that was so sad! and then happy but i'm still sad! omg i can't belive you made a fan fic were riku dies. my gosh it was awesome yet depressing and yet again awesome.
YEEEEE! *sob* so . .happy! Long live Riku! OO! and the ending is really grasping! what is going to happen? is there a new enemy? O hey! I've got a great idea! U remeber that one request u did for me with my KH OC? Would you pleeease put her in your next story as a keyblade warrior too?! that would be so awesome! I'll do anything in return! Pkease consider it! thank you and great story!!
Hooray for the dragon balls!!! Riku is alive!!!! I am glad... If any one in KH deserves to die it's Sora. He can be a pathetic weakling sometimes... Until your fics I thought of him as a total sissy. Now I've come to respect Sora (a little.)
And I'm almost done reading all your KH fics (saved them On my memory chip)
Oh My God, I loved it. after the third paragraph i started tearing up. uh sean, uh will you give me some writing tips? im about to write a stor- Well acctually i am already writing it
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YYEEAA!!! KIRA'S NOT DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WWWOOOO HOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(Ignore the crazy maniac writing this comment)
Riku LIVES!!!!!!!!! I Creied of saddness at beginning and of happiness at the end. I love this ending a lot better. Write a golden years to this one!!! PLEASE!!!
OMG! that was great! *tears forming in my eyes* I'm so happy that they used the dragon balls. this was so cool! it was great! I dub this alternative ending to be.....MAJOR W00TNESS! oh yeah....i love your work! keep it up! Viva La Lord Cavendish! (wait...that's not right...ah who cares)
Crowd of people: WE DO!
me: Sora, Riku,....and everybody else from the story! *start running, being chased by formentioned people*
I'M SO HAPPY!!!!! *dances all around* *notices the 'or so they thought...* *pales* THOSE ASSHOLES WON'T BE COMING TO TRY AND KILL THEM RIGHT!? WHAT DOES THAT 'OR SO THEY THOUGHT' MEAN ANYWAY!!!!! TEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow...no one has commented......this story really brings up my spirits after reading the origanl(sp) ending.....i really like this one.....i feel so much happier...i can finally sleep with out thinking about riku