Her Last Thoughts. by Ichidou_Daisuke

Oct 12, 2006 01:07 PM by: crazy_jamaican_gurl chapter 1

That is very good...i like the line about waiting in Hell. Tis written like a masterpiece!

Jan 13, 2006 08:39 AM by: niou chapter 1

this was my favorite line :
"Darling, will you be waiting in Hell for me?"
nice work ^^

Jan 12, 2006 08:31 PM by: orianajones chapter 1

this is really sad and seems to be about having the heart blinded by love. sad but beautiful
luv ya orianajones
p.s. thanks for the coment on *dance of tears*, i may colour it in.

Jan 1, 2006 05:40 PM by: TsunachiSpiritHolder chapter 1

so sad...i like it...greatest ever ^_^ heres a cookie *gives cookie*

Dec 22, 2005 06:42 AM by: dramaqueen101 chapter 1

Love this poem! *favs*

Nov 14, 2005 09:00 PM by: CodeCrush chapter 1

Wow....... again..... LOL, i gotta get something new up in my head....

Nov 6, 2005 07:29 PM by: dms_cheeseshirted_chorusneko chapter 1

That's beautiful, full of emotion, I heart it!*faves*

Nov 2, 2005 10:08 PM by: rinygrin chapter 1

Great Job! =( sad yet pretty

Nov 1, 2005 07:00 PM by: Nessa51189 chapter 1

I am so glad you can. I'm glad I am getting through to someone out there.

Nov 1, 2005 08:22 AM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 1

Ooo nice! It's creepy and sad but so good...My vocabulary isn't big enough to rhyme like that. Excellent poem/song thingy!

Oct 31, 2005 10:39 PM by: Xe chapter 1

... Show-off. D: Looking back at all my poems, I hate you. xD Awesome-est effer. x3
-kissu-

Oct 31, 2005 07:18 PM by: Cara chapter 1

I like it. Wonderful job. Here have a doughnut. *shoves a doughnut down your throat*