THE STORY OF ARPEGGIO by Arpeggio

Jun 12, 2007 07:19 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 0

-whisper- Peeeeggiiiieee... you should updaaaaateee... -whisper-

Kara: Sorry, what was that?

Nothin'.

Oct 25, 2006 05:57 PM by: Crowfeather chapter 0

Omg, when are you going to make the next part of this story??

Oct 6, 2006 04:21 PM by: Crowfeather chapter 0

Lol, just joking. I have an unnatural obsession with him. 0.o

Oct 9, 2006 11:38 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 0

XD lol Yeah. That was me, last year!

Oct 6, 2006 01:36 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 11

Yay, Kara's a lot more feminine than me; but she's also a lot easier to anger. xP

Oct 9, 2006 11:38 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 0

It's the truth...do you mind that I make her so feminine?

Oct 9, 2006 12:17 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 0

Oh no, she's supposed to be. You captured her perfectly. o.o

Sep 22, 2006 02:11 PM by: Crowfeather chapter 0

OMG! I love this story! *faves* I'm Arpeggio's number on fan! You stole my username! LOL, J/K.

Oct 6, 2006 09:33 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 0

You think so, eh? XD Well actually you aren't. There are quite a lot of Arpeggio fans on this site. There really are! I'm more into General Grievous and Bats now, anyway! Glad you liked my story, and welcome to FAC!

Jul 2, 2006 03:55 PM by: Hawiian_Tiger chapter 7

Dimitri: Dimitri no like Kara that much any more....shes mean to Dimitri alot!
Me: *Sigh...*

Oct 9, 2006 12:18 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 0

Kara: Aww... sorry, Dimitri. -hugglesOMGCUTENESS-

Me: o.o -eyes burn from kawaiiness-

Oct 13, 2006 01:42 PM by: Hawiian_Tiger chapter 0

Dimitri: I have learn not to trust you...SO GET OFF!!!!!

Oct 13, 2006 01:45 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 0

Kara: ...Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo... -gasps- oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo....!!! -cries-

Sam: Jesus, woman. o_o

Oct 13, 2006 01:48 PM by: Hawiian_Tiger chapter 0

Dimitri: I-I-I...I'm sorry?!? :D

Oct 13, 2006 01:55 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 0

Kara: Yay! -hugs and licks cheek-

Sam: ..Ew.. -backs away-

Oct 13, 2006 02:18 PM by: Hawiian_Tiger chapter 0

Dimitri: Blug! >_<

Oct 13, 2006 02:37 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 0

Kara: What? I'm a cat. It happens. -coughs-

Oct 13, 2006 08:52 PM by: Hawiian_Tiger chapter 0

Dimitri: But still....Blug...

Oct 13, 2006 08:58 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 0

Kara: ..I'll say blug. You taste like fries and honey. ><

(Greasy-sweeeet)

Oct 13, 2006 08:57 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 0

...xD

Oct 13, 2006 09:26 PM by: Hawiian_Tiger chapter 0

Dimitri: >_<

Aug 13, 2006 09:34 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 0

LOL & LOL!!! XD

Jul 2, 2006 03:38 PM by: Hawiian_Tiger chapter 6

Dimitri: Dat was NOT cool bro! I hated that moment! And I STILL need my bling bro!
Me: Oh can it Dimitri! But Peggio, be nice to Dimitri or els I'll have Rajan tear YOU to shreds!

Jun 4, 2006 09:23 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 0

^_^ Thanks!

Jun 3, 2006 09:27 AM by: mystic_rat_theif chapter 11

yayayaay! GIRLY FAN IS RIGHT! PEGGIE!!! I'VE MISSED YOU!! Omg! this is awesome!!! I LOVE YOU JEAN!

Aug 13, 2006 09:33 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 11

Aww, thank you! I missed you too! I HAVE to add a new chapter soon, don't I? I luff Jean too! ^_^

May 28, 2006 08:35 AM by: Weirdo chapter 0

OOOHH I WISH THIS WILL CONTINUE SOON! O.O I'M NOW FANGIRL OF THIS STUFF!

