Well that makes my comment before completely irrelevant.
Cavendish has great public speaking skills. Any debating team would want him for his ability to create a good argument regardless which side of the argument they must take. Your use of imagery creates a chilling picture painted in greys and military strictness that sends a shiver up the spine and makes one dread the inevitable battle that will surely endanger our heroes.
Very interesting plot development.
Keep up the good work
its just amazing how u can make ur own characters and language, u even made a whole saga as if u were the one who created the anime, ur stories and pics rock, i must admit u r better than me, u r the best , keep it up! see ya!
P.S: i got more pics submitted and i would appreciate comments on it thanx,see ya!
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Cavendish has great public speaking skills. Any debating team would want him for his ability to create a good argument regardless which side of the argument they must take. Your use of imagery creates a chilling picture painted in greys and military strictness that sends a shiver up the spine and makes one dread the inevitable battle that will surely endanger our heroes.
Very interesting plot development.
Keep up the good work