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Rie's Horrible Life by Pienemien
View as PDF, Submitted: 2005-03-16, Updated: 2005-10-13, Chapters: 21, Size: 245K, Words: 50618, Comments: 211, Views: 1101   
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Rie's life isn't like she wants it to be. She doesn't feel loved or needed. Till somebody shows up who claims he needs her
Chapters
1 - Rie's Horrible Life - Submitted 2005-03-16 Updated: 2005-03-16 - 142 views, 2337 words, 12k
2 - Losing It - Submitted 2005-03-16 Updated: 2005-03-16 - 95 views, 2608 words, 13k
3 - Forcing Your Way In - Submitted 2005-03-16 Updated: 2005-03-16 - 109 views, 2208 words, 11k
4 - Crazy Girl - Submitted 2005-03-16 Updated: 2005-03-16 - 100 views, 2119 words, 10k
5 - Morning Before School - Submitted 2005-03-22 Updated: 2005-03-22 - 114 views, 2462 words, 12k
6 - Fight With A Teacher - Submitted 2005-04-16 Updated: 2005-04-16 - 89 views, 2861 words, 14k
7 - Ignoring The Family - Submitted 2005-04-16 Updated: 2005-04-16 - 84 views, 2962 words, 14k
8 - Three Blond Boobs - Submitted 2005-04-22 Updated: 2005-04-22 - 114 views, 2170 words, 11k
9 - Swings Are For Babies - Submitted 2005-05-01 Updated: 2005-05-01 - 92 views, 2425 words, 12k
10 - Stay Away For Today - Submitted 2005-05-16 Updated: 2005-05-16 - 108 views, 2532 words, 12k
11 - Can You Blame Him? - Submitted 2005-05-18 Updated: 2005-05-18 - 108 views, 2417 words, 12k
12 - Icecream Fight - Submitted 2005-06-10 Updated: 2005-06-10 - 79 views, 1968 words, 10k
13 - Going On A Date - Submitted 2005-06-17 Updated: 2005-06-17 - 72 views, 1744 words, 8k
14 - No Matter What Happens - Submitted 2005-06-18 Updated: 2005-06-18 - 88 views, 2038 words, 10k
15 - Sharing A First Kiss - Submitted 2005-07-01 Updated: 2005-07-01 - 117 views, 2891 words, 14k
16 - Seth Cooper - Submitted 2005-07-11 Updated: 2005-07-11 - 93 views, 1914 words, 9k
17 - Play Chess Fairyboy - Submitted 2005-07-14 Updated: 2005-07-14 - 79 views, 2400 words, 11k
18 - Alte Goes Mad - Submitted 2005-08-24 Updated: 2005-08-24 - 107 views, 1983 words, 10k
19 - Hospital Visit In PJ's - Submitted 2005-09-15 Updated: 2005-09-15 - 97 views, 2966 words, 14k
20 - No Eating, No Sleeping - Submitted 2005-10-11 Updated: 2005-10-11 - 85 views, 3012 words, 14k
21 - Imagine And Forget - Submitted 2005-10-13 Updated: 2005-10-13 - 132 views, 2601 words, 12k

211 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
_theater_freak_147
Aug 21, 2006 05:55 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 21
That was beautiful. Great job! ^^
 
_theater_freak_147
Aug 21, 2006 05:34 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 18
OH MY GOD!!! SETH DON'T DIE! WHY ARE YOU VISABLE???? DON'T DIE!!!
 
_theater_freak_147
Aug 21, 2006 05:16 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 15
Yay! That is awesome! Finally! Ok I'm off to read the next chapter! Bye!
 
_theater_freak_147
Aug 21, 2006 05:06 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 14
Awwwwwwww...^^
 
_theater_freak_147
Aug 21, 2006 04:49 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 11
Noooooo!!! Rie and Seth are supposed to be together!!! ^^
 
_theater_freak_147
Aug 21, 2006 04:41 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 10
YAY!!!!!!!! That is awesome!!!
 
_theater_freak_147
Aug 21, 2006 03:36 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 8
Yay! Go Rie!
 
_theater_freak_147
Aug 21, 2006 03:31 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 7
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...
 
_theater_freak_147
Aug 21, 2006 08:45 AM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 5
Yay! Ok I'm going to go read the next chapter now.
 
_theater_freak_147
Aug 21, 2006 08:38 AM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 4
Yay! She and Seth better end up together... ^^
 
_theater_freak_147
Aug 21, 2006 08:31 AM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 3
Oh my god this story is really good!
 
_theater_freak_147
Aug 21, 2006 08:25 AM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 2
Yay! I love your style of writing!
 
_theater_freak_147
Aug 21, 2006 08:18 AM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 1
This is so good!!! I am going to read the next chapter bye!
 
KitsuneFlamez
Aug 1, 2006 08:29 AM by: KitsuneFlamez chapter 15
AWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!that wuz so sweet n altho it was their 1st...2nd kiss... it was filled with so much passion!!!! This is my fave. part of the story now!!! awesome job!!!
 
