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Kaede falls in love by angel_of_beauty_and_light
Complete View as PDF, Submitted: 2005-06-13, Updated: 2007-02-05, Chapters: 39, Size: 450K, Words: 90021, Comments: 236, Views: 875   
Anime/Manga (0) > Yu-Gi-Oh! series (1984)
Kaede Mishua live with her grandparents in Domino City. She loves her school and her friends. But there is a certain guy she finds it impossible to like, but maybe he is the one she will love?
Chapters
1 - Bad Beginnings - Submitted 2005-06-13 Updated: 2005-06-13 - 58 views, 2061 words, 10k
2 - Something Unpleasent - Submitted 2005-06-15 Updated: 2005-06-15 - 53 views, 1468 words, 7k
3 - Dancing the tango - Submitted 2005-08-29 Updated: 2005-08-29 - 53 views, 1887 words, 9k
4 - Painful memories - Submitted 2005-09-09 Updated: 2005-09-09 - 55 views, 2783 words, 14k
5 - Love and tears - Submitted 2005-09-10 Updated: 2005-09-10 - 54 views, 2329 words, 11k
6 - Ice creams with Kaiba - Submitted 2005-09-17 Updated: 2005-09-17 - 50 views, 2794 words, 14k
7 - A trip to the Kaiba Mansion - Submitted 2005-09-21 Updated: 2005-09-21 - 49 views, 2602 words, 13k
8 - Party at Ana's - Submitted 2005-09-26 Updated: 2005-09-26 - 53 views, 4603 words, 23k
9 - Spin the bottle - Submitted 2005-10-09 Updated: 2005-10-09 - 59 views, 3431 words, 17k
10 - Strange couples - Submitted 2005-10-12 Updated: 2005-10-12 - 54 views, 2409 words, 12k
11 - "But the baker sells cake." - Submitted 2005-10-15 Updated: 2005-10-15 - 37 views, 3912 words, 20k
12 - Invading the Miharu's - Submitted 2005-10-16 Updated: 2005-10-16 - 45 views, 1684 words, 8k
13 - A day at the beach - Submitted 2005-10-19 Updated: 2005-10-19 - 54 views, 3242 words, 16k
14 - Good (and bad) surprises - Submitted 2005-10-27 Updated: 2005-10-27 - 64 views, 2637 words, 13k
15 - Ishtars and arguments - Submitted 2005-10-28 Updated: 2005-10-28 - 52 views, 1341 words, 7k
16 - Always, and never - Submitted 2005-10-28 Updated: 2005-10-28 - 40 views, 2613 words, 13k
17 - Decision time - Submitted 2005-10-30 Updated: 2005-10-30 - 48 views, 2802 words, 14k
18 - Old dreams fade - Submitted 2005-10-30 Updated: 2005-10-30 - 38 views, 1070 words, 5k
19 - New Year's ball - Submitted 2005-10-30 Updated: 2005-10-30 - 48 views, 2899 words, 14k
20 - For the love of shopping - Submitted 2005-11-08 Updated: 2005-11-08 - 40 views, 2973 words, 15k
21 - Three month anniversary party - Submitted 2005-11-10 Updated: 2005-11-10 - 53 views, 827 words, 4k
22 - Past Friendships end - Submitted 2005-11-12 Updated: 2005-11-12 - 46 views, 1744 words, 9k
23 - Confessions - Submitted 2005-11-12 Updated: 2005-11-12 - 48 views, 1045 words, 5k
24 - Together again at last - Submitted 2005-11-12 Updated: 2005-11-12 - 46 views, 1461 words, 7k
25 - Date at the Chinese Restaurant - Submitted 2005-11-15 Updated: 2005-11-15 - 44 views, 2830 words, 14k
26 - Tormented dreams - Submitted 2005-11-16 Updated: 2005-11-16 - 53 views, 2563 words, 13k
27 - Sleeping, as though dead - Submitted 2005-11-23 Updated: 2005-11-23 - 43 views, 1353 words, 7k
28 - Yuula, schizophrenic? - Submitted 2005-11-29 Updated: 2005-11-29 - 41 views, 1088 words, 5k
29 - A New Beginning - Submitted 2005-11-29 Updated: 2005-11-29 - 57 views, 1897 words, 10k
30 - Ruined happiness - Submitted 2005-11-30 Updated: 2005-11-30 - 39 views, 1974 words, 10k
31 - Poor apology - Submitted 2005-12-02 Updated: 2005-12-02 - 35 views, 1322 words, 6k
32 - Pool Party - Submitted 2005-12-06 Updated: 2005-12-06 - 37 views, 1557 words, 8k
33 - The Ultimate Shopping Trip - Submitted 2006-01-28 Updated: 2006-01-28 - 43 views, 2631 words, 13k
34 - Fade Together - Submitted 2006-02-14 Updated: 2006-02-14 - 40 views, 1853 words, 9k
35 - I am seventeen, going on eighteen… - Submitted 2006-02-25 Updated: 2006-02-25 - 40 views, 2099 words, 11k
36 - Glamorous Indie Rock & Roll - Submitted 2006-03-24 Updated: 2006-03-24 - 49 views, 2967 words, 16k
37 - At the temple - Submitted 2006-03-26 Updated: 2006-03-26 - 50 views, 3510 words, 18k
38 - O Sole Mio - Submitted 2006-03-28 Updated: 2006-03-28 - 52 views, 3028 words, 16k
39 - The Final Pages - Submitted 2006-03-29 Updated: 2006-03-29 - 56 views, 2732 words, 14k

