The One Piece Story! by Anime_Crazy_K-chan

May 25, 2008 08:10 PM by: nina94 chapter 0

I love chapter 13.^^

Oct 16, 2006 07:40 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 14

*still trying to picture zoro in a suit*
woah the chapter may be even the STORY is over!!
and here i was trying to imagine the world's greatest swordsman in a suit...
well better go do my hw

Oct 16, 2006 07:28 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 13

My name is Inigo Montoya; you killed my father now prepare to die!
ahhh...great quote right there...
so anyways...
only one more chapter to go and i just realized i have TONS of homework to do oh and btw it's 'almost' ten!!!
ugh
stupid addictive story!!!!

Oct 16, 2006 07:12 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 12

ummm...
woah my song is on!!!!!
so anyways...
mihawk versus zoro, eh?
you've got to admit Dracule/Juraquille has a pretty cool name
so anyways...must read more before it's tale of two city time!!!

Oct 16, 2006 05:13 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 11

ummm...banana...war...
HECK YEAH!!!!!!!!!!
well i must go for now...

Oct 16, 2006 04:41 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 0

wow it's been a while...
i am such a freakin slow reader...
well i guess i better finish what i started
:-D

Oct 16, 2006 04:28 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 10

luffy...baka...
sanji...insane...
me...addicted...

Oct 16, 2006 04:18 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 9

*scared of next chapters events*
ummm...*twitch*
in...der..esting...

Oct 16, 2006 04:05 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 8

luffy + tonfas = BRILLIANT IDEA, PATRICK F!!!!
just BRILLIANT!!!!
so anyways
this story is like a freakin drug, man...

Oct 16, 2006 03:49 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 7

man this whole sanji and zoro war is very amusing
so anyways
your freakin story is freakin addictive dangit!!!!
i hope you're happy now

Oct 16, 2006 03:37 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 6

that one day is today and yesterday
wait...that didn't make sense...
oh well...

Oct 16, 2006 03:27 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 5

sanji...sanji...sanji...
so anyways
very VERY interesting
addicting too...

Oct 15, 2006 07:06 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 4

*wonders what jasmine's secret could POSSIBLY be* thanks for ruining the secret setokaibaslittlesis
well anyways
MUST...READ...SANJI...GO HYPER!!!!!
it's only 9 i think i can read some more...

Oct 15, 2006 06:54 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 3

zolo is trying to get everyone drunk isn't he?!?!?*glares at setokaibaslittlesis* (sort of kind of inside joke, Anime_Crazy_K-chan)
so anyways...
i loved the beautiful insult fight
along with the rest of the chapter so in other words
es muy interesante

Oct 15, 2006 06:32 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 2

still interesting...

Oct 14, 2006 02:07 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 1

interesante

Oct 14, 2006 12:34 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 3

Man, that is one big barrel for all of their feet to fit on it.

Oct 13, 2006 02:58 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 1

Bwaha. This is one of two stories on my favorites list.

Jul 25, 2006 05:05 PM by: Shearay752 chapter 6

lol
i didn't think it was true when my friend told me about a female cow named steve in a one piece fanfiction
i haven't even read the other chapters and i was lmfao!!!
maybe one day i'll read the whole thing
shea

Jun 22, 2006 09:10 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0

It can't be OVER!????

Apr 10, 2006 11:31 AM by: iluvanime chapter 14

*begs* don't tell me it's the eeennnndddddd!!!???

Apr 10, 2006 10:04 AM by: iluvanime chapter 6

*hugs stevey* this is like....the 1241489723057157 time i read this.........AND I STILL LOVE IT!!!!*runs wit stevey,sanji,and draging zoro,who's sleeping*

Mar 9, 2006 07:04 AM by: luffylover222 chapter 13

YYYAAAYY!!! ZORO WON!!! AND THEY GOT DRUNK AGAIN!!!!!!!!w00t!!!

Mar 9, 2006 06:44 AM by: luffylover222 chapter 10

poor patrick.D! sounded like it hurt....i never new sanji could be so hyper when he dosent have a smoke for a few days!

keep it up k-chan!

good work!

