Yeah, both these poems are really successful. Notice how he uses opposites to convey a deeper meaning, mentioning being the moon while Starfire is the sun; being the fall while she is the spring, and in this one mentions being cold after feeling something warm.

Quite an interesting style, Marvel. Hope to read more poems from you henceforth.

Holy crap! How do you come up with this stuff! It's awesome!

It's beautiful. But I don't really get what it means. But I still love it.

Goddamnit, Mar, you're sooooo much better than me at EVERYTHING! XDD
Jk. I'm not THAT hopeless. But you are better in most things. I can't write. XP

Wow this is really good *faves* ^_~

O.O
...if I could write like that...ugh. Damnit. *bangs head on desk*
O.o K...uhuhmhmhmmmmm...when my noggin heals, I'll add to favs...