awesome! i like the way you described the charecters. not too detailed so you can kinda get your own impression of what they look like. i think that makes them more apealing. anyway, cant wait for the next chapter. great work!
-Beef3r
Ah!great story!!!!
i do agree there are a few spelling errors but that's fine.^^
*favs*
great job Kyou!
ur an amazing writer.
can't wait to read more!
~higes_wolf
-Beef3r