Dec 12, 2005 05:51 PM by: MrsRoronoaZoro chapter 14

lmao!!xd i love this chapter....i would DIE in those kind of resteraunts...i LOATH dresses and skirts.....X_____X oy...i dare not think of it....anyways FUNNY @$$ CHAPTER!!XD IT'S MY FAVORITE!X3

Dec 4, 2005 04:17 PM by: Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl chapter 13

YAY FOR DRUNKED NESS!!! XDD

Nov 21, 2005 06:16 PM by: MrsRoronoaZoro chapter 13

WHEEEEEEE!!!ZORO WON!!ZORO WON!!XD
BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!MIHAWK!!ZORO PWNS YOU!!KICKED YOUR LITTLE FRENCH @$$ HE DID!!! oy,i'm so happy!X3 another fun chapter!!wheee!!X3

Nov 19, 2005 05:07 PM by: GothicDancer chapter 13

I've noticed that your writing style has improved very much over the time you've written this story. I would have put a little bit of the battle between Zoro and Mihawk in. You know, just little tidbits of what happened in the beginning, but that's just me. Good job thus far!

Nov 3, 2005 10:08 PM by: MrsRoronoaZoro chapter 12

WHOOT!!!ZORO!!YOU GONNA KICK MIHAWK'S LITTLE FRENCH @$$!!!!!I BELIEVE IN YOU!!!!X3 I DO BELIEVE IN FAIRES!!I DO I DO!!!!X3....wait...wrong thing...
Zoro: -___-; bakayaro
XP

Oct 27, 2005 01:17 PM by: PuNkGuRl14 chapter 12

DUDE !!!!!!!!!!!!! write more !!!!!!! gosh

Oct 25, 2005 05:02 PM by: PuNkGuRl14 chapter 6

YAYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yhey got a cow !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! named steve !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wuhooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

Oct 25, 2005 04:55 PM by: PuNkGuRl14 chapter 5

PINK IS A COLOUR !!
LOL i liked that part and the screaming part lol keep writing

Oct 22, 2005 11:26 AM by: Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl chapter 12

KIck his @$$, Zoro-nii-san! Yay suspense!! Dude, whats up too? I havent talked to ya in AGES!!

Oct 12, 2005 02:52 PM by: moonlitdemoness09 chapter 12

GAH!! NEW CHAPPIE!!
GAH!! JASMINE, U RETARD!!
hee hee. salami...if Zoro didnt know something, why the hell did he ask Luffy of all people? and what IS solijnie? anywayz, great chap!! WOOT ZORO!! u go whoop Mihawks @$$ ^^

Sep 24, 2005 01:42 PM by: Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl chapter 11

BANANA WARR!! I want to have a banana war... O.o

Sep 21, 2005 05:31 PM by: moonlitdemoness09 chapter 11

HAHAHA!!! i smiled the entire time! ^^ and i wanna join the banana war...this is great! remember to knock before walking into a doorless area. *nods head*

Sep 20, 2005 05:51 PM by: MrsRoronoaZoro chapter 11

Zoro fishing?*sqeal*kills the first thing that annoys him?!?!*normal voice* shoot.....YAY I'M DOOMED!!!XD BANANA WAR!!WHOOT!!!XD

Sep 9, 2005 03:30 PM by: moonlitdemoness09 chapter 10

huzzah 4 new chappie!! yay u!! poor sanji...i see what u meant. at least he wasnt crushed with boulders like mine. i woulda blushed too if i saw zoro shirtless ^^

Sep 8, 2005 03:01 PM by: Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl chapter 10

whoo! We're offically Bouny Buddies!!! ^w^ Heh. Sanji sounds like he gave up the cigs and go hooked on coffee XDDDD..... oh, and I have a request: Could you draw Rach's bounty poster please?

Sep 6, 2005 11:49 AM by: Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl chapter 9

Katherine's got her wanted piccy taken...muhaha..... I still need to draw Rach's T.T God,I'm so fsking lazy... >.

Sep 3, 2005 08:03 PM by: Zoro_Fan_Hikari chapter 8

YAY a chapter all about me even though i read it quite along time ago. ^^ LONG LIVE KITTY PEOPLE!

Sep 3, 2005 01:04 PM by: moonlitdemoness09 chapter 9

yay!!new chappie!!! life is worth living again!!! o and tell phillip he's the kewlest cuz he's short and has a cow friend. write more!!! plz!!!

Sep 1, 2005 05:02 PM by: MrsRoronoaZoro chapter 8

DON'T WORRY JASMINE I'M HALF CAT TOO!!X3of course in real life i don't and i want them.....oh well TT__TT ANOTHER GOOD CHAPPIE!! WHEEEEE!XD I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!

