A Tomb Robber's Story by Dementor

, Submitted: 2005-03-08, Updated: 2005-03-20, Chapters: 2, Size: 51K, Words: 10277, Comments: 4, Views: 221
Anime/Manga (0) > Yu-Gi-Oh! series (1990) > Bakura (1439)

Bakura has some weird dream that makes him choose to live life misrible or happy. He keeps on having these dreams and then some one comes along and tries to hurt his family and friends. Can he save them?

4 Comments

Mar 23, 2005 02:37 PM by: Vampire-Queen-Gothika chapter 1

wow, the first chapter was cool ^^ I haven;t read the 2nd one yet. All I need to say is indent, that's it ^^ Keep it up, and thank you sooo much for your kind comments on my stories. I'm trying to get another few stories finished ^^U

Mar 20, 2005 04:14 PM by: kittyGurl_6 chapter 2

got a little cinister at the end didnt you? anyway thank you for putting me and Tylor in it!!!!!!!!! and especially with our "boyfriends" you are a very good writer!!!!!!!!!maybe when we grow up you will be an author and I will be the illistrator for your books!!!!!!

catnip smells good^^

Mar 13, 2005 09:41 AM by: Vampire-Queen-Gothika chapter 1

I promise to read this, but I have to get off. I scanned through it, and what I can say so far is try to indent next time. It makes it a lot easier for the readers *nod nod* I be back later to read! ^^

Mar 10, 2005 06:47 PM by: kittyGurl_6 chapter 1

very interesting!!!!!!! although the dream was a little to long, I still loved it though and cant wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!

catnip smells good^^