That was beautiful. Great job! ^^

OH MY GOD!!! SETH DON'T DIE! WHY ARE YOU VISABLE???? DON'T DIE!!!

Yay! That is awesome! Finally! Ok I'm off to read the next chapter! Bye!

Awwwwwwww...^^

Noooooo!!! Rie and Seth are supposed to be together!!! ^^

YAY!!!!!!!! That is awesome!!!

Yay! Go Rie!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...

Yay! Ok I'm going to go read the next chapter now.

Yay! She and Seth better end up together... ^^

Oh my god this story is really good!

Yay! I love your style of writing!

This is so good!!! I am going to read the next chapter bye!

AWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!that wuz so sweet n altho it was their 1st...2nd kiss... it was filled with so much passion!!!! This is my fave. part of the story now!!! awesome job!!!

Woo-Hoo!!!!! SETH!!! UR BAC!!!!!!!! .... a little p/o.... but UR BAC NONE THE LESS!!!! YAYZ!!!!! lol!

... NOoooo!!! Please tell me Seth is cioming back right?!?!?!!!! I Miss him already!!!!!!!!

0_0!!!!!!YAYZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I FEEL SO FREAKIN HAPPY RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!! RIGHT ON SETH!!!!!!!! U ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!>_< THIS JUST KEEPS GETTIN BETTER N BETTER!!!!

.... *sniffle*.... that was truely the most heart tugging thing i've ever read. it reminded me of me and my father...*tears up again* i luv my dad!!!! please keep this up! you'll really go places with this!

Yeah Rie!!!! Perfect leader type for all of us weird pplz!!!

Pic of Seth! Pic of Seth!! i want to c wat he looks lyk! he sounds so freakin' sweet!!!!*hugz*>_< lol! luv story still!

omg...!!ha ha... i reall am enjoying this story! i luv it lots! please promiss not to leave any cliff hangers!.... i heart your storie tho!! so keep up the good work!^^

Awww. Now this story is over, I don't have anything to look forward to after school... I give you A+! Just like YaoiPrincess's Ray Fanart story called "Sunday Morning After". Check it out, people, it ROCKS!
Love the story, made me cry.
;-)

YAY!
omg
Is this the last chapter?
Is this it?
NO MORE?!?!?
nuuuuuuu!!!!
Well Kiki-sama must be busy with new Ray pages and everything, so maybe Kiki-sama donsn't have time to update on here....
OR MAYBE IT REALLY IS OVERZ!!!!!!

is this the end of the story? i love it anyway ^^ nice twist, he being her imaginary friend and all!

really... interesting
but good anyway

Drugs are Bad M'kay
-Mr.Mackey

Wow!!! This is the best story evah!!! i luv it soooo mutch!! To bad its the end...

just so u know i read the whole thing and that was one of the best stories i have ever read and i hate reading long stories unless they are really go ( of coures) for 1 out of 10 i give it a 1000000000 *i have no clue what number that is* tell me wen u find out *u don't have to*

WOW nice story just 1 question did u put cony instead of seth or am i seeing things

NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Alte u son of a dog!!!!

i love my dad

Wow! Great Ending! Man... I wish my Imaginary friend would become real for me =(

Just jokin'. MAN is there anything you CAN'T do well, Pie?

I counted up the number of pages this would be(counted on my computer) and it came out as 93 pages!! Congradulations!! *claps for pie*

Good choice,Rie.

YAY!!!!new chapter!!I really liked this!

Beautiful! I really love it, Pie-sama, you did a wonderful job on this, keep up your excellent work!!

am going to read next chapt-wait a min...THERES NO CHAPTER YET?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
plz write more,pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!*falls on knees*OW! crap!THIS ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOX!!!

DIE,ALTE!!!!!!!!YOU SHALL DIE!!!
*shoots Alte with bazooka*

aw,man,this story kicks butt!!
(im a kid_i cuss,my sis squeals,i get in trouble)

you can do it,Rie!!!i'll help!!
*goes to missingpersons.com*
seeeeeeeee,its riiiiiight here!!
*points finger at imaginary page*

*huggles self*the confession has finally come.SETH LOVES RIE!

YAAAAAY,SETHS BAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!IM SO FRIKKIN HAPPY I COULD DANCE TO POP!!!ONLY I WONT!!ONLY MY SIS LIKES THAT STUFF IN MY HOUSE!!!!!!!!*huggles Seth*i wish i had someone like you

SETH!!!!!!*huggles Seth*RIE LOVES YOU,SETH!!!!!!

