LOONG!

sweetness!

woah ok Im lost

haha! nice poem!

lol! this is funny! ^^

AWSOME!!! COOL!!! INTERESTING!!! Cool opening and closing!!!!

wow...

You are very funny!! You should write more and post it!!!! *favs*

I cant believe I didn't read this earlier. It is a wonderful peom... funny too. And right now my friends are laughing up tears. I guess I could say that, but the teachers giving us mean looks... gotta go! Byebye! Kewp it upsie!

weird. cool as all hell! but weird. faves!!!

Cool! Very.. interesting...
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Sanctuary

I luv this poem! You are an awsome writer!!!

wow thats good the funny thing thow is i was whatching a video of marik and yu-gi-oh and bakura in the old time robing and crap

whoa! that is soo cool! no wonder its on mels favs :3 and you get a favs from me too!

I love this poem! Great Job, keep up the good work!
*~Mari1yn Man5on~*

Extremely AWESOME!! That must have taken you forever!! But it was worth it!!! What an awesome poem!!

*glomps you*
Waha! Its totally awesome! I was laughing and everyone in the class thought I was insane. Yes. Im in school. Its a free period, so I get to go on the library computers..
Anyways, I loved it! Totally awesome! Hee, I liked the parts about slicing his dad real slow, and "So get away, you big ugly gay, Or I'll have to chop your head" XDDDDDD
So hilarious! You are so good at writing aswell as drawing! Grak! *faves*

HAHAHA! RISHID DIED! MUWAHAHAHAHAHA! >) I'll join you Marik in your killing spree! ^-^

Your awsome hellpoemer!

lolz BlackBreeze ^^
yah, ummm i think i was high on chocolates when i wrote this, and that's why it's so ... vernacular? yah, that's the perfect word! besides, i could never sound professional =D

oh, yah! and i switched the names cuz i wanted it to rhyme

Pretty good. Interesting story. Although I do have a few things to say about it. . . you switched names a little in the poem, like instead of saying Rishid, you said Odion. I thought that was pretty funny.

Second, you used "bish", "faves", "cuz", and others. In a story/poem you have to use actual words and not just abreviations. That seems a bit unprofessional if you do. The rhythm and rhyme of this poem was excellent however, yet I think Rishid was a bit OOC.

Great job!

this is an Awesome poem Hellpoemer!! u have lots of talent!! not only can u draw, but u can also write very well!! ^-^ i like this! *ADDS TO FAVES*

Yes Yami Marik gets too stay^^ that was really good. Great Poem

Wow, I really really like Pharaoh, and I mean i REALLY like the Pharaph, but good god this poem is sooo cool! Well done!!

thats funny
fave poem and artist

i like the ryming...

Amazing autor

WOW!!!! that's really good!!!! you're good in both writhing as drawing!! Keep it up!! great job, hellpoemer-chan!!

Woah! I knew you could draw, but you can write too!? You are too amazing!! AMAZING!! Hahaa, That would be funny if this really happened, instead of Yami Marik having to leave*cries* I love this poem, you ROCK hellpoemer!! *+faves*