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Troublemakers by KAT_Hiwatari
View as PDF, Submitted: 2005-03-20, Updated: 2005-12-04, Chapters: 13, Size: 148K, Words: 28989, Comments: 33, Views: 394   
Anime/Manga (0) > BeyBlade (765)
Bladebreakers atend a boording school. a group of 4 girls come new, and they promise to get into trouble, themselfs and others! Better be a friend then a enemy!
Chapters
1 - Of course we're new! - Submitted 2005-03-20 Updated: 2005-03-20 - 65 views, 1232 words, 6k
2 - The beginning of the Mariah - Submitted 2005-03-21 Updated: 2005-03-21 - 60 views, 2347 words, 12k
3 - Ocean breakfast - Submitted 2005-03-22 Updated: 2005-03-22 - 64 views, 1658 words, 8k
4 - Colored Breakfast - Submitted 2005-03-24 Updated: 2005-03-24 - 48 views, 2068 words, 10k
5 - Be careful... - Submitted 2005-04-09 Updated: 2005-04-09 - 51 views, 1654 words, 9k
6 - Alibi's and Smiles :D - Submitted 2005-04-25 Updated: 2005-04-25 - 58 views, 1465 words, 8k
7 - S or A? - Submitted 2005-05-15 Updated: 2005-05-15 - 43 views, 1555 words, 8k
8 - The chip thief - Submitted 2005-07-07 Updated: 2005-07-07 - 45 views, 1942 words, 9k
9 - BeyParts - Submitted 2005-07-24 Updated: 2005-07-24 - 46 views, 2623 words, 13k
10 - Breaking an entry - Submitted 2005-07-24 Updated: 2005-07-24 - 48 views, 2180 words, 11k
11 - Sweat Dreams - Submitted 2005-10-20 Updated: 2005-10-20 - 51 views, 1425 words, 7k
12 - Chronicles from under the bed - Submitted 2005-11-14 Updated: 2005-11-14 - 51 views, 6232 words, 34k
13 - Bubblegum, random names and cleaning psychos - Submitted 2005-12-04 Updated: 2005-12-04 - 50 views, 2608 words, 13k

33 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
Howl_From_the_Blue_Moon
Dec 25, 2005 03:52 PM by: Howl_From_the_Blue_Moon chapter 13
i was just wandering when your going to put up another story.i've read EVERY one so far,so plez put more up. =^_^= i would be VERY HAPPY because this story ROCKS. =^-^=
 
ShadowLove101
Oct 14, 2005 04:11 PM by: ShadowLove101 chapter 1
I hate Tyson anyway. This stury sounds good!
 
Sapphire_Angels_Devil
Aug 27, 2005 01:21 PM by: Sapphire_Angels_Devil chapter 10
Hiya KAT! ^-^

I just found out that I totally forgot to review this chapter sorry for that ^-^U but I have been busy with you know what (page I am talking about so lets not talk about it more then we do witch is a lot :p)

Anyways if I remember correctly I liked the chapter ^-^ it was a long time but me liked... oh look your in on MSN talk with ya soon then :p
BYE!
BTW It was nice to see ya come back to Sweden anytime you want again ^-^
~Saph~
 
heartless-sinner
Jul 25, 2005 10:42 AM by: heartless-sinner chapter 10
weeeeeeeeee!!! this is so much fun getting confused. ^-^ another chap!! another chap!!! chi!!!!
 
heartless-sinner
Jul 25, 2005 10:27 AM by: heartless-sinner chapter 9
i figured you wouldnt tell me but ya know i could always hope cant i? I am still more lost than ever so i will continue reading till the end!!! It is getting so good every time i get on the computer i check if the next chapter is up. Pathetic i know. ^-^
 
Kaira
Jul 21, 2005 09:41 PM by: Kaira chapter 8
hehe this story is kooly ^^ can't wait to see the next chapter woooo ^^
 
Sapphire_Angels_Devil
Jul 11, 2005 07:12 AM by: Sapphire_Angels_Devil chapter 8
Hiya! ^-^

You know what I think so yeah keep it going!

~Saph~
 
heartless-sinner
Jul 7, 2005 11:52 PM by: heartless-sinner chapter 8
okay now i am confused...alot! Are the shadows Sara and her sister or someone else. The story is getting really tense(that means it is awesome). Cant wait for the next chapter!!
 
heartless-sinner
Jul 7, 2005 11:39 PM by: heartless-sinner chapter 7
wannna know something bad....i garentee you that i am 100% more sarcastic than half the ppl in the world. it runs in the family and your TM chicks are like me. It is getting really good so i am going to go read your next chapter now!
 
heartless-sinner
Jul 7, 2005 11:27 PM by: heartless-sinner chapter 6
do not worry i thought this chapter was your best yet....Kai was so awesome. You are really good at witting these kinds of storys. MORE PRANKS!!! i love pranks!
 
