incest is cool. *people give me weird looks* whaaaat? anyway, good story, i like your writing, and i like the style of this one, i like his thought processes.
I love how you kept repeating certain words in this story! Dunno why, but I doooo~! >.< This story was so bittersweet... ;-; You always manage to bring me to the verge of tears... (which is very hard to do, btw ^-~) You're such an awesome writer...
I very very major much love this style of writing! And I recognise the style, and I think I know where you got it from, but nooo, I can't remember the author or anything of the sort! Oh well (again) still a wonderful Halloween piece.
*munches Klondike bar* Yaaaaaaaaaaaayyy for the mind-swimming roundy-circle thought style o' writing!! 8D *tackle* Mwar!
ooh, very good! If I had a halloween like that i would be very happy :) I hate halloween you see, we dont make enough effort in this country for it to be a proper celebration or whatever, so for me its just an endless stream of little annoying kids knocking on my door..... lol