SEEEEEETH!!!!COME BAAAAAACK!!!
*sob*WE MISS YOU!!SO DOES RIE!!!

*sniffs*poor Seth.RIE YOU MORON!
YOU HURT THE POOR THINGS FEELINGS!!!!*smacks Rie*

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!
Seth loves her!!*huggles Seth*I'm so proud of you!!

oh,cute,Rie!!u have admirers!!!!
Rie:i do not!!shut up,*****!!

in ur ugly face,*****!!!!!!GO RIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i wish my dad was like that...
i dont see him half the time....
something like this happened to me once...i saw some guy on my bed sreamin at me to wake up,but then i actually did.*sweatdrop*u rock,Pie-chan!!!!

GO RIE!!!!!GO RIE,GO RIE,GO RIE,
WHOOT,WHOOT!GO RIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
shove the plastics' plastic in their faces!!!!
u rock,Pie-chan!!

this story could be a Newberry Award winner,this ROX!!!

DIE FANNY!!!BURN IN **** WITH KRISTEN KELSEY AND YOUR LITTLE FRIENDS AND HER LITTLE FRIENDS!!
AND YOUR LITTLE SUICIDAL BOYFRIEND,YOU PLASTIC!!!! *stabs all dose ppl like serial maniac**panting*great...job...
*passes out*

DUDE!AWESOME!!!!!!!

whoa,dats weird...id run too,Rei
...
OMG,I SEE HIM TOO!!!!!!!!RUN!!!!

Aye reminds me of my lil brother...he does stuff like that and my mom takes his side even though he's nine and does it on purpose.am going to read on!!*huggles Rei*i know how u feel about strangers!

i like this story, its really good ^^

*sobs* What happended to Seth!?!?!?!?!!? *is very sad, yet curious to see what happens*

Good story. I like it. A lot. ;)

i jope this doesn't mean this i the end of the story. PLEASE WRITE MORE! I LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH!!!

OMG!! This story makes me want to cry!! It's soooo good!! Go Kiki!!

omg! how do you do it! it just gets so good! i want to cry more and more... its so beautiful! This story is so well devoloped! Do you write it as you go or did you always know what was gonna happen? Its SO AWSOME! This is my all time favorite story! I read this OVER AND OVER!

Please dont end it, not soon!

God can induce amnesia? Thats new. Well, you learn something new everyday. Great chapter.

Awwww! So sweet, I love this chapter. Keep up the good writing, it's excellent!

*got first comment!*

Wow that was good!

*tear*

damn Riverwind lol.

love this.....dont take too long on the next chapter...

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Yay! ^^ New Chapter! ^^

It must be great to be visible. I wanna be in that wackie family.

woohoo!!!! man i think seth mighta gotten on rie's nerves.....o well....I LUB THIS STORY!!! ok....yuppers!!

First comment!!! *jumps happily around* A new chaptor!!! And I like it!!!! *sit and waits again for the next chaptor*

*GASPS* dit is zo COOL!!!!! *gaat zitten wachten voor het nieuwe hoofdstuk*

It rocks

Aw man... I just broke out into tears at the last sentance!! I hope this book NEVER ends!!

Aww! That's so cute! I wish I had a guy like that, a guy who fallows me around and sticks up for me! I don't even live close to my guy... *cries* I can't wait to read more! More of this and more of RAY!!! YAY!!!

Im so happy that hes gunna be ok! Excellently written, I can t wait to read more, keep it up!
Blessing of Success and Happiness!
~Koikaji

yayz. im glad seth is visoble. i hope he survives....

yayz. im glad seth is visoble. i hope he survives....

I must know MOREEE.

WOOHOO!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! IT IS AWESOME!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!! I WONDER WHAT HAPPENED THAT HE 'MEMBERS??? O WELL GUESS ILL JUST HAVE TO WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

O.O HE REMEMBERS@@ -spazzes out- I LOVE THIS STORY.. Please update more, Pie-sama! ^_^

oooooooh *jumps* i really can't wait till the next chapter!! ^__^ it's soooo good!! ^__^
erhm.. There will be a next chapter right??

THANK YOU! OMG I'm SOOO HAPPY! What will happen to Seth? Will they always be together? What does he remember? You know... I always want you to draw a picture of them, but that would ruin the whole imagination effect. So i understand why you dont. ^_^ I REALLY LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT CHAPTER! Wow... Amazing... your a writer and an artist! You should write books!