234 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
setokaibaslittlesis
Jul 31, 2007 05:38 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
Somehow, it has become my before school starts tradition to read this. Huh. I promise this is my only post.
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Oct 19, 2006 01:15 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 23
GAHH! 'TIS SO SAPPY! XD XD XD
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Oct 19, 2006 01:12 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 22
I feel very left out. :( all you peoples know each other and here I am in crappy ol' USA. I am fully moving to Moose Factory, Canada when I grow up.
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Oct 17, 2006 06:39 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 18
MARIK CAN'T HAVE BAKURA!! He is MINE!!!
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Oct 17, 2006 01:49 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 15
Bwaha! My brother stalks you when you aren't looking! *shifty eyes*
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Sep 9, 2006 08:31 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
Caitlee just realized you never told us what happened after Priest Seto and Keade went into the temple with the pharoh! (I can't spell today)
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Jul 26, 2006 02:44 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 6
Ak-ward...Now I must away to Driver's ed. and the legendary cranky old teacher of doom...I hope I survive. Bye, now!
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Jul 19, 2006 11:21 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 4
Awww...I just realized the list of online people on the bottom is gone! That makes me sad. :(AHHH!! MY MOM KEEPS TELLING ME ITS THE APOCOLPYS! I AM VERY FREAKED OUT!! SAVE ME!!!!! Oh, and this chapter is very nice. I'll stop commenting after every one.
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Jul 19, 2006 11:13 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 3
haha. Priest Seto...hahah. The name makes me laugh. He is SO un-preist like. I don't even LIKE Yu-Gi-Oh anmore. The stupid GX thing ruined it for me. I WILL GET MY REVENGE JADEN!!!
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Jul 19, 2006 11:00 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 2
aaakkk-ward! hahah. You should have slapped him. I would have laughed VERY hard indeed. He rather deserved it. FREAK!! DON'T TOUCH MY HAND!!
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Jul 19, 2006 10:40 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 1
hahah. I remember why I love this story so much. I love to quote "heart of the bottle- guide me."(which I realize is not relvant in this chapter). *YUM* I sure do LOVE Bagel Bites. I wish they would be done cooking already. And now I have to go. I am suppose to be doing my health homework. I couldn't care less about arthritus. tas. tes. However you spell it. Bleh.
 
MarhiaPotterakMewNakama
Jun 30, 2006 10:23 AM by: MarhiaPotterakMewNakama chapter 9
I liked the heart of the bottle thing
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Apr 22, 2006 03:05 PM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 12
wait a second... can I point out that that note is really sweet? I want a guy like that
 
Tillyenna
Apr 17, 2006 08:40 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 39
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!! Marik in a dress............*laughs to death*

Great story manny *wipes a way tear*.......I cant beleive its over.......(write an epilogue....another one....go on, I dare you)
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Apr 9, 2006 10:02 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 39
nyahahaha, everything was great (except for the Marik dress part XD )

Mel hasn't read this and something must be incredibly wrong...ohnoohnoohno
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Apr 9, 2006 09:56 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 38
Fry an egg AND kill Yuula!!

has mel not read this??
 
Lanathae
Mar 30, 2006 12:20 PM by: Lanathae chapter 39
yay Art!

aww i wish Art was my brother, that would be so cool X3

awww and it has ended... about time too, how long have you been writing it, but then again, how long have i been meaning to read it and not...

ah well, i probably *should* go read your HP story or something.... but no, i think i'v read to much, any more and my head will expode

don't ask my why, it just will...
 
Eoara
Mar 29, 2006 09:50 PM by: Eoara chapter 39
"Esme was past around the group of girls"

i think she would NOT have come to me. There is the fact that ana doesnt WANT kids because she DEESPISES them...but its all over! thats sad. but. you. made. a. friendship. speech.

HOW COULD YOU?

other than that, it was good, i suppose.

nah, joking. was very very very good. and the fact that its over is the end of an era.
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Mar 29, 2006 04:42 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 39
WOOT! FIRST COMMENT!!
And how could I forget you?
We're praticaclly best friends on this thing!
I'll read your other stories, you'll read mine!
Nice ending! Your kids sound adorable!
Too bad I didn't get to rbeak Mokeba though.
Shouldn't he have moved out by now?
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 12:23 PM by: Lanathae chapter 38
awww that was so cute X3
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 12:05 PM by: Lanathae chapter 36
XD harsh one for Tea!
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 10:52 AM by: Lanathae chapter 35
heh very well written card, just like mel ^^
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 10:46 AM by: Lanathae chapter 34
Best hair? i should've deffinatly gotten best hair,
hello? bright green here!
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 10:09 AM by: Lanathae chapter 33
well FINALLY
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 10:07 AM by: Lanathae chapter 32
... i'm disapointed in you manning, why am i still not in it?
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 10:00 AM by: Lanathae chapter 31
and Joey finally gets what's coming to him, well, almost, i wish your ring cut out one of his eyes or somthing, that would have been good heh heh heh
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 09:52 AM by: Lanathae chapter 29
... wow, that was unexpected.... i mean, yeah, congrats and all...
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 09:24 AM by: Lanathae chapter 25
i had to read that last bit like three times before i got what was going on
i think that we should all kill Joey heh heh heh
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 09:14 AM by: Lanathae chapter 24
"There they were, every single one of them, Sakura, Yuula, Tea, Ana, Mai, Joey, Honda, Yami, Ryou, Duke, Seto, Takumi, Mrc, Tenshi and Mokuba"

why am i never invited *cries*
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 08:48 AM by: Lanathae chapter 22
love this quote:

`No, there's nothing wrong with Yuula that wasn't there when she was born.'

briliant XD
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 08:44 AM by: Lanathae chapter 21
awww peter wrote a lovely coment about that chapter but then he deleted it
yeah, he read that capter because he could not be bothered to get out of the computer seet
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Oct 19, 2006 01:08 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 21
Dude...you're a GUY???
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 08:20 AM by: Lanathae chapter 19
yay Miho!
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 08:14 AM by: Lanathae chapter 18
heh heh heh Joey is such a looser
 
Lanathae
Mar 29, 2006 08:11 AM by: Lanathae chapter 17
... how the hell can everyone write such long coments? so wierd...
but anyways, i thought that i might as well since i'v read so much without comenting

...very good

i shall go read the rest now
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Mar 29, 2006 06:32 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 38
Don't worry. I won't break the house.
But I can't say I won't break Mokeba *laughs evily* vengence shall be mine!!!
Ugh.
I HATE mushy stuff
Unfortunately, I hate it SO much, I LIKE it.
Ugh!
Okay, I gots to go start writing my Fruits Basket FF
So many FF so little (ungrounded) time.
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Mar 29, 2006 06:25 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 38
Standard English?
And you know how you were suprised to find out I didn't live in England?
Well I live as far away from england as you can possibly get.
I live in Texas!
Very far north in Texas, but still.
Okay, now I will read your chapter
AHHH! There is a poor little fish flapping outsdie the bowl on an advertisement!
*resistes urge to click here*
I'm a vegetarian too.
 
Tillyenna
Mar 28, 2006 12:47 PM by: Tillyenna chapter 38
awwwwwwwwww......little baby manny is married........AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

you guys are sooo sweet, and i can just imagine you going BRIGHT RED!!!!!!!!!
 
Lanathae
Mar 28, 2006 12:46 PM by: Lanathae chapter 9
one down... 29 or whatever to go *dies*
how the hell do i get so behind!!!
 