KitsuneFlamez
Aug 1, 2006 07:48 AM by: KitsuneFlamez chapter 13
Woo-Hoo!!!!! SETH!!! UR BAC!!!!!!!! .... a little p/o.... but UR BAC NONE THE LESS!!!! YAYZ!!!!! lol!
 
KitsuneFlamez
Jul 31, 2006 06:17 PM by: KitsuneFlamez chapter 11
... NOoooo!!! Please tell me Seth is cioming back right?!?!?!!!! I Miss him already!!!!!!!!
 
KitsuneFlamez
Jul 31, 2006 05:41 PM by: KitsuneFlamez chapter 10
0_0!!!!!!YAYZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I FEEL SO FREAKIN HAPPY RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!! RIGHT ON SETH!!!!!!!! U ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!>_< THIS JUST KEEPS GETTIN BETTER N BETTER!!!!
 
KitsuneFlamez
Jul 31, 2006 03:49 PM by: KitsuneFlamez chapter 7
.... *sniffle*.... that was truely the most heart tugging thing i've ever read. it reminded me of me and my father...*tears up again* i luv my dad!!!! please keep this up! you'll really go places with this!
 
KitsuneFlamez
Jul 30, 2006 04:56 PM by: KitsuneFlamez chapter 6
Yeah Rie!!!! Perfect leader type for all of us weird pplz!!!
 
KitsuneFlamez
Jul 30, 2006 03:53 PM by: KitsuneFlamez chapter 5
Pic of Seth! Pic of Seth!! i want to c wat he looks lyk! he sounds so freakin' sweet!!!!*hugz*>_< lol! luv story still!
 
KitsuneFlamez
Jul 30, 2006 02:39 PM by: KitsuneFlamez chapter 4
omg...!!ha ha... i reall am enjoying this story! i luv it lots! please promiss not to leave any cliff hangers!.... i heart your storie tho!! so keep up the good work!^^
 
StephAlanPoe
Apr 24, 2006 10:26 AM by: StephAlanPoe chapter 21
Awww. Now this story is over, I don't have anything to look forward to after school... I give you A+! Just like YaoiPrincess's Ray Fanart story called "Sunday Morning After". Check it out, people, it ROCKS!
Love the story, made me cry.
;-)
 
Rikus_Lover_MINE
Mar 26, 2006 05:13 PM by: Rikus_Lover_MINE chapter 21
YAY!
omg
Is this the last chapter?
Is this it?
NO MORE?!?!?
nuuuuuuu!!!!
Well Kiki-sama must be busy with new Ray pages and everything, so maybe Kiki-sama donsn't have time to update on here....
OR MAYBE IT REALLY IS OVERZ!!!!!!
 
axemsir
Mar 10, 2006 03:28 AM by: axemsir chapter 21
is this the end of the story? i love it anyway ^^ nice twist, he being her imaginary friend and all!
 
DrNefarious
Feb 20, 2006 07:59 PM by: DrNefarious chapter 3
really... interesting
but good anyway

Drugs are Bad M'kay
-Mr.Mackey
 
Miss_M
Feb 19, 2006 08:38 AM by: Miss_M chapter 21
Wow!!! This is the best story evah!!! i luv it soooo mutch!! To bad its the end...
 
TailsNejiswife
Jan 30, 2006 07:14 PM by: TailsNejiswife chapter 21
just so u know i read the whole thing and that was one of the best stories i have ever read and i hate reading long stories unless they are really go ( of coures) for 1 out of 10 i give it a 1000000000 *i have no clue what number that is* tell me wen u find out *u don't have to*
 
TailsNejiswife
Jan 29, 2006 03:04 PM by: TailsNejiswife chapter 6
WOW nice story just 1 question did u put cony instead of seth or am i seeing things
 
llama_boy
Jan 29, 2006 11:15 AM by: llama_boy chapter 18
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Alte u son of a dog!!!!
 
bek-ee
Dec 5, 2005 12:50 AM by: bek-ee chapter 7
i love my dad
 
WishGranter
Dec 1, 2005 02:16 PM by: WishGranter chapter 21
Wow! Great Ending! Man... I wish my Imaginary friend would become real for me =(

Just jokin'. MAN is there anything you CAN'T do well, Pie?

I counted up the number of pages this would be(counted on my computer) and it came out as 93 pages!! Congradulations!! *claps for pie*
 
mandy94t
Nov 23, 2005 05:09 PM by: mandy94t chapter 21
Good choice,Rie.
 
mandy94t
Nov 23, 2005 05:01 PM by: mandy94t chapter 20
YAY!!!!new chapter!!I really liked this!
 
