love horses! ^^ And I got a perfect image of the horse because of the way you described him. Great poem! ^^

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i like the 1st 1 more, but this is good too. AnimeMangaLover should read this, she loves horses ^^

hey, that's pretty good ^^ I know how ya feel, sometimes I feel really alone...

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