Green_Metalic_Devil
May 20, 2005 01:01 AM by: Green_Metalic_Devil chapter 7
It getting better and better.
 
Sapphire_Angels_Devil
May 16, 2005 09:25 AM by: Sapphire_Angels_Devil chapter 7
So then we meet again story, lol ^-^ Well you know what I think and it is good so well then I dont know what more to say actually ehhh... good luck studying and with the whole Many ways to kill B thingy I am so going to comment you on them and ¨snickers¨ if i get any more ideas I lt you know.
~Saph~
 
Kaira
Apr 30, 2005 03:27 PM by: Kaira chapter 6
are u kidding leave it like this it's funny when he smiles cuze everyone goes all crazy over it ;)
 
Green_Metalic_Devil
Apr 30, 2005 12:32 PM by: Green_Metalic_Devil chapter 6
This was a graet chapter.
 
Sapphire_Angels_Devil
Apr 25, 2005 11:37 AM by: Sapphire_Angels_Devil chapter 6
A bit OOC in the end but well it is hard to change but maybe you should do him more cold when he talks to them like he couldn't care less but wanted to see what was happening so he did it anyways. ^-^
Sorry again I'm still here and are going to be for a while.
~Saph~
Please don't be pissed, please don't be pissed... oh and my homepage is finally up ^-^
 
Sapphire_Angels_Devil
Apr 25, 2005 11:27 AM by: Sapphire_Angels_Devil chapter 6
Gomen nasai, gomen nasai, förlåt, förlåt, sorry, sorry, jag är så ledsen, jag är så ledsen, ursäkta, ursäkta, please forgive me!!!!

I tried to get into the net but something was wrong with our broadband and I couldn't get out on it. I have spent the most time trying to get in and working on a sort of compensation for you. ^-^U
I am really sorry but there was some mayor problem over here and I couldn't reach you if you are in go to the MSN so we can chat, please! I didn't stand you up or anything.
~Saph~
 
Green_Metalic_Devil
Apr 13, 2005 01:34 PM by: Green_Metalic_Devil chapter 5
So funny. cant wait to read next one.
Tarius: I have the solution on that.
Me: What do you mean?
Tarius: I have created a time machine. So now you can go to the future and read next chapter.
Me: Oki doki!! (steps inside the Machine). And now What?
Tarius: push the yellow button!
Me: If you say so....
Tarius: YEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!! His gone. I sended him to the Crita period.
Now he can torture the dinosaurs instead of me. His gone so now it is party!
(Later on the party)
Ray: So you have this party becuz you haved defeated the biggest evil of all?
Tarius: Thats rigth.
Me: Who are defeated?
Tarius: My master your idiot. how many times i have to explain that to you all...
Me: I am back!
Tarius: B-but how? I sended yo back in time.
Me: You sended one of my robots back in time.
Tarius: It was a robot? But since when can you build robots?
Me: Since i taked Einsteins brain. And now you die!!!!
Tarius: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me: But this is such a cool party. You invited every great character from the anime Beyblade. I Kill you later. Now we party.
GREAT STORY!!!!!
 
heartless-sinner
Apr 9, 2005 07:45 AM by: heartless-sinner chapter 5
you three like to argue alot huh. ^-^ hmph...blame it on Bob huh. that made me crack up! i love your ideas with all the pranks and the Secret Kai thing sounds awesome. yay more Kai!!!!!!!! keep up the awesome work. ^-^
 
Sapphire_Angels_Devil
Apr 9, 2005 04:54 AM by: Sapphire_Angels_Devil chapter 5
I have read that one and it is fun ^-^
Well done with the chapter and if you need more help just tell me. I have amiled it again but just a short message to see if you got it since I don't want someone ells to get the story and then wonder who the hell I am and start to mail bomb me and you could do that to Tyson, mail bomb him secret mail address and he can't catch anyone of your OC's and what is she supposed to do in a boring comp. class anyways ¨smirks¨
BYE!
HEJ DÅ!
AU REVOIR!
CIAO!
ADJÖ!
GOD BYE!
SAYONARA!
AUF FIDESENE!
and so on...
~Saph~
 
Green_Metalic_Devil
Apr 8, 2005 03:22 AM by: Green_Metalic_Devil chapter 4
I have some ideas.
1.Glue Tyson to his launcher.
2.Let Tyson wake up whith a snake or pig or something like that.
3.Let a strange boy pretend that he was Tysons old boyfriend.
4.Let Tyson think that he is dead and haved come to the beybladehell.
5.Let Tyson believe it is go-dressed-like-a-girl-day for the boys.
6.Send out an evil messege in Tysons name.