Tillyenna
Mar 28, 2006 12:41 PM by: Tillyenna chapter 37
awwwwwwww.......how sweet, poor hebeny. adn poor preisty seto
 
Tillyenna
Mar 28, 2006 12:37 PM by: Tillyenna chapter 36
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha.....comic

Mariks such a girl....hes like a yugioh seiji (lol)
 
Eoara
Mar 28, 2006 12:30 PM by: Eoara chapter 38
*does the carzy and insane dance*

NAD IIIIII WAS IN IT...but shes not back yet..*cries*..and i'm nearly sort of...half a person...fun..but still!!!!!!!!!


gooey would like to say that he is not weird...and strange.

OW...he hit me...because he really is, and i told him so. so he hit me.


AND...you say MY story is cheesy???
HAH

but itb was very good....i enjoyed it lots. now all you have to do is the few years later thingy...
 
Eoara
Mar 27, 2006 09:29 AM by: Eoara chapter 37
very good, my dove...i liked it mucho...was sad, but not sad enough...so, am i in next chapter? am i? am iiii???

please say yes.

LALALALALAALLA

writeth thou moreth.
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Mar 26, 2006 09:36 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 37
EE! I can't wait until the wedding.
Read WTDI's chapter one again!
I edited it and there is a surprise in it just for you!
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Mar 26, 2006 07:42 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 37
AAAAAAW I HATE her father SO much he is EVIL and deserves to be savaged by wild dogs with acid teeth.

haha, I am mentioned once, twice- that is GREAT! keep it up and you WILL have earnt your kombi seat
 
Eoara
Mar 26, 2006 05:16 AM by: Eoara chapter 36
"independent woman" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA made me think of the destiny's child song...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...damn,.,...thats going round and round and round and round in my head now

anyways, this was a very good chapter, even if poor little 15 year old Ana was nowhere to be found....heh...she'd be just out of hospital roght now....anyways was good as always....write more soon
yaddyaddayadda
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Mar 26, 2006 03:35 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 36
yayigettobeyourmaidofhonour!!!!

Oooooh... is that my kombi then, ay? Have you promoted yourself to front seat or something? XD lol

Marik is a creep. He should marry Mel and Mokuba and buggar off somewhere.
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Mar 24, 2006 04:50 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 36
Please...
Let ME kill Tea
Please
She's irritating enough as it is, with out her hiring strippers
Yay! Thankies for putting Cira in the wedding
I am SOOO excited!
 
Nemya
Mar 24, 2006 03:15 PM by: Nemya chapter 36
Ahhh poor, poor, poor Anzu ;___:

I'm so glad that wasn't me in the end *breathes a sigh of relief*

"Who cares what everyone else wants?" My goodness, what a lovely attitude x.x;;;

Why can't Marik be a bridesmaid!?! He would make such a lovely one! Awww he wants to be a girl, he's so sweet x3 I love the things he says, and his un-knowingness? x3 Fwa fwa You meanie leaving him with SETO.

Youshouldhavedrivenaway. That would have been so fun xD

Byooo this all sounds so scary x.x;; loudness, so much loudness xD I guess Yuula would like this more than me at least though ^^
What's this about her dancing with some random scary guy?! Adgarga!
(I looove cranberry juice)

I bet it's only for his money x3 Or his coats. *Steals Seto's coats*

Wyon wyon fun fun write som'ore sooon x3 I guess I'll write some myself now right?^^
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Mar 15, 2006 08:34 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 35
Hi!
I was going to comment on this, but it didn't have a leave a comment thing.
Then I realized-I wasn't signed in!! I am such a loser.
guess waht?
I am now totally obssesed with Fruits Basket.
And Yu-Gi-OH.
And now I also LIke One Piece.
And sometimes Bobobo-bo-bo-bobo
-_-' Ugh. I like all the loser anime.
Bye!
Oh Great Chapter.
May Cira please come to wedding.
Just be there?
*Puh-lease?*
 
Nemya
Mar 13, 2006 01:51 PM by: Nemya chapter 35
So... I'm commenting on all the chapters Dx

Sorries. I'm ultimately lazy. You may murder me. (Unless you have already been murdered by scaries)

The title... going on 18? You're only just 17, deary. (I had the sudden need to call someone that)

Yourgrandparentsareplanningyourmurder. Just thought I'd warn you. Marik's crazy.

I want that book. It sounds so fun Dx

That food sounds goood... Poor Mokie. It must be hard to have Tenshi for a wife/girlfriend. Dook's not there is he? Daaarn. And Marik x.x

Note from last chapter: Yuula and Dook cannot be voted second cutest couple as they are not a couple x.x
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Mar 7, 2006 12:30 PM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 1
argh.. this was a BAD idea because I am sure that the writing is not supposed to run around like that, eyes cannot catch up with words O____Q

aha, Tea may have bought clothes but don't forget that she has NO TASTE and is EVIL and NO ONE likes her
 
Tillyenna
Mar 1, 2006 08:47 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 35
WAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im in it!!!! ha LEY lu jaaaah haaaleluuhuujaaa, halelujah,, okay ill stp there. Im waving to you, and i look like a freak beacse ur right here. aj well. (ah not aj)
 
Eoara
Feb 26, 2006 09:26 AM by: Eoara chapter 35
very very very good...now write some more. see how lacking in imagination i am today?! now..i think i wil go and hoover my room. i actually enjoyed tidying my room...**feels ill**

im sure i had a fever at riding yesterdya.

AAAAh i want my imagination back. i want to write, but i just cant.
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Feb 25, 2006 10:59 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 35
haha! I knew I had forgotten something: popcorn! Damn.

Yeah, seriously if Yuula doesn't like writing them WHY DID SHE??? argh argh
 
Tillyenna
Feb 20, 2006 01:08 PM by: Tillyenna chapter 34
awwwwwww, its just soooooooooo sad, (and i cant see any of the nominations grrrrrr damn pc)

but its just sooooooo sweet, awwwww.........*fills with cuteness*
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Feb 15, 2006 12:17 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 34
Well, of course I wasn't nominated because it would make everyone else feel bad

oooh great chapter mi amiga! Thank-you very much for putting mass Sakura appearance in it!!
I'm looking forward to the wedding!
 
Eoara
Feb 14, 2006 02:00 PM by: Eoara chapter 34
very good.....but what about sakura??? did she not receive any nominsations? and also............i think that ddook shud have got best hair (girl) as he does have girly hair...heheh

well, was worth waiting for...tres good..i did enjoy


write more...
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Feb 1, 2006 04:41 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 33
YAY IT'S LETTING ME COMMENT!! It wasn't for a while then. Well, hello, you!! Glad to see you're back, I thought you had died!! Muy Bien. I am STILL grounded indefenitly , but every Wednesday, I get to play on the computer for an hour due to a High School church thing. You're not REALLY getting married are you? I put in a story. But I probably won't start it for at least another year. If you want to get to know me more, I now have a Xanga! ^_^! It's web address is www.xanga.com/setokaibaslittlesis Or maybe it's kiaba. I can't remember.
 