I LOVE this story! can't wait to read more. LOVE LOVE LOVE!!! :D yay, Seth is visable! love them all! except Alt >:(

Eep, that didn't show up!

Like I said,I LOVE this story, and your work!

Keep it up and update soon!

Love you, Pien! =)

PLEASE! WRITE MORE! I BEG YOU! I CHECK EVERYDAY! I looooooovveee this story and you are at the best part so far, you cant just STOP! This is beautiful work, no more waiting! T_T Tis i am sorry...


I LOVE YOUR STORY!

SETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;_;

oh sorry, where do you get your inspiration* =P
oooh, weird, it's 17.30 on the site.. XD i didn't lie about the time! =P

OMG!! I luf this story!! I read 18 chapters in a row O.O!! it's 2.30 in the morning *is falling from her chair* Where did you get your inspiration?? Man, I'm soo jealous! More more more!!
Seth may not die ;_;

ack! so....long...cliffhanger.........*rolls over and faints*

aww so sweet. but rie reminds me of almost everything like me! distant mean and stuff and the same feeling i had when someone comes into your life like that.... no control over what you do or whats happening...

Rie is like me, always alone. I wish i had a friend like Seth!!

EHHHH!! SETH!

Please update soon, such a big Cliffhanger! Feh!

That's so sad! But Seth's visible!!!! YAY! >.> DON'T DIE!!!!

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
Its awesome!!^^

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seth can't die! He just can't! Because,because, because-he just can't!!!!!

AHHHHHH!!!! ok first of all.....I LOVE THIS STORY!!! its sooooooooooooo good!!!! i kept coming home and jumping on the compy to read more and more!!! but this last chapter made me wanna cry now i gotta know wat happens next!!!!! SSSEEEEETTTTTTTHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! *i love seth....he is awesome!!!!!*

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!! Erm... please?

Wondergal

*falls over*

NOOOOOO!!! DON"T DIE SETH!!! DON"T YOU DARE DIE!!! *crys*

ooo gettin really good. I wonder whats up w/ the boy

I knew a girl like this. She doesn't have any friends, and she always is reading n stuff. I tryed to be friends with her, but she doesn't really care for me. Oh well, good story. I'll keep reading ^^

DON'T DIE SETH! RIE LOVES YOUS YOU! SETH COOPER I LOVE YOU >.< that came out wrong SETH COOPER RIE NEEDS YOU SHE LOVES YOU!

Aww.. i've got tears in my eyes, and i don't usually cry.. This made me so sad..! But he's visible.. Ah, this is such a great love story.. ^_^

I CRIED I REALLY CRIED! OMG! Seth! They can see him! He is there! She's NOT crazy! He jumped in front of her... Omg... *tears...* I cant belive it! This chapter is too short! NO PLEASE WRITE MORE! I'm crying and i'm angry and i NEED MORE! Please! Please pienemien!

This is the best story ive ever read...

Como

OMG HE NEEDS TO LIVE!! LIVE SETH LIVE!!! lol and WONDERFUL story, as always ^_^

OMG! Seth's visible!!! This chapter is so sad! I'm trying very hard to stop myself from crying!!! Poor Seth!I hope he's alright!! Poor Rie, this wouldn't have happened if Marten hadn't insisted on getting back together with Fanny... Hey! I've got first comment! WHOO! *first comment dance*

Yay! Marten can take that and put it in a sack and beat it with a tuba. Or something. Great chapter!!

Love your story! I hope you update soon! Seth is so cool!

PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!! If you don't, I'll cry... :( lol
the story is AMAZING

Good chapter... I want her to tell Marten and make him jealous! XD Can't wait for more!

yaaaaaayyy another chapter, keep it up, Pie-sama!
I cant wait for the next chapter, the wait is really worth it! ^^
Smooches Pooches!
~Koikaji

Love it!! and Rie is right,let Marten be popular,and just let Seth be her Boyfriend,haha!^^good job Pien!

