awesome! i like the way you described the charecters. not too detailed so you can kinda get your own impression of what they look like. i think that makes them more apealing. anyway, cant wait for the next chapter. great work!
-Beef3r
Ah!great story!!!!
i do agree there are a few spelling errors but that's fine.^^
*favs*
great job Kyou!
ur an amazing writer.
can't wait to read more!
~higes_wolf
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Submitted: 2005-05-12, Updated: 2005-05-12,
Chapters: 1, Size: 6K,
Words: 1276, Comments: 2,
Views: 173
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-Beef3r