Sep 1, 2005 02:48 PM by: moonlitdemoness09 chapter 8

im like a mix of phillip and jasmine. im short as heck and i turn into a panther. yay feline-related ppl! ya'll dont know me, but who gives a frock? i love the story!! it gives me a reason not to go suicidal!! *favs (insert freakishly large # here) times*

Sep 1, 2005 02:28 PM by: GothicDancer chapter 8

Lotsa more kitties!!

"I speak meat." XD

Sep 1, 2005 12:06 PM by: Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl chapter 8

Bleeeeeeeeeeeeeh.”

“Meeeeeeeeeeeeat.” XDDD Sp34k1ng "m34t'! ish aweomse!! ^^ Yay! More cat peoples! ^^

Aug 30, 2005 11:03 AM by: moonlitdemoness09 chapter 7

uhh...im guessing phillip is short? and he frreaks when ppl call him short. well dont feel bad! im 15 and only 4 ft 10!!!im short as heck too!short ppl unite!

Aug 29, 2005 01:06 PM by: MrsRoronoaZoro chapter 7

WHEEE!!ZORO'S ANNOYED!!XD YAY MORE STEVE!!XD YAY!!ANOTHER COOL CHAPTER!!XD

Aug 27, 2005 12:57 PM by: Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl chapter 7

Yay! Nudder great chappie! ^^

Aug 23, 2005 05:08 PM by: MrsRoronoaZoro chapter 6

WHEEEEEE STEVE!!!!XD I LOVE THE SMALL COW!!!!Luffy is so frickin stupid it's funneh!!!!XD

Aug 22, 2005 04:11 PM by: GothicDancer chapter 6

I love the steak scene. I was laughing pretty hard by that point.

"Green haired meanie." *snickers*

Aug 22, 2005 12:14 PM by: Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl chapter 6

OMG I LOVE STEVE!! XDD That hammck thing reminds me of what happened to me and Val in Quebec, only on swings. She hit me, who swung and hit a tree >.

Jul 20, 2005 10:47 AM by: Anime_Crazy_K-chan chapter 5

Patrick D: BUT YELLING IS GOOOOOOD!!!

xD Muaha! That part was the greatest thing I've ever writen. Muahahaha. xD

Jul 19, 2005 05:37 PM by: MrsRoronoaZoro chapter 5

WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YELLING!!!!!!!XDHIIIIIII ZORO!!!I'M YELLING!!!HOW ABOUT YOU
Zoro:SHUT THE HELL UP!!!!!!!!
WHEEEEEEEE FUNNY STORY!!!!!!!XDRIGHT ZORO?!?!
Zoro:Grrr....STOP YELLING
XD

Jul 19, 2005 03:08 PM by: Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl chapter 5

“WHY ARE WE YELLING?!”
I LIKE TO YELL!”
“PINK IS A COLOUR!” XDDD Thats so random, ish aweshome! ^^
OO...looks like someone has a crush....

Jul 10, 2005 02:13 PM by: MrsRoronoaZoro chapter 4

YAY!!!THE STORY CAME BACK!!XD I LOVE IT SO FAR!XD WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ZORO!!!!!!!XD

Jun 20, 2005 03:34 PM by: Topaz_Dragon chapter 3

**clap clap** this rocks it's deinatly going in my favorite!!! YAY!!! ROCKNESS THE K-CHAN-NESS DOES!! WOOP WOOP!!!!

Jun 17, 2005 06:16 PM by: GothicDancer chapter 3

When the Straw Hats are drunk, funny things happen. I remember this yaoi story I read once...XDDD

Jun 17, 2005 02:58 PM by: Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl chapter 3

OMG OMG DRUNKEDNESHHHHH!!!!

Jun 17, 2005 01:27 PM by: Topaz_Dragon chapter 2

OO you are talented! boy oh boy!!!! and phillip has a cape? wish i had a cape! ((little goth girl here d^^b)) THIS ROX!!!!!!!!

Jun 17, 2005 01:21 PM by: Topaz_Dragon chapter 1

awesome! nice and long! and very detailed!!!!!! ONWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!! ^^Faves**

Jun 15, 2005 02:15 PM by: Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl chapter 1

heehee^^ me likes!