Please put Sessomaru in, because it will make the stoy more fun.Plus Sessomaru just might scare the crud out of hei.

Short. do you have Sessomaru in this story?

Hey! I've got an idea, why do'nt you put Sessomaru in.

OH you do have hei in youre story.Heh inuyasha is going to beat the crud out of hei sooner or later.

short.Put hei in because it will make the story a lot more fun.Expecaly if Inuasha won't stop teaseing him.

Hei, put hei In PLEASE.

Put hei in, if you have'nt put him in already.

Hei,put hei n please!

Put Hei in, and make inuyasha and him start a fight. I've always thought of inuyasha teaseing hei all the time. Heh heh heh.

lol I luv this story Its pretty gewd me like! me like! *favs*

Oh and I also agree with the titles. either "worlds collied" or "Yu Yu Yasha"! its really creative I like it ok but plz continue! ~~~Cya

LOL you soooooooo got Kouga's character right, me like me like!

hmm ( have nothing to say sry )

kiss my (__Y__)! lol idk I ust felt like doing that or another one is: (o Y o) boobies! lol *falls out again*

*runs around with a vase on head and bumps into the wall repeatedly*

*takes a chainsaw and makes a movie thinking the chainsaw is a camera and sreds off everybody's head (inclueding kikyo! yay!)*

lol! don't know so son't ask! i Just felt like it! GOSH! LOL!

LOL XD OH MAN *wipes tear away*
all the guys are getting beat up on! lol
XD wow thats funni!

lol, wow this is getting weerder and weerder,oh well.
*continues reading*

uh oh, I don't thinkie Inu's gunna likee!

yahooooooo! yea Action! C'mon Inu! WIN! WIN! WIN!

agreed (with the person above me)

lol
this is funni and gewd and its getting better

lol Miroku IS getting the crap beaten out of him! XD *falls out* XD wow this is funi

its "Yu Yu Hakasho" and this story is pretty gewd. But what I don't understand is why do you guys not get the story?
I get it easily...oh well *shrugs*

nice story!*covers head*Iiiiiiiiiiiiit's violence...that makes the wooooorld go roooooound!!!!*sings*Yusuke:Knock it off,kid,I'm about deaf!
Me:Well excuse me for livin'...
Inuyasha:Sure,you listen to him...
Me*gets two huge bonks on the head*

run run run as fast as you can,u can't catch me cuz I'm not a man!*runs for life*It's violence...that makes the world go round!*sings*Inuyasha:Would you stop singing?!?!My ears are sensitive ya know!

*smacks evil dude*hoi-yah!*kicks him in face*
*runs for life*It's violence...that makes the world go round!!*sings*gr8 story!

hee...beat up guys...*bursts into uncontrollable laughter*
ha...can I help?*kicks Hiei in the shins*I dunno what that was for.I just felt violent.*runs from first commenter*It's violence that makes the world go round!*sings*

allo.i woulda done that too.I'm a big suicidal idiot.biiiiiiiiig
that ugly guy should cheer up.He ain't uglier'n me.no 1's uglier'n me!LOL

it Koga.I'm scared.i like this story.

hmmm...ur in the story!the black cave is actually my room!!
it gets there.honestly.
cool story.reading on!!

short.interesting.i like it.

...I'm alive?...
oh yeah..i hid in the bushes to the left.^.^safe for now!!
great writing.this is going pretty good so far

oh no!!busted by the cute kitty!!*curls into ball*I'm not here.I'm not here.I'm not eavesdropping either.

great job!!just don't let ne1 kill me!*curls into ball again*

kewl.don't watch the other show(yu-yu something)but im a huge Inuyasha fan.u are really good!!

whats with sleeping beauty?

HAHAHAHHAHAHHAHA!!!!!!!!!! (gasp) Miroku is getting the crap beaten out of him! I love when that happens!

Good so far

Good so far

lol funny story!!!!!!!

dont be so pushy inuyasha70707. shes doing her best that she is... have some patience like the rest of us.

wow... its good so far that it is. -to the next chapter-

You should name it "Yu Yu Yasha"! Lol!

really confused by this sry

add a new chapter now or die!

DEmons can be seen coming out of my computer and onto yours!HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!

Puu is supposed to be feeling what Yusuke is feeling too right? If Yusuke's sick, so is Puu. If Yusuke dies, Puu dies too.

no offense, but that's mesed up. I don't know what to call it.

I like it, your good I want the second half. I cant think of a good title.

Like I said getting sooo much better. I am really stating to like it. ^-^

Your getting better. Still need to reorder some words but it is getting alot better. =)

Ummm it was written more like a play..interesting I have never seen any one write that way. Oh well it is ok could be better if you reorganized ur words but I understood it.