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O
Nov 7, 2005 05:18 PM by: Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O chapter 21
Beautiful! I really love it, Pie-sama, you did a wonderful job on this, keep up your excellent work!!
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 11:45 AM by: mandy94t chapter 19
am going to read next chapt-wait a min...THERES NO CHAPTER YET?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
plz write more,pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!*falls on knees*OW! crap!THIS ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOX!!!
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 11:30 AM by: mandy94t chapter 18
DIE,ALTE!!!!!!!!YOU SHALL DIE!!!
*shoots Alte with bazooka*
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 11:20 AM by: mandy94t chapter 17
aw,man,this story kicks butt!!
(im a kid_i cuss,my sis squeals,i get in trouble)
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 11:09 AM by: mandy94t chapter 16
you can do it,Rie!!!i'll help!!
*goes to missingpersons.com*
seeeeeeeee,its riiiiiight here!!
*points finger at imaginary page*
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 11:01 AM by: mandy94t chapter 15
*huggles self*the confession has finally come.SETH LOVES RIE!
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 10:50 AM by: mandy94t chapter 14
YAAAAAY,SETHS BAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!IM SO FRIKKIN HAPPY I COULD DANCE TO POP!!!ONLY I WONT!!ONLY MY SIS LIKES THAT STUFF IN MY HOUSE!!!!!!!!*huggles Seth*i wish i had someone like you
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 10:43 AM by: mandy94t chapter 13
SETH!!!!!!*huggles Seth*RIE LOVES YOU,SETH!!!!!!
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 10:37 AM by: mandy94t chapter 12
SEEEEEETH!!!!COME BAAAAAACK!!!
*sob*WE MISS YOU!!SO DOES RIE!!!
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 10:28 AM by: mandy94t chapter 11
*sniffs*poor Seth.RIE YOU MORON!
YOU HURT THE POOR THINGS FEELINGS!!!!*smacks Rie*
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 10:02 AM by: mandy94t chapter 10
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!
Seth loves her!!*huggles Seth*I'm so proud of you!!
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 09:46 AM by: mandy94t chapter 9
oh,cute,Rie!!u have admirers!!!!
Rie:i do not!!shut up,*****!!
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 09:35 AM by: mandy94t chapter 8
in ur ugly face,*****!!!!!!GO RIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 09:20 AM by: mandy94t chapter 7
i wish my dad was like that...
i dont see him half the time....
something like this happened to me once...i saw some guy on my bed sreamin at me to wake up,but then i actually did.*sweatdrop*u rock,Pie-chan!!!!
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 08:56 AM by: mandy94t chapter 6
GO RIE!!!!!GO RIE,GO RIE,GO RIE,
WHOOT,WHOOT!GO RIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
shove the plastics' plastic in their faces!!!!
u rock,Pie-chan!!
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 08:43 AM by: mandy94t chapter 5
this story could be a Newberry Award winner,this ROX!!!
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 08:30 AM by: mandy94t chapter 4
DIE FANNY!!!BURN IN **** WITH KRISTEN KELSEY AND YOUR LITTLE FRIENDS AND HER LITTLE FRIENDS!!
AND YOUR LITTLE SUICIDAL BOYFRIEND,YOU PLASTIC!!!! *stabs all dose ppl like serial maniac**panting*great...job...
*passes out*
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 08:18 AM by: mandy94t chapter 3
DUDE!AWESOME!!!!!!!
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 08:10 AM by: mandy94t chapter 2
whoa,dats weird...id run too,Rei
...
OMG,I SEE HIM TOO!!!!!!!!RUN!!!!
 
mandy94t
Oct 22, 2005 07:56 AM by: mandy94t chapter 1
Aye reminds me of my lil brother...he does stuff like that and my mom takes his side even though he's nine and does it on purpose.am going to read on!!*huggles Rei*i know how u feel about strangers!
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Oct 21, 2005 04:18 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 4
i like this story, its really good ^^
 
Bugaloo
Oct 16, 2005 12:56 PM by: Bugaloo chapter 13
*sobs* What happended to Seth!?!?!?!?!!? *is very sad, yet curious to see what happens*

Good story. I like it. A lot. ;)
 
bek-ee
Oct 13, 2005 10:31 PM by: bek-ee chapter 21
i jope this doesn't mean this i the end of the story. PLEASE WRITE MORE! I LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH!!!
 
Tsuki_Tenshi
Oct 13, 2005 07:25 PM by: Tsuki_Tenshi chapter 21
OMG!! This story makes me want to cry!! It's soooo good!! Go Kiki!!
 
Como
Oct 13, 2005 12:14 PM by: Como chapter 21
omg! how do you do it! it just gets so good! i want to cry more and more... its so beautiful! This story is so well devoloped! Do you write it as you go or did you always know what was gonna happen? Its SO AWSOME! This is my all time favorite story! I read this OVER AND OVER!

Please dont end it, not soon!
 
SoaringKitty
Oct 13, 2005 11:16 AM by: SoaringKitty chapter 21
God can induce amnesia? Thats new. Well, you learn something new everyday. Great chapter.
 
Ancient_Naiad_Wishes
Oct 13, 2005 10:02 AM by: Ancient_Naiad_Wishes chapter 21
Awwww! So sweet, I love this chapter. Keep up the good writing, it's excellent!
 
Pliva
Oct 13, 2005 03:14 AM by: Pliva chapter 21
*got first comment!*

Wow that was good!

*tear*
 
Xx_AviloriA_xX
Oct 11, 2005 07:54 PM by: Xx_AviloriA_xX chapter 20
damn Riverwind lol.

love this.....dont take too long on the next chapter...
 
