I've read this story a couple of times, and each time still amazes me! :3
 
Fantastic job:D
 
Oh, and Captain Falcon KILLED me! He was HILARIOUS!
 
^.^

LOL DRUNK FALCON!!! THAT WAS FUNNY AS HELL!!! The romance was really good could you PLZ ADD MORE?!!

So Descriptive^^!!

not marth! He's too good for her... captain falcon(i think it was him) shuld have been the unlucky person XD but oh well, doesn't really matter.

I noticed that too XD but it was good! I'm not much of a fan of yaoi, but prehaps it is because I'm not much a fan of any romance, but I liked this one

ARGH! Thanks for letting me know. It's among a bazillion other typos in this fic. XD I REALLY hate it when typos get in the way.
When I find the document among my many Floppy disks, I'll be sure to fix it. But just know all those typos are unintended.

I just noticed this... you called Marth a princess.... MARTH'S A GIRL! lol I think you should change that...

I just noticed this... you called Marth a princess.... MARTH'S A GIRL! lol I think you should change that...

WoW. Both me and my best friend read it, and we thought it was SO CUTE! Great work!

Damn! Why Fox? Why couldn't Marth go with Zelda?

woah

I love yaoi!

Great details in there! ^__^

A real suprise to hear from me again, huh?

This story was so cute I had to read it again! ^_-

I remember reading this on FF.net, but I never comented on it. *hits self in head.* I feel horible! I luvs this story. So sweet, and great job making Zelda such a biatch. XD She's so mean! Nice job.

Yay! Yaoi that doesn't involve Marth for once! XD
Beautiful fic.I felt so bad for Roy.
w00p,nice ending.^_^