CHRISTICA IS ME AND SAIMA IS MY B/F, IM JUST USIN THE CHARACTERS FROM THIS RP SITE WE R ON

I think Yu Yu Yasha's a good title. It's very creative. The others are good, too, but that one's better. I'll try and think of one. I promise I'll come straight here when I do. And knowing me, I'll be checking back like 5 times a day, so don't you worry! And I won't get side-tracked or anything 'cause I'm...HEY, IT'S HIEI!! GET HIM!! *joins group of fangirls* Hiei: Just great, more fangirls! *starts to run away, but get caught by fangirls* KURAMA! YUSUKE! HELP ME! *slowly starts to sink in until only his hand is left slowly sinking, too* AAAAAAHHHHHH!! Yusuke: He's gone. *starts to cry on Kurama's shoulder* Kurama:There there, it's O.K. *more fangirls show up and start gathering around Yusuke and Kurama* I think it's time to go. RUUUUNNNN!!*fangirls start chasing them as well as well*. Kuwabara: What about me!*Hiei's fangirls start crowding around*. Fanfirls: THIS IS FOR HIEI!! *start beating to a pulp*
Cya

Poor poor Koga. If the water's cold, I'll warm you. And don't worry, I'll...Hey, where are you, Kogie. Koga: Aw shoot, she saw me. *starts running in that little tornado thingie then disappers* Me: I'S NO USE, KOGA! I'LL FIND YOU!! Right as soon as I finish reading this. *clicks next chapter*

I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR YOU, HIEI!!! Isn't Hiei the cutest person you've ever seen.*stops glomping Hiei* Oh, Hi Kuwabara.*continues glomping*
Kuwabara:WHAT DO YOU MEAN?! ALL I GET IS A "HI KUWABARA", THAT'S IT!?
Me:Yes *continues glomping Hiei*
Kuwabara:What about Kurama?
Me:Oh ya, I forgot *starts glomping Kurama, not as much as Hiei, of course*
Kuwabara:*Pouts in corner* Nobody likes me.
Me:That's right! *goes back to glomping Hiei*
LOL. It's about time more people coment on this *clicks next chapter*

Short short, too short too short.Please make longer. STill good, though.'Cause my widdle Koga's here^_^.HERE WE GO!!*clicks next chapter*

YAY FIGHT SCENE!!!LET'S GO INUYASHA!!*clicks next chapter*

Hmmm....interesting. Very interesting. ONWARD!!*clicks next chapter*

So could I! This is one of the funniest fanfics I read on this siteXD. And plus I love both shows so I can picture it happening, too! MUST...KEEP...READING!!!*clicks next chapter*

Yay yay, more more more!!! Can't wait!!*Goes to next chapter**comes back* Oh ya, just to tell you my favorite character is Miroku.*goes back to next chapter*

LOL!!! That's soooo funny! I was laughing the whole way through the storyXD. I have to show my friends this!! Right as soon as Kagome had said "and this guy is...Hey where's Miroku?" I had fallen off my chair laughing 'cause I knew what was going to happen.*adds to favorites* can't wait to read more!!

O_o..............

T_T.........


thats really odd,im sorry.....

it doesnt make sence....


i dunno, im not for the whole trying to be funny fanfics.....

I guess its ok..im not trying to flame ya.

WRITE MORE NOW!!!! *several people stare meancingly*heh heh heh....i mean, type more whenever you feel like it..........;D

sorry i dont have a sugestion for a name but i think any of the ones above me is great. well their better than '?????'


love the story!


Hiei is soooooooooo kawaii!

i was waiting for Hiei to come into the story! i dont care about kurama but Hiei! he's sooooooooo cute!

How about... Detective meets Dog Demon?

Hey I suggest 'When Worlds Collide'.
Please continue withe story. I love it.

it's 10 pages not 20. my bad

actually a few months ago i had written up, that's right written up. as in a pencil and a lot of paper, 20 pages, i wasn't kiddin when i said alot, worth and i am working on typing it all up. so please just be a bit patient, kk

-Christica (the author of this fine story that still needs a title)

LOL hes right Kuwabara needs a new look please continue with the story

cool i was also waiting for kurama and hiei to come in the pictuer as well r u going to add to the story plz do it's a cliff hanger you know

i could just see yusuke face at the part w/kagome and her bow thingy

I just finished reading the udates you have made. And let me tell you i loved it. Plus I was just waiting for Kurama and Hiei to come in to the story.

i've got at least 20 pages worth written(6 pages typed up) i just need to seperate it into chapters and type up the rest

I lkie it. Please write more soon.