Tillyenna
Jan 29, 2006 09:07 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 33
kee hee hee.....it is KAIBA.....

hmmm yes......MRS KAIBA, thats gonna have to be your name.....dammit, andn mine too. well....ill make mokie change his name......i refuse to be a kaiba

(please write more)
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Jan 29, 2006 04:27 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 33
Kara: I DID NOT SAY THAT!!! NOT ONCE...

i said, very politely, "please can i read after you, if taht is ok?"

hmph....and it was very good...hehehehe...and Yumiko is very Sophieish....BUT ANA IS SOOOO LEFT OUT *cries*...i know she's in France....BUT YOU COULD STILL RING HER!! *sniff*

and gooey says you should wear a yellow polkadot dress!! smirksmirk
hehehehe

hehe

hehehehehehehe
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Jan 29, 2006 04:16 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 33
"Kaede flatly refused to wear pink as it would clash with her hair and she didn't want to walk down the aisle looking like a milkshake."

Don't EVER do that- mel would probabl;y like it but you are FAR above that level, dearest.

I'm very happy that you wrote more, however I have Kara going "LET ME READ" and Ritsu is being chased around the house by Ryuichi screaming "na no daaa. pretty woman!" and kyou is looking annoyed on the bed, Kakashi is reading his book, Yami is trying to find secret passageways in my house, Goku is eating EVERYTHING in sight and I don't even want to KNOW what the others are doing. I have a feeling that Rosie chased Inuyasha up a tree though lol....

I like the fact that I am the obvious fashion expert (not that I actully am in real life though.)

If I don't leave soon there may no longer be an Annie at all cos Kara is evilling me
 
Eoara
Dec 19, 2005 08:53 AM by: Eoara chapter 32
argh...ur online.....please come on msn....please pleas


and uploadeth thou moreth
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Dec 19, 2005 07:57 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 32
Oh no! This wasn't the last Chapter was it?? NOOOOO!!!!!! (I got a reprieve from grounding over Christmas break because I studied so hard for my semester exams)(Spanish and Geometrey are the epitomies of evil!!)
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Dec 9, 2005 10:17 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 32
okaaay everything is making me cry right now, so it was wondeful to read something amusing that STILL MADE ME CRY.

you bet sakura is going to get your dress with you, otherwise you would end up with something weird that seto thinks looks good, probably a blue-eyes dress or something XD
sakura: SHOPPING SHOPPING SHOPPING!
heeeheeeee..
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Dec 8, 2005 03:34 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 32
Hi. :'( I'm grounded until June. Sorry. Got a d and three c's in PR and so...yeah, fuly dead. My mom called me a nobody. So you can just forget about Cira because the real one won't becoming on for a very very very long time. bye. :'(
 
Eoara
Dec 7, 2005 11:35 AM by: Eoara chapter 32
hehehehehhe....laty and mel are SOOO funny.

and so was the story

it was very good, bub.

i enjoyed it mucho. writeth thou moreth
 
Tillyenna
Dec 7, 2005 10:04 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 32
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH RED COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!! *dies from red commentness*
okay an extract from your story...
difference was they were slightly quieter
I read that as.....
Difference was they were different
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
*laughs*
please write more, this is sooooo amazing, and where does the pool come into it, its called pool party, lots of mention of party, oh wait......
you mean a PARTY AT THE POOL FROM YOUR POOL FREINDS
not a poolparty
*finally understands*
bye bye
xxx
 
Nemya
Dec 6, 2005 02:45 PM by: Nemya chapter 32
BUWAAAA SO AWESOME!!!!! x3

YOU WROTE MORE THANK YOU THANK YOU BUT I WILL HAVE TO BE GOING SOON SO NOT VERY LONG COMMENT WAAAUUU D:

Aaaanyways, hee hee, Seto go kill Joey. Everyone should kill Joey. Seto has waaay too much money. It's like there's no limit... o.O
I don't think it's a question of you working, it's SETO. He works non-stop. Heh heh. His love. His work. (And his darling little Mokie, of course.) What's wrong with the Kaiba mansion gardens?! I can imagine they'd be immaculate already. Heh heh. Call Bob the landscape gardener. La la la.

Oh no. An excuse to buy yet ANOTHER dress. I think there'll be no more room in your thousand wardrobes. Give 'em to me! You only use 'em once xP OH NO. "Hello Kaede darling", direct translation from evil grandparent language is "I'm planning your murder and it will be very soon" THEY ARE UP TO SOMETHING! A big plot twist in your story is that you find out Seto is a girl and he is having an affair with Joey, and your grandparents kill you bwahahahaaa just you wait I know that they are up to something...

And ha ha ha ha ha the conversation on the phone to Yuula/Takumi made me laugh so much xDDD Ah, they get on so well, but so weirdly xD Ak. It's my dad's Heeeeeeello thing *hides* Yes, they are so weird siblings. I love their little shouting match xD Lucky they get on so well x3 And the thing conversation with Yuula and Kaede is so like me and you conversation xD

Ha ha. Pity the staff at the swimming pool cannot even spell. And at a time like this."Congradulations" Tfeh. (Random word of no point) What is CPR? Sounds bad... Bleh. Oh deareth. Ha ha. Mrs. Kaiba. *snick* *sncik snick* Kaede Kaiba. xDDDDDD

*Recovers* Aaaanyways. Manning, a £50 part is /expensive/! xP Hey, do you not appreciate anything Seto does for you?! How ungrateful. Shall have to eat you. Just you wait. If the grandparents don't get you first.





BWAHAHHAHAAAAAAAAAA.
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Dec 4, 2005 10:41 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 31
sakura: and i dont even bother being nice to joey all the time. only cos of yami dearest 8glomps yami dearest*
yami (dearest): gerroff me o.O
sakura: anyways... joey and honda annoy me. not as much as kaiba annoys me. i corner kaiba and tell him to be good to you if he values his balls XD

okaaa thats enough now *locks everyone up in wardrobe with ritsu*
ritsu: waaaaaa.. too many people ;__;
gnomes: *starts dancing and singing* too many people! too many people lalala *are shoved in cupboard*
anyways... very good chapter! but at least joey told you, i mean that show he isnt as much of a prat as thought.. cept he is jerk to think you wanna get back with him.
and aaaaaah kaede and yuula are becoming more and more like their creators *runs away*
people in wardrobe: DONT RUN AWAY! LET US OUTTA HERE!!
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Dec 3, 2005 03:46 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 31
I got another chapter done on my story. If you can tell me how to delete chapters, that ve great.
 