Riverwind
Oct 11, 2005 12:51 PM by: Riverwind chapter 20
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I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Oct 11, 2005 11:39 AM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 20
Yay! ^^ New Chapter! ^^
 
SoaringKitty
Oct 11, 2005 11:01 AM by: SoaringKitty chapter 20
It must be great to be visible. I wanna be in that wackie family.
 
redheadblusher
Oct 11, 2005 08:17 AM by: redheadblusher chapter 20
woohoo!!!! man i think seth mighta gotten on rie's nerves.....o well....I LUB THIS STORY!!! ok....yuppers!!
 
Tamao
Oct 11, 2005 03:51 AM by: Tamao chapter 20
First comment!!! *jumps happily around* A new chaptor!!! And I like it!!!! *sit and waits again for the next chaptor*
 
Tamao
Oct 5, 2005 09:41 AM by: Tamao chapter 19
*GASPS* dit is zo COOL!!!!! *gaat zitten wachten voor het nieuwe hoofdstuk*
 
c_p_p
Sep 30, 2005 05:21 PM by: c_p_p chapter 8
It rocks
 
WishGranter
Sep 24, 2005 05:31 PM by: WishGranter chapter 10
Aw man... I just broke out into tears at the last sentance!! I hope this book NEVER ends!!
 
WishGranter
Sep 23, 2005 06:41 PM by: WishGranter chapter 4
Aww! That's so cute! I wish I had a guy like that, a guy who fallows me around and sticks up for me! I don't even live close to my guy... *cries* I can't wait to read more! More of this and more of RAY!!! YAY!!!
 
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O
Sep 22, 2005 03:59 PM by: Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O chapter 19
Im so happy that hes gunna be ok! Excellently written, I can t wait to read more, keep it up!
Blessing of Success and Happiness!
~Koikaji
 
Xx_AviloriA_xX
Sep 16, 2005 11:02 PM by: Xx_AviloriA_xX chapter 19
yayz. im glad seth is visoble. i hope he survives....
 
Xx_AviloriA_xX
Sep 16, 2005 11:01 PM by: Xx_AviloriA_xX chapter 19
yayz. im glad seth is visoble. i hope he survives....
 
zefi
Sep 16, 2005 09:39 PM by: zefi chapter 19
I must know MOREEE.
 
redheadblusher
Sep 16, 2005 02:05 PM by: redheadblusher chapter 19
WOOHOO!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! IT IS AWESOME!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!! I WONDER WHAT HAPPENED THAT HE 'MEMBERS??? O WELL GUESS ILL JUST HAVE TO WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Sep 16, 2005 12:40 PM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 19
O.O HE REMEMBERS@@ -spazzes out- I LOVE THIS STORY.. Please update more, Pie-sama! ^_^
 
Crissy
Sep 16, 2005 12:22 PM by: Crissy chapter 19
oooooooh *jumps* i really can't wait till the next chapter!! ^__^ it's soooo good!! ^__^
erhm.. There will be a next chapter right??
 
Como
Sep 16, 2005 06:52 AM by: Como chapter 19
THANK YOU! OMG I'm SOOO HAPPY! What will happen to Seth? Will they always be together? What does he remember? You know... I always want you to draw a picture of them, but that would ruin the whole imagination effect. So i understand why you dont. ^_^ I REALLY LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT CHAPTER! Wow... Amazing... your a writer and an artist! You should write books!
 
bek-ee
Sep 16, 2005 12:15 AM by: bek-ee chapter 19
I LOVE this story! can't wait to read more. LOVE LOVE LOVE!!! :D yay, Seth is visable! love them all! except Alt >:(
 
hoshiaika_the_half_wolf
Sep 15, 2005 04:28 PM by: hoshiaika_the_half_wolf chapter 19
Eep, that didn't show up!

Like I said,I LOVE this story, and your work!

Keep it up and update soon!

Love you, Pien! =)
 
hoshiaika_the_half_wolf
Sep 15, 2005 04:19 PM by: hoshiaika_the_half_wolf chapter 19
 
Como
Sep 13, 2005 05:24 PM by: Como chapter 18
PLEASE! WRITE MORE! I BEG YOU! I CHECK EVERYDAY! I looooooovveee this story and you are at the best part so far, you cant just STOP! This is beautiful work, no more waiting! T_T Tis i am sorry...


I LOVE YOUR STORY!
 
zefi
Sep 11, 2005 08:24 PM by: zefi chapter 18
SETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;_;
 
Crissy
Sep 10, 2005 05:36 PM by: Crissy chapter 18
oh sorry, where do you get your inspiration* =P
oooh, weird, it's 17.30 on the site.. XD i didn't lie about the time! =P
 
Crissy
Sep 10, 2005 05:32 PM by: Crissy chapter 18
OMG!! I luf this story!! I read 18 chapters in a row O.O!! it's 2.30 in the morning *is falling from her chair* Where did you get your inspiration?? Man, I'm soo jealous! More more more!!
Seth may not die ;_;
 
Xx_AviloriA_xX
Sep 8, 2005 02:48 PM by: Xx_AviloriA_xX chapter 18
ack! so....long...cliffhanger.........*rolls over and faints*
 
Xx_AviloriA_xX
Sep 5, 2005 04:22 PM by: Xx_AviloriA_xX chapter 15
aww so sweet. but rie reminds me of almost everything like me! distant mean and stuff and the same feeling i had when someone comes into your life like that.... no control over what you do or whats happening...
 