~Sannetangel

I persuaded that I love this story ^__^ know why? cause whenever I see a new chapter I always jump out of my seat while yelling: NEW CHAPTER! NEW CHAPTER and then I get all happy inside :P yep, its proof enough for me

BWAHAHA! I get first comment--- as always, I love this story, it's so awesome

OMG!!! keep going with this story, I love it!!!! ^_^

i like this story write moreeeeeeeeee!!!!
pwease?
ow en je nieuwe comic lijkt me ook erug leuk ^.^

YAY!!! SETH COOPER! I yelled when isaw the title, 'OMIGAWD!!! Seth's last name!' My family just stared O.O Can't wait for more!

yaaaaaayyy! New chappie, excellently written as usual. I like it, but the spelling makes it kinda hard to read sometimes, but I know you *probably* didn't grow up on English so its OK. And yayyy I love whats going on between them.
~Koikaji

I agree with ya on that for some point, but I think Seth and Rie have reached the Teaching Level, so he can tease her.

but why did seth call rie a dog? sure it was a joke but he should have a little more respect then that.....the only one that should be aloud to call rie a dog is rie

jeuJ!! nog een hoofdstuk,schrijf meeeeeer !! dit verhaal is te gek!

Gawd!! i love this story!! goed zo! ^^

AWE!!! I love that. I can't wait for the next chapter.

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!111111!!!!!!!!11!ONE!!!
yesh! I cant wait for the next chapter! excellently written.!
Smooches Pooches!
~Koikaji

OMFG! *fuzzy* I luff this! =3 "One day you con make him jealous" XD Yay YAY Rie and Seth^-^

yeah...*goosebumps...* you worried me there...i almost thought 14 was the last chapter...YAYNESS please, PLEASE keep writing...please? I love this story so much. I actually CRIED when i read this story...I LOVE this story. Please...write more. You are so talented. An artist AND a writer. And your pretty. I wish i was you!

arrrrrrr its sooooo cute ^_^ such a loving moment wake up Rie and stop ignoring that u love him just say it already

I loves the Seth! Your really good at writing! If I was her I'd kiss him and not put up a fight. You should draw Seth and Rie ^^ It would look great like alwaya

wow that was great! for some reason seth really really reminds me of ryan! like in almost everyway...almost...especially the glomping thing....and seth seems to like thinking of plans of doom for marten lol O__O

WOW!!! you are such a good writer (and drawer) this gave me goosebumps!!! i can't wait for the next chapter!!! keep it up =3

Teenage Dirtbag by Wheatus!!! the second i saw that i was like, HEY!!! "Im just a teenage dirtbag baby, come with me friday, dont say maybe," i love that song. bobabedadumdedadoo! Is there any more? b/c you could leave it or continue with the way you ended it. Please continue, I loves i. ^^
~Koikaji

OMG YESSSHHHH. *gives you a sock and runs away squeeling*
this is amazing.
XD XD XD XD
~Koikaji

I like this story, its really good. made me smile, too much similarity to my life, have you been stalking me?
LMAO, j/k. Keep it up.
~Koikaji

hey I just found a song that really resemble's this story: take a look at the english lyrics

www.animelyrics.com/game/finalfantasyx2/realemotion.htm



(I find it resembles seth and rie's life after seth came into the picture, GREAT story by the way! ^__^ its the best story eva! second best to the ray comic tough cause your comic rules all!)

aw! yay seth is back! isn't she naked though? or without a bra at least... i like marten better because he isn't trying to get in rie's pants lol... that sounded like a motherly thing to say

Heh, she's so mean to marten, he's okay, but seth is cooler! He's aryian!

YAY!!! Don't let this be the end.. Keep writing more! And draw Seth and Rie! They're so cute together!! ^^ Awesome chapter!

I really hope you draw Rie and Seth.. That'd be awesome!! ^^ And Seth's back..!! YAAYY!!! ^^

Yes, i really like this story! ^^ Seth is so loveable, and Rie's just like any other teenage girl.. I can really relate to her.

Nooo.. Poor Seth.. =[

AWWW!!!!! -dances like a mad cow- HE LOVES HERRR!!! >w

Oo, so he's a taller guy, hm..? This story is so cool! ^^

YEAH!! Go Rie!! ^^ Finally she's yelling at them for a change! ^^

Aw, that makes me wish I got along with my dad.. =[ Oh well. Great Chapter. ^^

XD The part where she punches him made me laugh. I love Seth! He's so adorable!! ^^

Aww!! ^^ Seth's so cute! -squeal-

Oiii, i really like this story! ^^ It's so cool!

im so happy! I was WAITING for seth to come back and this chapter is perfect. THIS ISNT THE END IS IT? I REALLY love this story so PLEASE dont stop it without a nice ending! ^_^ I'm ALWAYS cheking for more...