Eoara
Dec 2, 2005 01:00 PM by: Eoara chapter 31
Ana says: I KNOW Joey's a twat...and im only nice to him for the sake of my darling Honda, whom i love very much, even if no one else does.

Kara (Stentiford)saya: yes, Joey is a twat, and a prick. and although Ana loves Honda, i do not, for Kuroumo and i have a special place in our hearts for one person only....the gooinator.actually, the goo as to share my heart....but never mind......

Anyhow, ma petite fille, very good story...me enjoyed mucho

#
pleaseth that thou will writeth more....merci pour votre hospitaliter.
 
Tillyenna
Dec 2, 2005 12:50 PM by: Tillyenna chapter 31
YAYNESSSS!!!!!!!!
THANKIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hmmmmmmm, i think joey's a twat
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Dec 2, 2005 10:13 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 30
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH YOU USED MY SAKURA TREE SYBOLISM ;______; MEANIE!!!

oh yeah i will have to write the extra chs for that someday before gu finds out about me forgetting to add usagi o.O

wtf? joey is such a bastard A BASTARD I TELL YOU HOW DARE HE TRY TO KILL YUULA!!!! *throttles joey*

grrr..
 
Tillyenna
Dec 1, 2005 11:34 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 30
JOEY!!!!!!1 *runs to slap him*
AWWWWWWW *is overwhelmed with cuteness*
please write more
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Nov 30, 2005 04:50 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 30
mm...no Cira :( jk. heheh. So, cool...not much else to say, is there. Excpet that Joey is a jerk and no one ever listens to me when i say that.
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Nov 30, 2005 04:44 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 29
Congratulations. Do I get to be in the wedding. *gives puppy dog eyes...no wait*gives Chibby eyes* So cool. heheh. But obvious. But COOL. No one ever gets married in my stories, and the reason why shall become apparent at the end of my story.
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Nov 30, 2005 04:40 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 29
I haven't read the chapter but...MY BROTHER'S GOING TO ASK YOU TO MARRY HIM ISN'T HE???? He is SO dead when he gts home. jk. I wonder what Cira's reaction will be...
 
Eoara
Nov 30, 2005 01:56 PM by: Eoara chapter 30
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW **yet again erupts with cuteness***
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Nov 30, 2005 08:23 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 29
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW SO CUTE!!!!!!!! MY LITTLE MANNING GETTING MARRIED!! AND IN A DRES THAT SAKURA WILL PICK OUT *HINT HINT* BECAUSE SHE IS SO GOOD AT PICKING OUT DRESSES HAHAHA!! BUT AAAAAW X3

aaah caps lock >__>
 
Nemya
Nov 29, 2005 02:00 PM by: Nemya chapter 29
ARGARGA AYAYAAAA WHAT THE HUH AYYAAAAAAA MIXED REACTION TIME x3

BUT AYAAYAYAYAYAYAYAAAA YOU WROTE MORE THANK THANK YOOOOUUU, HAWWY WAWWY X3 AND IT'S SOO GOOOOOD AND ARAGRAG SETO PROPOSED WHICH IS GOOOOD BUT BAD BECAUSE IT IS MEANING NEAR THE END OF THE STORY! D:

Hem. I knew Yuula was not schizophrenic. Pweh. And what do you mean "was that way generally" and suggested taking her to a mental asylum?! SHE IS NOT INSANE I TELL YOU, good job she recovered and back to normal, *phew*

YES. You have /tons/ of nice dresses, they cost loads, and you only wear 'em once?! HOW RICH ARE YOU!!?!?

AND ARAGRAG there are your grandparents, plotting your demise I tell you, YOUR DEMISE!!!!

Everyone staring at you and Seto as you are both such freeeaaaks. I don't think Seto likes communication.


Ha ha. Katy being nice to Seto. What is this world coming to, eh?

Kara crying (nearly) ooooh. Dear.

PLEASEY WEASY WRITE MORE PLEEEAAAAAASE!!!!
 
Nemya
Nov 29, 2005 01:48 PM by: Nemya chapter 28
*glomps*


YAYAYAYAAAAAA YOU WROTE MORE AND I MUST COMMENT BUT WHAT THE HUH THIS IS SUCH WEIRD CHAPTER AND AHHH YUULA IS GOING INSANE... I must stop typing in capitals now, however I admit she is going like me, only weh I am not schizophrenic.

Mweh heh heh. Aw, Yuula thinks she is going out with Ryou, I hope Duke took it that Yuula said /not/ to going out with him urk not agin please xP

Well, onto next chapter and awaaa Mokie's awake too and NO DON'T YOU EVER COME BACK AGAIN DOOK! YOU ARE NOT WELCOME HEEEERE!

NOT WELCOME.

I'm not insane.
Marik: Yeah right.

Mel: Onto next chapter, sorry for short-ish-ish comment and non-existant on last chapter xP
 
Eoara
Nov 29, 2005 01:34 PM by: Eoara chapter 29
AEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW *************ERUPTS WITH CUTENESS TO INFINITY**


SOO CUTE AM ALMOST CRYING!!!!!
 
Tillyenna
Nov 29, 2005 01:34 PM by: Tillyenna chapter 29
CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*first comment dance*
*my freinds gonna get married dance*
*just a general dance dance*
awwwwww, you two are soooooo cute together, congratulatios, awwwww. im so pleased for you, aw i was just like, awwwww, and even more awww,
ah im actually bursting with happiness now
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
ps i know i said i wanna be nice, but NICE TO SETO!!!! thats just ott
 
Tillyenna
Nov 29, 2005 01:29 PM by: Tillyenna chapter 28
YUULA HAS GONE INSANE...
omg this is so weird, because she's insane, and the doctors think they should send her to the pink castle with the ment in white coats, and yet she is just acting like mel normally does...
weird
perhaps mel is insane
you never know
well actually we do
she is
anyhoooooooo
coool story
please write more
please
xxx
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Nov 29, 2005 10:58 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 28
aaaah nooo wtf did you do to YUULA?? you ruined her.. she is turning into mel!! aaaaaaah
 
Eoara
Nov 29, 2005 10:43 AM by: Eoara chapter 28
AND...Mel didnt say " I'm going to eat yiour toes" ONCE today
 
Eoara
Nov 29, 2005 10:42 AM by: Eoara chapter 28
I READ IT FIRST...nad yuula is TOO fast turning into mel...