Xx_AviloriA_xX
Sep 5, 2005 09:33 AM by: Xx_AviloriA_xX chapter 9
Rie is like me, always alone. I wish i had a friend like Seth!!
 
hoshiaika_the_half_wolf
Sep 3, 2005 04:35 PM by: hoshiaika_the_half_wolf chapter 18
EHHHH!! SETH!

Please update soon, such a big Cliffhanger! Feh!
 
MitsukaiOkeruOozora
Aug 31, 2005 01:44 PM by: MitsukaiOkeruOozora chapter 18
That's so sad! But Seth's visible!!!! YAY! >.> DON'T DIE!!!!
 
Sannetangel
Aug 28, 2005 02:54 AM by: Sannetangel chapter 18
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
Its awesome!!^^
 
shamenteen
Aug 27, 2005 06:54 AM by: shamenteen chapter 18
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seth can't die! He just can't! Because,because, because-he just can't!!!!!
 
redheadblusher
Aug 26, 2005 06:12 PM by: redheadblusher chapter 18
AHHHHHH!!!! ok first of all.....I LOVE THIS STORY!!! its sooooooooooooo good!!!! i kept coming home and jumping on the compy to read more and more!!! but this last chapter made me wanna cry now i gotta know wat happens next!!!!! SSSEEEEETTTTTTTHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! *i love seth....he is awesome!!!!!*
 
Jubilee_Wondergal_and_Virgo
Aug 26, 2005 11:55 AM by: Jubilee_Wondergal_and_Virgo chapter 18
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!! Erm... please?

Wondergal
 
SoaringKitty
Aug 26, 2005 06:11 AM by: SoaringKitty chapter 18
*falls over*
 
bek-ee
Aug 25, 2005 11:56 PM by: bek-ee chapter 18
NOOOOOO!!! DON"T DIE SETH!!! DON"T YOU DARE DIE!!! *crys*
 
clue_black_water
Aug 25, 2005 10:19 PM by: clue_black_water chapter 2
ooo gettin really good. I wonder whats up w/ the boy
 
clue_black_water
Aug 25, 2005 10:09 PM by: clue_black_water chapter 1
I knew a girl like this. She doesn't have any friends, and she always is reading n stuff. I tryed to be friends with her, but she doesn't really care for me. Oh well, good story. I'll keep reading ^^
 
Riverwind
Aug 25, 2005 07:58 PM by: Riverwind chapter 18
DON'T DIE SETH! RIE LOVES YOUS YOU! SETH COOPER I LOVE YOU >.< that came out wrong SETH COOPER RIE NEEDS YOU SHE LOVES YOU!
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Aug 25, 2005 07:38 PM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 18
Aww.. i've got tears in my eyes, and i don't usually cry.. This made me so sad..! But he's visible.. Ah, this is such a great love story.. ^_^
 
Como
Aug 24, 2005 07:44 PM by: Como chapter 18
I CRIED I REALLY CRIED! OMG! Seth! They can see him! He is there! She's NOT crazy! He jumped in front of her... Omg... *tears...* I cant belive it! This chapter is too short! NO PLEASE WRITE MORE! I'm crying and i'm angry and i NEED MORE! Please! Please pienemien!

This is the best story ive ever read...

Como
 
midnightfox
Aug 24, 2005 07:24 AM by: midnightfox chapter 18
OMG HE NEEDS TO LIVE!! LIVE SETH LIVE!!! lol and WONDERFUL story, as always ^_^
 
Ancient_Naiad_Wishes
Aug 24, 2005 04:18 AM by: Ancient_Naiad_Wishes chapter 18
OMG! Seth's visible!!! This chapter is so sad! I'm trying very hard to stop myself from crying!!! Poor Seth!I hope he's alright!! Poor Rie, this wouldn't have happened if Marten hadn't insisted on getting back together with Fanny... Hey! I've got first comment! WHOO! *first comment dance*
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Aug 16, 2005 12:25 PM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 17
Yay! Marten can take that and put it in a sack and beat it with a tuba. Or something. Great chapter!!
 
shamenteen
Jul 26, 2005 10:02 AM by: shamenteen chapter 17
Love your story! I hope you update soon! Seth is so cool!
 
midnightfox
Jul 24, 2005 11:52 AM by: midnightfox chapter 17
PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!! If you don't, I'll cry... :( lol
the story is AMAZING
 
MitsukaiOkeruOozora
Jul 15, 2005 04:48 PM by: MitsukaiOkeruOozora chapter 17
Good chapter... I want her to tell Marten and make him jealous! XD Can't wait for more!
 
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O
Jul 14, 2005 01:34 PM by: Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O chapter 17
yaaaaaayyy another chapter, keep it up, Pie-sama!
I cant wait for the next chapter, the wait is really worth it! ^^
Smooches Pooches!
~Koikaji
 
Sannetangel
Jul 14, 2005 11:53 AM by: Sannetangel chapter 17
Love it!! and Rie is right,let Marten be popular,and just let Seth be her Boyfriend,haha!^^good job Pien!

