I had this is my head for about 2 days... it was so annoying I had to write it... It doesnt really have a plot... I think... and its very short.... Edo is telling the story, so you dont get confused.
That was....so...sad....*grabs tissues* Now, being the avid fan I am, and the over-active author, you know I could start railing off flames...but I doubt you deserve it. No story's perfect, but yours is damn close.