This is all the ideas i have now. But it comes more. Bye
 
Green_Metalic_Devil
Apr 8, 2005 02:42 AM by: Green_Metalic_Devil chapter 3
I lov the idea whith the fishes. I gonna read the next now.
 
Green_Metalic_Devil
Apr 8, 2005 02:29 AM by: Green_Metalic_Devil chapter 2
Tyson in pink?? I want to see a pic of that. cuz when im thinking on it i start laugh. lol. Great story.
 
Green_Metalic_Devil
Apr 8, 2005 02:15 AM by: Green_Metalic_Devil chapter 1
Okey. Great story. And Marissa is crazy if she likes Tyson.
 
heartless-sinner
Mar 24, 2005 08:19 PM by: heartless-sinner chapter 4
oh yay secrets about kai. i like that idea.hehe!good chpter. ireally liked it. ^-^keep writting k.
 
heartless-sinner
Mar 24, 2005 08:05 PM by: heartless-sinner chapter 3
haha you wanna know what the funney thing is. we live by the water so my brother smells like fish everyday.he is going to kick my but if he reads this. oh and about the kai thing...at least you tried.^-^
your pranks are hillarious...maybe i should try some.(evil thoughts arizing.)hehehehe! oh and this story is totally going in my favs. comedys are awesome.
 
Sapphire_Angels_Devil
Mar 24, 2005 06:35 AM by: Sapphire_Angels_Devil chapter 4
We'll here is what popped into my mind.
*School, test make Tyson fail big time ^-^
* Want to know more about their bitbeasts
* They can try and find out why Kai is always up so early and finds out a secret...
* Follow the principal around when he tries to find proff buut falls into a prank they did not do and they get of the hook
* Max and Tyson can try to investigate if it really was them who did it but gets theirselves into trouble

I had better ideas but they jsut went poff so yeah this was what I got when you asked for help. Hope something is usefull ^-^ See Ya around BYE!
~Saph~
 
Sapphire_Angels_Devil
Mar 24, 2005 06:21 AM by: Sapphire_Angels_Devil chapter 4
You sneaked this chapter in without me even notice -.-
Well I am here now so I am going to give you a review when i have read it ^-^
Donno why I leave one before and one after, I guess I think it is fun ^-^
~Saph~
 
Sapphire_Angels_Devil
Mar 23, 2005 08:46 AM by: Sapphire_Angels_Devil chapter 3
You didn't? ¨tilts her head to the side¨ Gee I am not that mean that I wont review on one of my new friends stories, right? Because you are my friend, or at least am I counting you as one of my friends ^-^

Lookie Tyson is going to smell even more than usual and well I like ^-^
I want to add some ideas but I don't have a single one at the moment but if you want to use something from one of my stories do it! ^-^
But I'll come back when I get something witch should be around midnight tonight when I am trying to sleep, somehow I always get my best ideas then ^-^
Good luck with this one BYE!
~Saph~
 
heartless-sinner
Mar 21, 2005 02:34 PM by: heartless-sinner chapter 2
really great ...i have a tip for ya...HAVE MORE KAI:P. hehe i am such a big loser. ^-^
 
Sapphire_Angels_Devil
Mar 21, 2005 06:30 AM by: Sapphire_Angels_Devil chapter 2
I have finisched it and would scream yay! and dance around if it was not for him so just pretend that I am doing so ^-^
Really good and go and get him really good in the next chapter and now I know what a Mariah is. ^-^
Have to go now I am going to nag on my teacher so he will let us out 50min soner and it will maybe work ^-^
Hej Då! (Swe for Bye!) ~Saph~
 
Sapphire_Angels_Devil
Mar 21, 2005 06:18 AM by: Sapphire_Angels_Devil chapter 2
~Before I have read it~
What is a Mariah, I am in comp class so this is the message I can promise you if he sees me here. He don't like when you not do what he wants you to, lol. Funny sentence but oh so boring to read, I'll be back when I have read the chapter and are sure my teacher don't see me review. ^-^
~Saph~
 
heartless-sinner
Mar 20, 2005 12:57 PM by: heartless-sinner chapter 1
hehe you can throw Tyson in a ditch for all i care...just pwease dont hurt Kai. he WILL be my husband one of these days. :P great story. i cannot wait for the evil pranks.
 
Sapphire_Angels_Devil
Mar 20, 2005 03:16 AM by: Sapphire_Angels_Devil chapter 1
Fun! ^-^
Hope to see the next chapter up soon, but I am a little surprised that Kira, Akeira and Tirza are not in this one. If they did not change name to be in this story. Still good BYE! ^-^
~Saph~ Go and kick Tyson's butt well from me, lol. But don't touch it, it is pure toxic. O.o
 
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