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That's so funny!

Let see, no Jak Yaoi, no sex, no cussing, no heavy violence... What the hell! What kind of story is this? Most stories are all like, Ooo, Jak loves Errol, let's see, get in bed, do some unmentionables, and boom. Errol's pregnant. But, you didn't put any of that crap in here. I wanna read more of your stories for their PG ratedness. (Take that as a complement)

lol, plz continue *faves*

CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plz

keep going with the story plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i luv it when there stuck together!!!lol

jaklines not an idiot. she just has an addiction thats all ^_^

lollollollollollollollollol! lots of lols fweh heh ^^ very funny! tell me when you get another chapter up okay?

thats hilarious! i read it out loud to meh lil sis cuz it was so funny! poor daxter

and jakline is such an idiot. i mean get the piture nobody wants comments with tons o' cussing all over them. so what if she only said one cus word i dun like her. she gets upset too eastily

omg plz plz continue ,this is very funny ,it rox

This is hilarious so far! I hate those dreaded words "To be continued" Because I long for what's going to happen next XD Great job!

Can't Jak fly up to the ceiling?

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What the #### is going on? This is, weird but very funny. NO SLASH, YAOI GUY THINGS OH GOD NO

A wonderful start indeed....
80's music will rule planet Milk!

*gasp* AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH!!!! That is hilarios! You made me laugh out loud! That is rare!