anyways great chappy...i LOVED it...hehehe
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Nov 25, 2005 07:03 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 27
OKay...what about Ryou? AND THAT WAS SOOOO AWESOME!! THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!! ^__^ even though me part made me sad...but that's about how it went down, yes. jk. I just fall asleep making up fan fiction so I think about these things a lot. I'm no insane, kay. Well, thanks!!!
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Nov 24, 2005 10:53 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 27
oooh dear.. mel ruins everything XD

heheheheheh.. write more hp pleeeaaaase
 
Tillyenna
Nov 24, 2005 10:32 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 27
OMFFFFFFFHFOSG
thats a bit of an akward moment, i dont know why im typing this as im sitting next tpo you ish, but hey...
WRITE MORE doof
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Nov 19, 2005 03:30 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 26
Okay: 2 things:
1. If you don't write more soon, I shall kill you. I don't care if I don't live in Britian. I shall kill you anyway.
2. I am gonna get some pictures up soon!! ^_^
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Nov 19, 2005 03:23 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 25
OH....MY...GOSH...0.o
 
Tillyenna
Nov 19, 2005 04:11 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 26
 
Tillyenna
Nov 19, 2005 04:06 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 25
...bitch
 
Tillyenna
Nov 19, 2005 04:01 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 24
Thank you....TOE, sorry mel infcted my blood by writing I love hagrid on my finger......
oh well
COOLO STORY
 
Lanathae
Nov 17, 2005 12:32 PM by: Lanathae chapter 8
how the hell can everyone else write such long comments...
oh well....
very good ^^
*sniff* but i'm still not in it
 
Lanathae
Nov 17, 2005 12:17 PM by: Lanathae chapter 7
yay ^^ this is soooo gooood
i hope i'm in it soon >
 
Nemya
Nov 16, 2005 01:52 PM by: Nemya chapter 26
Manning, you have got the "We all love Clover" ssong stuck in my head. Still.






Curse you.
 
Nemya
Nov 16, 2005 01:50 PM by: Nemya chapter 26
Ha ha, Ani. Of course you have to comfort Anzu. And then she will steal your Yami from you x3
 
Nemya
Nov 16, 2005 01:49 PM by: Nemya chapter 26
RAGRAGAR YAYAYYAYAAAAAAAA YOU WROTE MORE THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU AND THERE IS LOTS OF BLOOOD AND VIOLENCE BWAAAHAA THANK YOU SOO AWESOME YAYAYAYAAAA WAAUUUU THANK YOOOU!

Well, anyways, lovey-loved it, so awesome as lots and looots of violence x3
So I shall do pointies:

-AARRGAR the grandparents are dragging you away they're evil I tell you, get away before it is TOO LATE!
-JOEY SHALL DIE!!! He is a evil little toe and should be EATEN I TELL YOU!
-HA HA HA HA DOOK IS CRYING! Wha ha ha ha doofus *snick* Thank you for making him cry^^
-Hee hee, Mokie is unconcious. Katy and Mokie have seriosuly shifty kids. And I mean SERIOUSLY shifty.

SETO. IS.




CRYING.

Heh heh. He does cry, for his poor darling little Mokie. He loves him. x3

*Twitch* Kissing Seto. Bleurk. There is a good reason you shouldn't, and it isn't because you might be seen.

Of course you're still a slave. You're SETO'S slave. *Shudder*

BWA HA HA HA HA And there is the torture bit yayayayaaa stoning to death!! Awesome. Hee hee. And lots of blood.

Oooh, and blood spilling out of her mouth x3 And then she dies!!! And what d'you mean, SAnura wasn't like other people?!?!?! EXCUSE ME! She was perfectly normal. *Nod*



And that's the end of that chapter.
(Get it?!?! HA HA AHHAHAHAAAA)
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Nov 16, 2005 01:37 PM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 26
*calms down*

hey how come i have to comfort TEA?? I DONT LIKE TEA!! SHE IS AN EVIL YAMI STEALING FREAK!!!

grrr.. tenshi is evil. but sweet that she is so obsessed with the mokie.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah sanura cant die cos it ruined my entire thingymabobby.. well the sanura bit does but the being scared that yuula shall die bit is!! she can be in accident... but no scared she will die cos of ancient egypt thingy. grr

I HAVE FINISHED MY BIO CW!!!!

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah its 9:38!! how did that happen?? i am tired and want to read my book then sleeeeeep zzzzz
 
Eoara
Nov 16, 2005 01:37 PM by: Eoara chapter 26
thats is so cute...and so sad. awww. so sad. aww

*cries*
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Nov 16, 2005 01:35 PM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 26
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *cries*
 
Lanathae
Nov 16, 2005 11:47 AM by: Lanathae chapter 6
mmm mint choc chip >< *drool*
 
Lanathae
Nov 16, 2005 11:20 AM by: Lanathae chapter 5
aww that's sooo sweeet ^^
 
Lanathae
Nov 16, 2005 10:23 AM by: Lanathae chapter 4
awww nice ^^
*reads more* ^^
 
Lanathae
Nov 16, 2005 10:16 AM by: Lanathae chapter 3
^^ sooo goood
*goes to read more*
my comments are so short compaired to mel's >
 
Lanathae
Nov 16, 2005 10:05 AM by: Lanathae chapter 2
*sniff* am i ever in you story... thought not, oh well
*keeps reading*
 
Lanathae
Nov 16, 2005 10:01 AM by: Lanathae chapter 1
cool cool...
BUT SOOO LOOOONG ><
.... ok then, onto the next chapter.... i hope they are not all this long >
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Nov 16, 2005 08:29 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 25
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DONT DIE YUULA!!! ;________;
 
Nemya
Nov 15, 2005 01:41 PM by: Nemya chapter 25
Joey. Is. An. Idiot.

But YAYAYYAYAAAAAA, YOU WROTE MORE, THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOOOUUU I LOOVE IT, T'IS SUCH AWESOME CHAPTEEEERRRR! Shall go through pointies:
-How many dresses do you /have/?!
-argahe oh no it's your grandma and she is soooo creepy! Little do you know, she is plotting to kill you!
-Mmmmm Chinese food sooo tasty *drools* wish I was there, actually Yuula is there, sort of, in a non-eating way xD
-Seto poisoned the necklace, so when you put it on, you die. BWAHAHAHAAA feel Seto's hatred!
-Aw, story of Kaede's parents and family so sad wau D:

And then... Awesomeness. Lots and lots of chi scene. And we all know who's responsible *glares at Joey* You little toefestation.
Awww, you saved little girl^^ Kindy-windy^^

Seto, you know you want to blub your eyes right off. It's his darling MOKIE we're talking about here. Make 'im cry. You know you want to. Heh heh.

