i just love your righting style and its about time someone addressed that. im telling you i always thouight it wouldmake the perfict fanfic. all around codose and i daon say that oftin to writers. story aside, your writing structure and composition is nothing short of brileant and you pased it realy well, not to long and not too rushed. please please please continue to write. fav+
Wow, this is really good. you've got some talent there! U know, from the first time i saw the 1970's version i always though that Wonka had put that money the for charlie to find. It's i really sweet idea. I like your characterisation of Willy.
so Willy Wonka gave himself the miricle...