~Sannetangel
 
Avalice
Jul 14, 2005 10:22 AM by: Avalice chapter 17
I persuaded that I love this story ^__^ know why? cause whenever I see a new chapter I always jump out of my seat while yelling: NEW CHAPTER! NEW CHAPTER and then I get all happy inside :P yep, its proof enough for me
 
midnightfox
Jul 14, 2005 08:58 AM by: midnightfox chapter 17
BWAHAHA! I get first comment--- as always, I love this story, it's so awesome
 
midnightfox
Jul 14, 2005 08:10 AM by: midnightfox chapter 16
OMG!!! keep going with this story, I love it!!!! ^_^
 
erinn
Jul 14, 2005 01:36 AM by: erinn chapter 16
i like this story write moreeeeeeeeee!!!!
pwease?
ow en je nieuwe comic lijkt me ook erug leuk ^.^
 
MitsukaiOkeruOozora
Jul 13, 2005 06:21 PM by: MitsukaiOkeruOozora chapter 16
YAY!!! SETH COOPER! I yelled when isaw the title, 'OMIGAWD!!! Seth's last name!' My family just stared O.O Can't wait for more!
 
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O
Jul 13, 2005 11:28 AM by: Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O chapter 16
yaaaaaayyy! New chappie, excellently written as usual. I like it, but the spelling makes it kinda hard to read sometimes, but I know you *probably* didn't grow up on English so its OK. And yayyy I love whats going on between them.
~Koikaji
 
Pienemien
Jul 13, 2005 05:28 AM by: Pienemien chapter 16
I agree with ya on that for some point, but I think Seth and Rie have reached the Teaching Level, so he can tease her.
 
Avalice
Jul 12, 2005 08:40 AM by: Avalice chapter 16
but why did seth call rie a dog? sure it was a joke but he should have a little more respect then that.....the only one that should be aloud to call rie a dog is rie
 
Sannetangel
Jul 12, 2005 07:32 AM by: Sannetangel chapter 16
jeuJ!! nog een hoofdstuk,schrijf meeeeeer !! dit verhaal is te gek!
 
Sannetangel
Jul 10, 2005 06:46 AM by: Sannetangel chapter 15
Gawd!! i love this story!! goed zo! ^^
 
MitsukaiOkeruOozora
Jul 8, 2005 01:53 PM by: MitsukaiOkeruOozora chapter 15
AWE!!! I love that. I can't wait for the next chapter.
 
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O
Jul 7, 2005 04:36 PM by: Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O chapter 15
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!111111!!!!!!!!11!ONE!!!
yesh! I cant wait for the next chapter! excellently written.!
Smooches Pooches!
~Koikaji
 
LizzardQueeng
Jul 5, 2005 04:34 AM by: LizzardQueeng chapter 15
OMFG! *fuzzy* I luff this! =3 "One day you con make him jealous" XD Yay YAY Rie and Seth^-^
 
Como
Jul 3, 2005 01:20 PM by: Como chapter 15
yeah...*goosebumps...* you worried me there...i almost thought 14 was the last chapter...YAYNESS please, PLEASE keep writing...please? I love this story so much. I actually CRIED when i read this story...I LOVE this story. Please...write more. You are so talented. An artist AND a writer. And your pretty. I wish i was you!
 
S_dragon_master
Jul 3, 2005 02:01 AM by: S_dragon_master chapter 15
arrrrrrr its sooooo cute ^_^ such a loving moment wake up Rie and stop ignoring that u love him just say it already
 
Spugg
Jul 2, 2005 12:59 AM by: Spugg chapter 15
I loves the Seth! Your really good at writing! If I was her I'd kiss him and not put up a fight. You should draw Seth and Rie ^^ It would look great like alwaya
 
Avalice
Jul 1, 2005 09:42 PM by: Avalice chapter 15
wow that was great! for some reason seth really really reminds me of ryan! like in almost everyway...almost...especially the glomping thing....and seth seems to like thinking of plans of doom for marten lol O__O
 
bek-ee
Jul 1, 2005 06:09 PM by: bek-ee chapter 15
WOW!!! you are such a good writer (and drawer) this gave me goosebumps!!! i can't wait for the next chapter!!! keep it up =3
 
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O
Jun 29, 2005 03:15 PM by: Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O chapter 14
Teenage Dirtbag by Wheatus!!! the second i saw that i was like, HEY!!! "Im just a teenage dirtbag baby, come with me friday, dont say maybe," i love that song. bobabedadumdedadoo! Is there any more? b/c you could leave it or continue with the way you ended it. Please continue, I loves i. ^^
~Koikaji
 
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O
Jun 29, 2005 02:44 PM by: Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O chapter 10
OMG YESSSHHHH. *gives you a sock and runs away squeeling*
this is amazing.
XD XD XD XD
~Koikaji
 
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O
Jun 29, 2005 02:13 PM by: Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O chapter 5
I like this story, its really good. made me smile, too much similarity to my life, have you been stalking me?
LMAO, j/k. Keep it up.
~Koikaji
 
Avalice
Jun 28, 2005 06:07 PM by: Avalice chapter 14
hey I just found a song that really resemble's this story: take a look at the english lyrics

www.animelyrics.com/game/finalfantasyx2/realemotion.htm



(I find it resembles seth and rie's life after seth came into the picture, GREAT story by the way! ^__^ its the best story eva! second best to the ray comic tough cause your comic rules all!)
 
