Dear lord, no one has commented? What is wrong with people? *sigh* Um...Great job. The poetry is incredible. I lOVE "The Jackal" by Carton. He's brilliant--did you know that the "jackal" was an assasin during like, the early '60's? Craziness.
Anyway...I love the poem. Nice job. Why doesn't anyone ever comment on writing?
keep it up.