Ahhh, stained red with blood, such a lovely description x3 Hee hee. The suspense! Lots of chi. Lots and lots of chi.

Awesome job! YAYAAAAA cannot wait for next chapter!!!!! Please write more soon!!!

Did I mention Joey is a total toe? He needs to be eaten.
 
Eoara
Nov 15, 2005 01:08 PM by: Eoara chapter 25
oh, and joey is a prick
 
Eoara
Nov 15, 2005 01:08 PM by: Eoara chapter 25
AWWWWW....you HAVE to write more RIGHT now...as i say so..it was so cute. i am shcoked. so sad. poor yuula.

so sad.


awww.

*is shaking*

poor yuula.
 
Nemya
Nov 14, 2005 12:56 PM by: Nemya chapter 24
AGARGARA YOU TOE YOU PUT UP SO MUCH, THANK YOU BUT ARAGRAGA GET BACK TALKING ON MSN NOW PLEASE! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR WRITING SOO MUCH, but.... I cannot comment on it all. Sorry D:

Well aaaanyways, awesome lot of chapters. Seto is a freeeaaak. And lying at the bottom of the pool is fun... Unless your ears start popping... That's painful D:

Ha ha. What Yuula can be when she grws up. Urrrrkeh. Well, I guess Dook can get lots of money from doing his game designing and then she doesn't have to get a job, eh? xD

Actually, then she'd have to stay home and look after the kids. Nooo. She can hide in her bedroom. Or make Dook take 'em away. That's it. Bwa ha.
 
Eoara
Nov 14, 2005 11:30 AM by: Eoara chapter 24
OWAH i did write a long comment. it is mainly blurb

ack my mother is making cauliflower cheese.

it reeks

**vomits**

i hate cauliflower
 
Eoara
Nov 14, 2005 11:29 AM by: Eoara chapter 24
BUT SITTING ON THE BOTTOM OF THE POOL IS SO MUCH FUN. esp. if the lifeguards are cute. and also if the guy who taught you how to do it is incredibly hot and french. he had a weird name tho. **reminisces** ah, it was young love

Anyways, i just reread it all, and compie is no longer beiing crappy. although i am meant to be doing chemmy. Oh well. heh.

i have decided that all my characters really are seriously like me. Apart from Ana can hold her breath. and i cant. i was trying to hold my breath earlier, and i nearly died

might have been as it was freezing cold.

and also because i was at the top and end of walking up a really steep hill

with my school bag

Oh, look i wrote a long comment?!!!!

you#d better write more now, as i have made appreciative noises throughout, and given up my future career as a chemist to read this (tch! whatever)

i am now thibking about what ana can be when she grows up. hmm

after her dressage career, cos she retires when she is 29, and she does a bit of music for a while, a few ickly baby recitals.

maybe she and Honda do just lve in france, with lots of money as her father dies and leaves the houses to her and Marc. oh

they could open a ski resort

and have ONE child

ONE.
and it will probably be a boy

as they are more hyperactive than little girls

and actually quite fun.

sam is so sweet. **thinks about cute little sam**

ok. great story. write more. cheers dudette!
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Nov 13, 2005 11:48 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 21
hmnm...hey-gues what/ I AM NO LONGER GROUNDED!!! AND I updated me story!!
 
Eoara
Nov 12, 2005 11:34 AM by: Eoara chapter 23
WHERE DO I SAY...ANYWHERE? IN MY STORY, THAT HONDA WEARS A GOLD SUIT???? where?? answer: NO WHERE. ani is SUCH bad influence on you. he does NOT wear a gold suit. and i dont understand, if you say you are going to change it so that you dont go out with seto, but honda instead, why are you so mean?

or, as i had already presumed, had Ani yet again attacked the computer.

Now i consider it, that is a much more rationaly answer.

hehehe Honda is only there because of me, arent i special?

oh, gooey says he likes you, even if you hate him, as you are a high school guy.

i just told him we dont go to high school, we got to SENIOR school, so now he is in a corener crying.

actually, he is in my room crying, so in a minute he'll find ym school uniform.

HE BETTER NOT TRY IT ON...*runs to check*

phew. he didnt


anywaysm this chapter was great bub...I HATE THIS SONG....ok track is changed. but yeah. great chapter write more. must go. food.
 
Tillyenna
Nov 12, 2005 10:59 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 23
*burts*
THATS SOOOOOOOOOO SWEEEEEEEEET, please write more.....please?
 
Tillyenna
Nov 12, 2005 10:57 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 22
*cries* thats real sad......but then again...it is honda, so i guess its not so bad.
thank you for the cooooool room *hugs* its grat....yes there is something seriously wrong with yuula's mentla health, i still remember when she tuned to me in biology and said...."Katy.....I need mental help" "laughs head off"
 
Tillyenna
Nov 11, 2005 12:01 PM by: Tillyenna chapter 21
WHATS ALL THIS ABOUT NOT SLEEPING WITH MOKIE!!!!!!!! how evil can you guys get?????????? well i suppose we can always lead the seto doof into believing that im not sleeping with him.......
YAY PARTY TIME *starts to dance* lol
 
Tillyenna
Nov 11, 2005 11:56 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 20
*throws up* not only becuase your chap is soppy, but becuase ive been ill....whoops...
PLEASE WRITE MORE
and say hi to the doofuses ta your house
 
Eoara
Nov 11, 2005 03:54 AM by: Eoara chapter 21
HEEEELLLLOOO...i read it. but it wont be a long comment as i am going to bombard melly with comments. um, in my story they are all on spirng break at the moment. so well, yeah.

hehehe
mokie and tenchi how cute

what was i going to say???

oh yeah...its a short chapter, were you feeling alright? cos i think you might be coming down with something. i hope you are ok,hehehhe

WRITE MORE!!
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Nov 10, 2005 02:04 PM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 21
AAAAAAAAYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA i bet i was one of the first to be invited *swells up* aayaaa.

anyways.. great distraction from my coursework!! i have actually forgotten everything i have done. i have only just dont my planning. aaaah!! and i have chemistry too ;____;
grek we get rs back monday to redo... and i get french then too je pense.

im sorry but i am hating tenshi. she is so evil and annoying and has no consideration for others. and seto (for a change) is right!! mokie is too young to go out with anyone. he isnt allowed to until he yuula has an affair with him while she is married to dookie. did you know that ryou 9kid) is mokies???
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Nov 10, 2005 12:30 PM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 20
hmm.. call it "for the love of shopping.."