MitsukaiOkeruOozora
Jun 21, 2005 12:19 AM by: MitsukaiOkeruOozora chapter 14
aw! yay seth is back! isn't she naked though? or without a bra at least... i like marten better because he isn't trying to get in rie's pants lol... that sounded like a motherly thing to say
 
MitsukaiOkeruOozora
Jun 21, 2005 12:06 AM by: MitsukaiOkeruOozora chapter 13
Heh, she's so mean to marten, he's okay, but seth is cooler! He's aryian!
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Jun 20, 2005 05:13 PM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 14
YAY!!! Don't let this be the end.. Keep writing more! And draw Seth and Rie! They're so cute together!! ^^ Awesome chapter!
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Jun 20, 2005 05:07 PM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 13
I really hope you draw Rie and Seth.. That'd be awesome!! ^^ And Seth's back..!! YAAYY!!! ^^
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Jun 20, 2005 05:03 PM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 12
Yes, i really like this story! ^^ Seth is so loveable, and Rie's just like any other teenage girl.. I can really relate to her.
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Jun 20, 2005 04:55 PM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 11
Nooo.. Poor Seth.. =[
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Jun 20, 2005 04:47 PM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 10
AWWW!!!!! -dances like a mad cow- HE LOVES HERRR!!! >w
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Jun 20, 2005 04:42 PM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 9
Oo, so he's a taller guy, hm..? This story is so cool! ^^
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Jun 20, 2005 04:13 PM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 8
YEAH!! Go Rie!! ^^ Finally she's yelling at them for a change! ^^
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Jun 20, 2005 04:06 PM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 7
Aw, that makes me wish I got along with my dad.. =[ Oh well. Great Chapter. ^^
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Jun 20, 2005 03:52 PM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 6
XD The part where she punches him made me laugh. I love Seth! He's so adorable!! ^^
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Jun 20, 2005 03:46 PM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 5
Aww!! ^^ Seth's so cute! -squeal-
 
CranberryZorroRaz
Jun 20, 2005 03:29 PM by: CranberryZorroRaz chapter 3
Oiii, i really like this story! ^^ It's so cool!
 
Como
Jun 20, 2005 02:33 AM by: Como chapter 14
im so happy! I was WAITING for seth to come back and this chapter is perfect. THIS ISNT THE END IS IT? I REALLY love this story so PLEASE dont stop it without a nice ending! ^_^ I'm ALWAYS cheking for more...

YOUR BIGGEST WRITING FAN!!!

Como
 
zefi
Jun 20, 2005 01:44 AM by: zefi chapter 14
xD This is awsome!!! xD I luff it!! more!
 
zefi
Jun 20, 2005 01:34 AM by: zefi chapter 13
xD I am in my happy place!!! xD
 
Ancient_Naiad_Wishes
Jun 19, 2005 08:02 AM by: Ancient_Naiad_Wishes chapter 14
Awwww! That is so cute. Their relationship reminds me of a song, 1000 miles by Vanessa Carlton. *humming* It's really good.... I can never right stories, get so far and get a mental block, so yay for you! Keep it up, ish really really good! I've probably said that already, but the heat is getting to me and I can't think properly, so ah well....
 
bek-ee
Jun 19, 2005 12:55 AM by: bek-ee chapter 14
YAY!!! first comment! man, i love this story sooooo much, i can't wait for the next chapter!!! i just can't get enough of it! =3 seth is so cute at the end :)
 
bek-ee
Jun 17, 2005 09:11 PM by: bek-ee chapter 13
i love this story so much! i'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter =3
 
o0fun_grl0o
Jun 17, 2005 12:59 PM by: o0fun_grl0o chapter 13
I love your story and I even printed out a hard copy, so I can read it anywhere. I just love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!
 
Sondoloco
Jun 17, 2005 12:25 PM by: Sondoloco chapter 13
Say are you going to draw these characters??I would love to see what they look like!!!!!!Wonderful story!
 
Jubilee_Wondergal_and_Virgo
Jun 17, 2005 08:01 AM by: Jubilee_Wondergal_and_Virgo chapter 13
Great chapter! I squeled when I saw this! Weird no? I blame Virgo! Dunno why but I know it's her fault somehow! lol!
Wondergal
 
MitsukaiOkeruOozora
Jun 12, 2005 08:35 PM by: MitsukaiOkeruOozora chapter 12
YAY! It's happy, but that's horrible what happened to her... and Seth is gone *tear* Great chapter as always, can't wait for more.
 
Como
Jun 11, 2005 10:23 PM by: Como chapter 12
yipee!

