Betrayal (Rated G) by InvdrDana

Chapters

1 - Introduction - Submitted 2005-08-13 Updated: 2005-08-13 - 49 views, 1858 words, 9k
2 - Chapter 1 - Submitted 2005-08-15 Updated: 2005-08-15 - 44 views, 2600 words, 12k
3 - Chapter 2 - Submitted 2005-08-16 Updated: 2005-08-16 - 30 views, 1202 words, 5k
4 - Chapter 3 - Submitted 2005-08-17 Updated: 2005-08-17 - 28 views, 1211 words, 5k
5 - Chapter 4 - Submitted 2005-08-17 Updated: 2005-08-17 - 35 views, 1091 words, 5k
6 - Chapter 5 - Submitted 2005-08-17 Updated: 2005-08-17 - 33 views, 992 words, 4k
7 - Chapter 6 - Submitted 2005-08-18 Updated: 2005-08-18 - 34 views, 2156 words, 10k
8 - Chapter 7 - Submitted 2005-08-18 Updated: 2005-08-18 - 28 views, 1814 words, 8k
9 - Chapter 8 - Submitted 2005-08-19 Updated: 2005-08-19 - 27 views, 1528 words, 7k
10 - Chapter 9 - Submitted 2005-08-21 Updated: 2005-08-21 - 27 views, 1299 words, 6k
11 - Chapter 10 - Submitted 2005-08-26 Updated: 2005-08-26 - 22 views, 931 words, 4k
12 - Chapter 11 (I fixed it!) - Submitted 2005-09-25 Updated: 2005-09-25 - 28 views, 802 words, 3k
13 - Chapter 12 - Submitted 2005-09-25 Updated: 2005-09-25 - 27 views, 952 words, 4k
14 - Chapter 13 - Submitted 2005-12-29 Updated: 2005-12-29 - 27 views, 866 words, 4k
15 - Chapter 14 - Submitted 2005-12-29 Updated: 2005-12-29 - 30 views, 656 words, 3k
16 - Chapter 15 - Submitted 2005-12-29 Updated: 2005-12-29 - 27 views, 1295 words, 6k
17 - Chapter 16 - Submitted 2005-12-29 Updated: 2005-12-29 - 32 views, 1004 words, 5k
18 - Chapter 17 - Submitted 2005-12-29 Updated: 2005-12-29 - 27 views, 436 words, 2k
19 - Epilogue - Submitted 2005-12-29 Updated: 2005-12-29 - 32 views, 407 words, 2k

16 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

Jun 20, 2006 02:01 PM by: InvadrKet1 chapter 0

I loved that story!!!!! It was so awesome!

Jan 14, 2006 12:41 AM by: cartoon_carazaygurl chapter 19

that was both entertaining and a spectacular fan fiction although it was kinda hard to follow at first (as i didn't know all the characters) i still enjoyed reading it. Even though it wasn't all too much detailed I liked how you wrote it. Nice job very nice indeed. I will definitly expect more great things from u. *gives u a cookie and runs away*

Dec 30, 2005 07:06 AM by: Kayari chapter 19

Aw! This story is awesome! Zim was very mean! >

Dec 29, 2005 06:34 PM by: Kayari chapter 2

This story is so cute! LOL I would totally drive purple crazy for some cash! whoot!

Aug 29, 2005 03:13 PM by: malonlonlon chapter 1

hmmm this tooks like a really good story!! and it is! ^.^

Aug 18, 2005 02:15 PM by: zamnza chapter 7

LOL Red's gettin' annoyed... I'm getting more soda!

Aug 17, 2005 04:42 PM by: InvdrDana chapter 6

I am happy because I was able to beat the computer! No more all italics! YAY!!
*gives zamnza more ice cream* All this ice cream is gonna' make me hyper1 YAYAYAYAYA!!

Aug 17, 2005 03:28 PM by: zamnza chapter 5

But today's WEdnesday! ...oh you mean the story... *gets Soda* This is gonna get good!

Aug 17, 2005 11:28 AM by: zamnza chapter 4

*gasp*! Oh no! My ice cream fell over! I'm going to get more! Put more sweetness while I'm gone!

Aug 16, 2005 10:56 PM by: InvdrDana chapter 3

Thanks! Ya' know I believe you're the only one reading it! Besides you, Becca. Jessica (my sister) and I have read this. I need more friends who like Zim! Well chapter 3 will be up tomorrow...or later today.

Aug 16, 2005 09:29 PM by: zamnza chapter 3

*grabs a bowl of ice cream* I want to see this!

Aug 16, 2005 06:20 PM by: InvdrDana chapter 3

Fir is Dana's S.I.R unit. His name stands for Funny Irritating Retrieval unit! Happy I am!

Aug 15, 2005 02:01 PM by: InvdrDana chapter 2

Italics again!? *storms off and yells at computer* YOU STINK!!! *kicks it* OW!!! EVIL COMPUTER!

By the way, I'm all happy you like this story zamnza!

Aug 15, 2005 01:50 PM by: InvdrDana chapter 1

Dana, Meania, and Lexia are my fan characters. As you already know, Dana secretly loves Zim (in this story it's secret). Her best friends are Meania and Lexia. Meania is supposed to be Tallest Purple's daughter, and Lexia is Tallest Red's daughter. Meania and Lexia aren't related, except in other stories. Lexia also has a crush on Zim. In the next chapter, a character named Tyla comes in. She is supposed to be the most powerful Irken there is and gave some of her powers to Tak and Gaz. Gaz is Irken in this one. If you have other questions, just ask!

Aug 14, 2005 02:08 PM by: zamnza chapter 1

Aren't these people on Nick.com? If I'm right, WHOO YA! If I'm wrong...please correct me!

This is funny!

Aug 13, 2005 07:32 PM by: InvdrDana chapter 1

I don't know why the text became in italics. I tried messing with it to see if I could fic it. Better luck next chapter, right? Anyway, I promise you this story gets better! Ask questions about the characters if you need to!