Mokuba's birthday party by Nemya

Jan 11, 2008 01:34 PM by: TurtleQueen chapter 6

That was histarically funny! ... but it's kind of scary that mokuba has a seto plushie....

Jan 5, 2007 04:33 PM by: Avatar chapter 6

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!(laughs like a dufiss until head explodes.)

Aug 21, 2006 02:27 PM by: TurtleQueen chapter 0

funny! (i've read it 2 times) hahahahahahaha!

Mar 22, 2006 11:50 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 2

heh heh.....all sharing a room ey? what fun they could have....what kinda party is this??!???!??!?!?!?!?

And is there no cake?????

Mar 22, 2006 11:47 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 1

keh heh heh.....party games hey? what kinda of party games???

YOu wanted me to sickyfy, but dearest.....
"I kiss my big brother everyday before bedtime"

You've already done it

Feb 18, 2006 02:16 AM by: dieviete chapter 6

Splendit!

Feb 18, 2006 01:25 AM by: dieviete chapter 2

I have never read something that funny!

Nov 27, 2005 07:59 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 6

ah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha *laughs head off at setos rediculousness....poor sweet mokie....NOT, he is a bit of a loser really

Sep 10, 2005 10:05 AM by: Koga_InuYasha_miroku_lover101 chapter 3

Scare marik not bakura he's hot you shouldn't scare him

Jul 16, 2005 12:24 PM by: yu-girl-oh chapter 6

Please write more chapters to this great story!

Jul 15, 2005 07:24 PM by: Aqua-thewatergodess chapter 2

It was extremely funny how seto had to kiss joey! ^o^

Jul 15, 2005 07:15 PM by: Aqua-thewatergodess chapter 1

I love this story! *favs*
Its very funny!

Jul 12, 2005 11:49 AM by: Desuca chapter 4

YYYYYYYYYYYyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YAMI IN HIS UNDERWEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*Dies*

Jul 12, 2005 11:46 AM by: Desuca chapter 3

*Rips of bakura's P.J's*hee hee this should sell for a pretty penny.*looks at bakura,glomps bakura naked*Yaaayyyaaayyaaayyyaa!

Jun 20, 2005 10:27 AM by: PikaPal101 chapter 6

OMFG! I read all of this upto this chapter and by goodness, it's sooooo funneh! *Glomps you a million times* XD

Jun 20, 2005 02:20 AM by: Atems_Little_Girl chapter 3

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA poor Marik and Bakura when they saw the creepy kid show.

Jun 20, 2005 02:11 AM by: Atems_Little_Girl chapter 2

HAHAHAHAHAHA the Dares were very funny. I like the dare that Marik had to do.

Jun 19, 2005 02:47 PM by: Nemya chapter 5

*glomps* Thatnks again for comments^^

Anzu is Tea.
I think Bakura is the surname- I just call them Bakura and Ryou to save typing. XP

Jun 19, 2005 02:45 PM by: Nemya chapter 3

*glomps* Thankies for comments!^^

It is "good" Marik.

Jun 19, 2005 02:00 PM by: shadowdude chapter 5

Who's anzu???????????????????????????????????? Oh and bye the way. Bakura and the spirit of the ring(who you call bakura)have the same names. Ryou's the surname.

Jun 19, 2005 01:22 PM by: shadowdude chapter 3

By the wat, is that the evil or good merik?

Jun 18, 2005 05:15 PM by: DemonTheifQueen chapter 6

OMG! you HAVE to put more chapters up! PLEASE! ^-^

I'll give you a cookie! *holds up a jumbo cookie* ^-^

Jun 17, 2005 11:36 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 6

you didnt wait for me before you put it up *cries*

why spiders?? WHY?? WHY????? *hides in corner*

dont worry yami i believe in you!! *glomp*

Jun 16, 2005 07:04 PM by: jura chapter 6

hahahahhahahahhahahahhahahahhahahahaaaahhhhhhhahhahahhahahahahahhahahahahahahhah.(Cries untill I die of dehydration)

Jun 16, 2005 11:02 AM by: angel_of_beauty_and_light chapter 6

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!! ALL OF IT WAS HILARIOUSLY FUNNY AND I DEMAND THAT YOU WRITE MORE IMMEDIATELY!!!!!

ps, poor Seto! Having to *shudders* hug *shudders again* Mokuba. Whilst he still had harrisses on him.

EWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jun 1, 2005 10:31 AM by: ShadowLord chapter 4

HAAAAAAAAA HAHA HA HA HA HA AHA AHJHAH HAHA HA (breaths in and out) HAAAAAAAAAAAAAA HA HA HA! OMG! LOL! XD

May 21, 2005 07:03 AM by: Ancient_Naiad_Wishes chapter 1

Don't have time to read it, but WOO!! BALAMORY!! THAT SHOW ROX!! LMAO!!

May 10, 2005 12:19 PM by: DemonTheifQueen chapter 5

I love this story sooooo much! Please write more!

Me:Hey Yami!

Yami:What?

Me: Wanna go down the rapids again?

Yami:NO!

Me:What if I go with you?

Yami:Well....*thinks* ok...lets go!

Me:YAY!^-^

May 10, 2005 12:05 PM by: DemonTheifQueen chapter 4

YAY! *takes pictures of all the guys in swimming trunks* These are going on E-bay! ^-^

guys:0____o

Me&other fangirls: WHOOOOOHOOO!

+faves

May 9, 2005 02:05 PM by: lovablefairy chapter 5

*glomps marik*

May 9, 2005 02:04 PM by: lovablefairy chapter 5

i havent red it but i'll comment anyway

May 8, 2005 11:32 AM by: DemonTheifQueen chapter 3

I wanna pair of Bakura's Pj's! ^-^ This story is too funny! I'm still laughing!

Apr 30, 2005 10:12 AM by: angel_of_beauty_and_light chapter 5

WARNING: A caution to anybody who reads this story, DO NOT READ WHILST EATING/DRINKING. THERE IS A SEVERE RISK OF CHOKING ON THE FOOD/DRINK, DUE TO THE FUNNINESS OF THE STORY. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.

Apr 30, 2005 10:10 AM by: angel_of_beauty_and_light chapter 5

WOW!!!!!!!!! HILARIOUS!!!! WRITE MORE STORY NOW! (now see how you like it Mel!) HA!
SOOOOOOO FUNNY! I WANNA READ MORE STORY!!!!!!! WAA!
Ha! Mokuba got hit on the head by a rock! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA gack! *chocks from laughing*.

Apr 30, 2005 09:59 AM by: angel_of_beauty_and_light chapter 4

HAHAHAHA! I think that Marik and Bakura are definately the best characters in this story, they are what every party needs: the people who tie others up to ceilings and toilets. *glomps you* This is the funniest story I have ever read.

Apr 30, 2005 09:50 AM by: angel_of_beauty_and_light chapter 3

By far the funniest chapter. Laughed throughout! *Laughs head off as remembers* So funny. Will add to favourites so can always go and look at how funny it is. btw, it was very good of you to somehow work a mud fight AND balamory into the same chapter *shakes your hand because of brilliance and genius of mels brain, thinks for a bit, then shakes Marik's hand as well* and of course, Marik help. Anyway, next chapter.....

Apr 30, 2005 09:39 AM by: angel_of_beauty_and_light chapter 2

WoW! This chapter is even better than the first one. I can just imagine Bakura ripping into meat like there's no tomorrow. And poor him, he thought the soup was blood.
I think that Mokuba deserves a kick up the @$$ for being such a spoilt brat. But anyway, it was funny.

Apr 30, 2005 09:29 AM by: angel_of_beauty_and_light chapter 1

Sounds like its going to be an amazing party. Lets settle down and read it, shall we.
P.S. Hey, you should put Pegasus in it.

Apr 11, 2005 11:45 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 5

I WANT TO GO WITH YAMI!!!!!!! *gets excited*

Apr 10, 2005 01:28 PM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 4

*glomp* whee hee! this is great and do you know what makes it great???
YAMI IS IN HIS UNDERWEAR!! *drools*
sakura: oh boy *mops up*

Apr 10, 2005 01:13 PM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 3

heh heh *moves on to next chapter*

Apr 9, 2005 01:30 PM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 2

*glomp* this wouldnt have taken so long for me to read if you hadnt been talking the entire time!!
great story mel, whoo *waves small flag*
sakura: yami cheated on me!!! he kissed yugi!!

Apr 9, 2005 01:22 PM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 1

heh.. very good mel. i wanties more
sakura: im not in it! just because i used to go out with ryou!! ill set my squid on you :3 doesnt it look oh so evil
erm... >_< being over-run
song: oh hello! im looking at pictures of gambit you know!
kiyu: shut up *bashes*
sakura: YAMIS IN IT!! *sits up, suddenly attentive*
er... *creeps away*