Hey Firefly, I like your expressions in this, they're really deep. I enjoy reading them. Very true about how people feel with an enjoyable twist. Uber cool. (!)

Nice!

I'm not really a poetry fanatic because if it's not strictly on a rhythym it's hard for me to read it, but this one's different. It's really good, keep it up! :)

AWESOME!!!

Very original.

that's awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I absolutely love this! It's cool *faves*

wow u can write and draw really well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep on wirting

wow u can write and draw really well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep on wirting

Not bad, my friend...
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AWWWWWWWWWWW that was so cute ^_^ i LUV this poem!! i usually dont read poems and stuff but this is very very good!! ^_^ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! ^_^

I think you are a great writer....This poem is filled with much emotion...especialy because this is how you felt...Good job!