When i saw the chapter up i freaked. But my mom was about to take me somewhere so i spent about 45 mins looking for it on a google search using her cell phone. But i FOUND IT! So sorry i couldnt comment earlier, and i await some more SOON! I still check everyday. THank you for writing it!
 
bek-ee
Jun 11, 2005 08:48 PM by: bek-ee chapter 12
me luffs all off them =3 love this story, it should be published!!!
 
zefi
Jun 11, 2005 04:33 PM by: zefi chapter 12
*melts* i cant wait for the date!!! *dies*
 
Spugg
Jun 10, 2005 09:08 PM by: Spugg chapter 12
I lurves this story. Aye soudns so cute, great big choclate eyes. Seth! Come back! I luffs j00
 
Sondoloco
Jun 10, 2005 01:33 PM by: Sondoloco chapter 12
I love this story not only for its creativity but the wonderful realistic characters in it. Its based on true feelings and I love it for that!
 
Pienemien
Jun 10, 2005 04:20 AM by: Pienemien chapter 12
sorry for the delay!
Heh, Im so happy and suprised you like this story so much
 
zefi
Jun 9, 2005 05:37 AM by: zefi chapter 11
WRITE MORE!!! cummon i check this a lot.Couldn't you update pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee???? *is wanting to see rei and seth together* *reads story over again* *o* oooooo
 
zefi
Jun 9, 2005 05:24 AM by: zefi chapter 10
OMG!!! this is so awsome!!! WRITE MORE!!! *read it all*
 
Spugg
Jun 8, 2005 12:32 AM by: Spugg chapter 10
I luff the Seth! Hes so tooty, You ahve given me inspiration to write a story!
 
Como
Jun 6, 2005 05:51 PM by: Como chapter 11
Aww...cmon... I check this everyday and i'm getting a bit discouraged! PLEASE Pienemien-chan! ^_^ I REALLY love this story and i could use a new chapter soon! PLEASE GIVE ME SOMTHING TO LOOK FORWARD TO!!!! *begs*
 
Como
Jun 6, 2005 05:51 PM by: Como chapter 11
Aww...cmon... I check this everyday and i'm getting a bit discouraged! PLEASE Pienemien-chan! ^_^ I REALLY love this story and i could use a new chapter soon! PLEASE GIVE ME SOMTHING TO LOOK FORWARD TO!!!! *begs*
 
Como
Jun 6, 2005 05:50 PM by: Como chapter 11
Aww...cmon... I check this everyday and i'm getting a bit discouraged! PLEASE Pienemien-chan! ^_^ I REALLY love this story and i could use a new chapter soon! PLEASE GIVE ME SOMTHING TO LOOK FORWARD TO!!!! *begs*
 
hoshiaika_the_half_wolf
Jun 4, 2005 12:23 PM by: hoshiaika_the_half_wolf chapter 11
Pien-chan needs to add more chapters! X3
 
Como
May 27, 2005 07:12 AM by: Como chapter 11
Nooo! Seth come BACK!! Me loves seth... I wish i had an invisible boyfriend... *sigh* that would rock...
 
Como
May 27, 2005 07:04 AM by: Como chapter 10
OMG! I read this whole story! Your such a good writer. I dont cry often and this story made tears fall. It was so amazing. Keep it up! I yearn to read more!
 
MitsukaiOkeruOozora
May 22, 2005 07:32 PM by: MitsukaiOkeruOozora chapter 11
Awe... poor Seth... *tear tear* You will love Seth... *is watching Star Wars* ^_^() Good chapter as always!
 
LizzardQueeng
May 20, 2005 11:17 AM by: LizzardQueeng chapter 11
Squeak!!!! Me heart fluff XD more more!! ^-^ Poor Seth T_T Wh00t Stephen King's "Carrie"
 
bek-ee
May 18, 2005 09:12 PM by: bek-ee chapter 11
*first comment dance* this is so thrilling! i love it!!! keep writing please!!! T.T poor seth
 
MitsukaiOkeruOozora
May 17, 2005 05:13 PM by: MitsukaiOkeruOozora chapter 10
awe! That's so... SWEET! -^^- He wuvs her! *explodes* YAY!! *dances*
 
S_dragon_master
May 17, 2005 10:38 AM by: S_dragon_master chapter 10
awwwwww its soooo cute and about time *looks at watch* it took him long enough meh great chapter cant wait for ries reaction
 
bek-ee
May 16, 2005 10:25 PM by: bek-ee chapter 10
*first comment dance* AWWW!!! he loves her!!! thats so sweet! i love your writing (as well as your pics) i absolutly love this story!!! keep writing!!! Love it so much! you are an awsome writer! keep it up!
 
bek-ee
May 6, 2005 09:35 PM by: bek-ee chapter 9
ooooo! what if its a set up?! this is getting more and more exiting! i can't wait to read more!
 
LizzardQueeng
May 6, 2005 04:29 PM by: LizzardQueeng chapter 1
Oh Cool! Everytime I tried to read this story it always messed up! But now I can finnaly read it! YAY It awesome! poor Rie, I can relate to her, *faves story* Sounds like romance is comin' *warm and fuzzy feeling* I wuv romantic fluff! XDDDD Very well written I can barely beli