I really like the story.You know what I think that you should write another one about Heero and Quatre to be like a continuig story from this one.Then purhapes make it (NC-17) because I think the story between them would only get deeper.Anyway nice story You have a good imagination.
this is so cute! ^^ But, theres a typo, I think. -since if the blonde man hadn't of been scared of- I think there's suposed to be one of. ^^' sorry.. My friends get mad when I point stuff out to them. -_-'