Absolutly beautiful. The mood comes across perfectly and the length is very good, not too long, not too short. I love it!

omg this is so sad! did he kill zim, or did zim kill himself, or what happened? poor zim... this is very touching. good work i can't stop reading it either!
yeah, at some times, it seems that zim & dib are so much alike that they could also be friends.

Wow. this poem is so sad, I can't stop reading it.

omg i sooo believe u should put more poetry on here.....ur such a great writer...... o.O ...... and what makes it even better i think just about any1 can relate to this in some way....^_^

Cool. Its sad... poor zim... and for that matter poor dib.