AAAAYAAAA SHOPPING I LOVE ORDERING PEOPLE TO TRY ON CLOTHES!!! okaaay.. you made tom seem really boring XD

ack i have to go read other crap.. but we learnt in RS today that you should never bel;iev it when teenage boys say "i love you", they just want you to take of your underwear XP
 
Nemya
Nov 9, 2005 12:49 PM by: Nemya chapter 20
Call it 'the neverending mass of parties'. There really are too many. Seriously. Too many mega rich people who can afford to have more than a party-food-and-games party.

Won't leave me a long comment eh?! You are evil. And all the long comments I give you....

So I am cutting this short. Ha ha. But, Yuula doesn't appear to be there, as when you go to pick up all the friends she is not there. Smesh.

Well, leaving then Bwaha. x3
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Nov 9, 2005 06:52 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 20
^_^ That was SO not a rubbishy chapter. And sorry I can't help you with the chapter name, if you've noticed mine suck majorly. I suppose you could call it The Second Birthday Party or Two-timing the Two-Timer or what not.
 
Eoara
Nov 9, 2005 01:02 AM by: Eoara chapter 20
awwww.....so cuteness!!! i loveths it!...what was i going to say...hohumm...oh yeah. title, how about

'Love's got a hold on his life'

or something like that. its a really hard one to think about

but it was a good chapter, although a short one for Miss I-WRITE-THE-LONGEST-CHAPTERS-IN-THE-UNIVERSE but....nevermind

hehehehehe

i read it before mel hahahaha


and i shud be doing englsih or blodgily...but i may as well just write my story as i cant be bothered to do any serious work. so tattaa for now, mi amiga! tres bon work!!!
 
Tillyenna
Nov 2, 2005 10:31 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 19
thanks for the detail....really.....thanks (please note IM BEING SARCASTIC!!!!!!!!)
apart from that is real good
 
Tillyenna
Nov 2, 2005 10:22 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 18
SCUMBAG.....yay, and hmmmmmm i think yuula is being TOOOOOOOO much like mel, although she isi mel, we could er...dispose of some of the less apetising characteristics (what am I on????)
 
Tillyenna
Nov 2, 2005 10:18 AM by: Tillyenna chapter 17
THE SCUM IS OUT.....and the rich guy is in.....i think she has the right idea there.
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Nov 2, 2005 06:45 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 15
Woah, woah, woah. Wait. Question! What happened to her parents?
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Nov 2, 2005 06:44 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 19
Of course you would add 7 billion chapters while I was grounded!!

*Keade woke up the next day and walked quietly out the door. To her surprise, there was tall girl (not as tall as her) standing there. She had orange hair, blue eyes that were glaring at her, and a millenium item pointing threateninling at her chest. "What the heck are you doing with my brother?" she snarled"

Heh, couldn't resist. If gets much cakier, I won't be able to read it :( Sorry, parental unit rule: I can go to this sight but no "cake". Sorry>_< Please don't hate me!
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Nov 1, 2005 12:58 PM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 19
HA!! HA!! I FINALLY REMEMBERED TO ADD YOU TO FAVS *dances*
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Oct 31, 2005 10:14 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 19
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh this is the one i read in the library before i read the one before and the stupid L5 turned off the power and i couldnt finish it grek...
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Oct 31, 2005 10:12 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 18
urk.. i was supposed to be doing biology coursework.. and then mel distracted me and i had loadsa comments and messages >____>
 
Nemya
Oct 31, 2005 09:31 AM by: Nemya chapter 17
You doofus. You yelled at Joey for cheating on you, but you were KISSING SETO IN THE LAST CHAPTER!!!!! You scumbag!!!

Nyuu, Ani I only ever said, "It would be funny if Joey cheated on you with Seto" That was all I said. Waauuu *Hides*
 
Nemya
Oct 31, 2005 09:27 AM by: Nemya chapter 19
Sorry. Really lack of comments D:

You are uploading things too fast! Way too fast! Like 3 chapters a day! I cannot give long comments for each! I don't even know if I have read this properly D:

So I love your story tonny tonny tons, but if you upload at this fast a pace I will not have time to do comments, let alone long ones! But I shall try my best. Sorry D:




I need to be punished.

PS: I DONT WANT MORE THAN 3 KIDS. And call a girl Ichigo and a boy Ryou. And yeah, have Dook and Marik fight over Yuula, especially if it results in one of their deaths (particurly Dook's, as then Yuula won't have to have kids)

PPS: You and Seto getting too lovey dovey xP Bleurk. Cake overload.

PPS: I'm so sorry for short comment D: Upload a chapter every few nights, and then maybe I will have the time to give you long comments. Sorry...

*Goes to burn my head*
 
Eoara
Oct 31, 2005 05:13 AM by: Eoara chapter 19
its sooo cute!! and you should know...i gave up lunch for this...sort of. but its so cute. and damn right ana would kill tea. i have the right mind to pull ana out of my subconcious right now. hhe. still, its very good....methinks i can guess what seto was trying to say. just wait till you see the aboslutely brilliant picture i drew of the two of them


hehehhee


WRITE MORE, BUB
 
Eoara
Oct 30, 2005 01:51 PM by: Eoara chapter 18
yayayay! you wrote more...and ana has a black and blue face...and joey is on the floor...where he belongs. muahahaha. and no one is talking to each other. and marik is hyper. oh dear. such a pity. he ryou DO make a cute couple...as ryou is the silent type.,...i think. anyhow....very good

i likes it. and there is going to be party!!! yayaya! partyuyy!! i likeths party...
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Oct 30, 2005 11:12 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 17
oh yeah.. can arik and dookie have a fight like the hugh grant/ coling firth ones in bridget jones diary??? so hilarious XD
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Oct 30, 2005 11:07 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 17
other half:

and aaaahh joey is cheating on you! that would have been a really good surprise if SOMEONE *throws gnomes at mel* hadnt been talking about it!!!aaaaaaaargh i will strangle her tomorrow. aaaw i like mai as well, mai/ joey valentine heehee XD

and manning.. loads of people drink heavily alcoholic substances at 6 in the morning.. those who have been to ALL NIGHT PARTIES!! whay-hay! except ive never been to one ;___;

heehee.. while you and seto go out can you please force him to allow you to give him a makeover XD heehee

and AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWW you and kaiba are finally together!! pity he isnt a cow lol..

kaiba: moooooooooooooooooooooo

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH *runs away*
 
pink_lettuce_leaf
Oct 30, 2005 11:06 AM by: pink_lettuce_leaf chapter 17
wow!! a short chapter!! *sits here stunned*

heeheee... i always knew you were mad manning!! talking to