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Submitted: 2005-07-21, Updated: 2005-07-21,
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Movies (25) > Charlie and The Chocolate Factory (275)
[Depp Wonka x Older Charlie] Charlie's life was great until a rough patch hit him hard and unexpectedly. His family's concern isn't enough, so who better to help Charlie than Willy Wonka himself?
Nicely written. Everyone was in character, it wasn't rushed or cheesy, and it's very origanized. I also like how you go deeper into Wonka's thoughts. You point out that he's only human. Makes everything alittle more realistic and interesting.
WAH!!! THAT WAS SO CUTE!!! ^O^ i really liked how you wrote Wonka's character. he seemed...like himself. ^^;; really though, i loved how you went indepth into Wonka's character. i really need to see the movie.....
anywho, LOVED it. it was very cute and fluffy, but still hot in the end. i love shota.....^__^ Two thumbs up to you!