May 11, 2006 06:27 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 11

>< Thanks! My idea of Kara is, she's a bit femanine, but she's got plenty of spunk and tough-girl attitude to back it up.
>< Eee! Fangirls! That makes 2, I think. I know Mystic_rat_thief is one as well! I never knew my writing would be so popular!

May 11, 2006 06:18 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 11

Bwaahahahahaaaa!!!

Kara: Ditto. :O

Okay, fact: I absolutely LOVE this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

You got Kara down so well, and Bison was just great. xD I'm a fangirl of your story now.

May 7, 2006 10:16 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 7

^^ Thanks you! Thank you!

May 7, 2006 10:16 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 6

LOL :)

May 7, 2006 10:15 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 5

>< Teehee!

May 7, 2006 10:15 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 4

As do I! I am honored to have her in my story!

May 7, 2006 10:15 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 3

Arpeggio: I know! You'd think they would tell me about these things!

May 7, 2006 10:14 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 2

:D

May 7, 2006 10:14 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

LOL

May 4, 2006 03:03 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 11

^^ Well...it SOUNDED Bison..y....Well, glad you like the story cuz it's no where NEAR done! :D

May 3, 2006 04:38 AM by: Weirdo chapter 11

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! 'little miss Neyla...' xDDDDD This is wonderful story, PLEASE CONTINUE! ME WANTS MORE WONDERFUL STORY! *faves*

Mar 24, 2006 09:54 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 10

"aww peggie" what??? o_O

Mar 22, 2006 11:58 AM by: Weirdo chapter 1

Mwahahahahahaa! It's THE GLORIOUS EVIL GRIN!! YAY!! xD Woopee, toasted guard for lunch! :DD

Mar 20, 2006 03:47 PM by: mystic_rat_theif chapter 10

Aww, Peggie....

Mar 18, 2006 01:24 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 10

Arpeggio: *faintly thru hugging* This isn't the FIRST time today!
Me: Thank 'oo!

Mar 18, 2006 01:14 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 10

Muahahaha!

Kara: Oo... I HAVE always wanted to do that! I lub ye, cap'n! -huggles 'Peggie-.

I'm sure she means that in the least creepy way possible. ^-^

Love the chapter, Arpeggio!!

Mar 11, 2006 06:57 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 9

XD Thanks! ^^

Mar 11, 2006 02:10 AM by: Weirdo chapter 9

Mwahahahahha, General Tweety. That little copter-thing was so hilarious! xp

Mar 11, 2006 01:54 AM by: Weirdo chapter 7

YAY! More Kara! She's lovely! Mwahahahha, "who's the brains of operation?"
"moi!" xp

Mar 8, 2006 03:44 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 9

LOL! So true! ^^ Lotsa Gumbo! Tsao musta been one of the bomb totin' roosters! :D
And, thanks Jazz, I try my best! I LUV TO WRIIIIIITE!
LOUD AND LONG AND CLEEAAAAAAAR!!!!!!! XD Sorry.

Feb 23, 2006 04:56 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 9

Oh my God...I was playing Sly 1 and I just realised that it was all Sly's fault in the first place...

Clearly, HE KILLED TSAO'S WIFE FOR GUMBO SO HE COULD HAVE A KEY!

Kara: Le GASP!

Feb 19, 2006 12:55 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 9

Heehee. Jing-King ish gonna be in my story! ^-^

But...way later on. =/

Feb 19, 2006 09:25 AM by: mystic_rat_theif chapter 9

Lol, stupid Tsao! I really like how everything goes with the real story!!

Feb 18, 2006 07:14 PM by: Hawiian_Tiger chapter 5

DIMITRI!!!!! YOU GOTTA REJOIN!!! DUDE!

Feb 18, 2006 07:12 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 9

oh, and I hate Tsao like heck, too. The other day, Alicia (my sister,) and I were at a chinese resteraunt, and in the menu there was "General Tsao's Chicken". I said, "He's a boy! A ROOSTER!!!"
She said, "Maybe he killed his old wife for Jing-King!"
I thought that sounded reasonable! XD

Feb 18, 2006 07:11 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 9

XD Yes! Tsao!!! You guessed right! ^^ It's pretty obvious though, ain't it??? Anyway, wait 'till you see!