YOUR BIGGEST WRITING FAN!!!

Como

xD This is awsome!!! xD I luff it!! more!

xD I am in my happy place!!! xD

Awwww! That is so cute. Their relationship reminds me of a song, 1000 miles by Vanessa Carlton. *humming* It's really good.... I can never right stories, get so far and get a mental block, so yay for you! Keep it up, ish really really good! I've probably said that already, but the heat is getting to me and I can't think properly, so ah well....

YAY!!! first comment! man, i love this story sooooo much, i can't wait for the next chapter!!! i just can't get enough of it! =3 seth is so cute at the end :)

i love this story so much! i'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter =3

I love your story and I even printed out a hard copy, so I can read it anywhere. I just love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Say are you going to draw these characters??I would love to see what they look like!!!!!!Wonderful story!

Great chapter! I squeled when I saw this! Weird no? I blame Virgo! Dunno why but I know it's her fault somehow! lol!
Wondergal

YAY! It's happy, but that's horrible what happened to her... and Seth is gone *tear* Great chapter as always, can't wait for more.

yipee!

When i saw the chapter up i freaked. But my mom was about to take me somewhere so i spent about 45 mins looking for it on a google search using her cell phone. But i FOUND IT! So sorry i couldnt comment earlier, and i await some more SOON! I still check everyday. THank you for writing it!

me luffs all off them =3 love this story, it should be published!!!

*melts* i cant wait for the date!!! *dies*

I lurves this story. Aye soudns so cute, great big choclate eyes. Seth! Come back! I luffs j00

I love this story not only for its creativity but the wonderful realistic characters in it. Its based on true feelings and I love it for that!

sorry for the delay!
Heh, Im so happy and suprised you like this story so much

WRITE MORE!!! cummon i check this a lot.Couldn't you update pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee???? *is wanting to see rei and seth together* *reads story over again* *o* oooooo

OMG!!! this is so awsome!!! WRITE MORE!!! *read it all*

I luff the Seth! Hes so tooty, You ahve given me inspiration to write a story!

Aww...cmon... I check this everyday and i'm getting a bit discouraged! PLEASE Pienemien-chan! ^_^ I REALLY love this story and i could use a new chapter soon! PLEASE GIVE ME SOMTHING TO LOOK FORWARD TO!!!! *begs*

Aww...cmon... I check this everyday and i'm getting a bit discouraged! PLEASE Pienemien-chan! ^_^ I REALLY love this story and i could use a new chapter soon! PLEASE GIVE ME SOMTHING TO LOOK FORWARD TO!!!! *begs*

Aww...cmon... I check this everyday and i'm getting a bit discouraged! PLEASE Pienemien-chan! ^_^ I REALLY love this story and i could use a new chapter soon! PLEASE GIVE ME SOMTHING TO LOOK FORWARD TO!!!! *begs*

Pien-chan needs to add more chapters! X3

Nooo! Seth come BACK!! Me loves seth... I wish i had an invisible boyfriend... *sigh* that would rock...

OMG! I read this whole story! Your such a good writer. I dont cry often and this story made tears fall. It was so amazing. Keep it up! I yearn to read more!

Awe... poor Seth... *tear tear* You will love Seth... *is watching Star Wars* ^_^() Good chapter as always!

Squeak!!!! Me heart fluff XD more more!! ^-^ Poor Seth T_T Wh00t Stephen King's "Carrie"

*first comment dance* this is so thrilling! i love it!!! keep writing please!!! T.T poor seth

awe! That's so... SWEET! -^^- He wuvs her! *explodes* YAY!! *dances*

awwwwww its soooo cute and about time *looks at watch* it took him long enough meh great chapter cant wait for ries reaction

*first comment dance* AWWW!!! he loves her!!! thats so sweet! i love your writing (as well as your pics) i absolutly love this story!!! keep writing!!! Love it so much! you are an awsome writer! keep it up!

ooooo! what if its a set up?! this is getting more and more exiting! i can't wait to read more!

Oh Cool! Everytime I tried to read this story it always messed up! But now I can finnaly read it! YAY It awesome! poor Rie, I can relate to her, *faves story* Sounds like romance is comin' *warm and fuzzy feeling* I wuv romantic fluff! XDDDD Very well written I can barely beli