Feb 18, 2006 07:08 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 9

Heehheee!

Kara even talks like me. That's great!

Ohnuu... General Tsao.. ;_;

I really hate him. A lot.

And how will we unfreeze Bison!?? D=

Feb 18, 2006 06:45 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 8

yes! I know exactly how the story will end and you all doooooon't!!!!!! NYAHNYAH!!!!!!! XD

Feb 10, 2006 06:30 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 8

And don't be sad, 'Peggie...Neyla betrayed us all...We're gonna get revenge soon!

Feb 1, 2006 03:12 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 8

Yeah...What's funny is that I actually have one! -does the big-screen T.V. dance-

Jan 27, 2006 02:58 PM by: carmelita chapter 1

Me and Sly are..Oops I guess he already told you.

Jan 16, 2006 07:38 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 8

*Sigh*...thanks...oh, and that would be KARA's big screen TV...

Jan 15, 2006 10:04 AM by: mystic_rat_theif chapter 8

OH, AND continue PLEASE!

Jan 15, 2006 10:03 AM by: mystic_rat_theif chapter 8

Peggie, you might be sad for getting squished (lol) BUT AT LEAST YOU HAVE A WIDE SCREEN TV!

Jan 15, 2006 09:57 AM by: mystic_rat_theif chapter 7

PEGGIE, YOU ARE NOW (officialy) MY FAVORITE AUTHORS!!!!!

Jan 15, 2006 09:51 AM by: mystic_rat_theif chapter 6

YAY KARA! THE POWER OF PERSUASION! LOL

Jan 15, 2006 09:47 AM by: mystic_rat_theif chapter 5

Whoa! I never would have thought that this was such a greasy sweet story, Arpeggio! You're nopw gonna go into my next pixie!

Jan 15, 2006 09:40 AM by: mystic_rat_theif chapter 4

lmao, I love Kara!

Jan 15, 2006 09:40 AM by: mystic_rat_theif chapter 4

lmao, I love Kara!

Jan 14, 2006 06:56 PM by: mystic_rat_theif chapter 3

lol, Really? Sucker Punch Productions made a vedio game about them? I would have never geusses.....lmao

Jan 14, 2006 06:51 PM by: mystic_rat_theif chapter 2

O.O........

Jan 14, 2006 06:47 PM by: mystic_rat_theif chapter 1

O.O YAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY!!! PEGGIE'S ALIVE AND WELL!! *dances around room for hours till i suddenly drop*

Jan 14, 2006 04:20 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 8

Aw, 'Peggie. Don't be upset about getting squishied! You were still cute, ne? Besides, you're alright now, right?

Riiiight?

Yeah!

Jan 14, 2006 06:01 AM by: Snows-wolf chapter 8

Apeggio! This is a great story, sorry about getting...well...squashed! Anyhoo I love the story!

Jan 11, 2006 09:38 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 8

Thaaaaaaaank yew!

Jan 9, 2006 10:07 PM by: Toky chapter 8

Wow, this is getting good! Keep it up! :D

Jan 9, 2006 07:37 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 8

How did you know??? I WAS laughing a bit there...
Arpeggio: I GOT SQUASHED!!!!!!

Jan 9, 2006 04:59 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 8

Awww...Arpeggio...Be happy! You're a legacy! Kara's yer buddy! And update soon, this story's getting better and better.

I like the relationship between the three characters so far, and that's not just because one of them is mine. You're really, really doing a great job on this.

Quit laughing, I'm trying to give a serious reveiw! xD

Jan 9, 2006 08:53 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 7

Don't worry! I will! I've got some niiiiiiiiice ideas for Kara in the next chapter!

Jan 8, 2006 06:49 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 4

Kara: *gasp* Really!? *fangirl squeal*

Me: -_-; That's it, back in my head you go.

Kara: Aaaaww...It's icky in there...

Jan 8, 2006 06:44 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 1

...*shock*

Kara: You see, Murray? Even Sly and Carmelita are dating. EVERYONE'S doing it!

Murray: Look, I like you, but I haven't even MET you yet! D=

Kara: S'ok. I'll wait for you big guy.

Murray: *Backs away slowly*

Jan 8, 2006 01:06 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 7

Whoo hooO!!!!
It's very creative having Kara and Dimitri fight. You better keep it up, 'Peggie, you better!!! This story is awesome!

Jan 1, 2006 08:32 PM by: ThexNewxContessa chapter 7

WOW PLEEEEEEASE Continue, Your Supremeness!
I reallly can't wait to hear...err....READ the next chapter! pleaaase?

-does the kitty pouty face-

pllllease?

Jan 1, 2006 11:39 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 7

NO comments??? *Sigh*...

Dec 22, 2005 02:36 PM by: The_Beast_Within chapter 6

Doing great so far! Keep it up!

Dec 17, 2005 08:55 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 4

Bleh...

Dec 17, 2005 08:52 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

......O_o....woah....

Dec 16, 2005 05:57 AM by: Sly chapter 1

OH i need to tell you something arpeggio.....me and Carmelita or going out now!!

Dec 15, 2005 08:58 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

Bleh, bleh...whatever....

Dec 13, 2005 09:04 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 6

Errr.........for all my loyal readers.......might be a while for next chapter!!!! AM REAAAAALLY sorry, but I've been busy lately.....unless....I'll try and work on the story tomorrow, 'k!

Dec 12, 2005 12:10 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 6

yay! Can't wait to read it! Here I go...

Dec 9, 2005 01:18 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 6

Oh, but I got my story up Arpeggio! Go comment or I'll sick Kara on ya! -Not that I'll have to...9_9-

Dec 9, 2005 01:16 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 6

It's true.. O_o;

Dec 2, 2005 03:29 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 6

No...not even MURRAY would want to, because she'd snuggle him and love on him forever!

Dec 1, 2005 01:05 PM by: Sly chapter 6

COOL don t want to run in to her i a dark alley ......unless your murry

Dec 1, 2005 12:58 PM by: Sly chapter 4

YES I RED THE BIO BUT THE WAY SHE SAID THAT IT SOUNDED LIKE SHE WANTS TO HERT MY NOT LIKE ME MURRAY ALLREADY NOSE AND I THANCK HE LIKES HER TO!!!!!!

Nov 30, 2005 12:33 PM by: carmelita chapter 1

I've still got some tricks up my sleve.DON'T underestimate me.

Nov 30, 2005 10:37 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

Oh we shall see, alright! Heheheheh we shall see...>)

Nov 30, 2005 10:36 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 6

It's okay! Thank you for 'da writing comment! I have been working at it for 3 years now!

Nov 29, 2005 05:49 PM by: Toky chapter 6

Whoops. Read your comment wrong. ^^; Ehh...-_-;

Nov 29, 2005 05:47 PM by: Toky chapter 6

But I DO read this! I just forget to comment...>_< *smacks forehead* I'm such an idiot.

Anyway, keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to the next chapter...You're such a better writer than I am. >_>

Nov 28, 2005 06:47 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 6

You're welcome...are you the only one besides Toky who reads this story?? :(

Nov 28, 2005 06:10 PM by: carmelita chapter 1

We'll see about that.

Nov 28, 2005 09:19 AM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 6

lol! Great job! My favorite chapter. Kara's awesome. Yay!

Nov 27, 2005 08:36 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

That's what you'd THINK...unfortunatly for you, it is not...

Nov 26, 2005 03:27 PM by: carmelita chapter 1

Very well then.It is a small universe.

Nov 24, 2005 07:51 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

What makes you think I'll even be on EARTH?!?

Nov 23, 2005 08:53 PM by: carmelita chapter 1

I'm an Inspector.I will find you.As they say,it is a very small world.

Nov 22, 2005 02:04 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 5

Thanks!

Nov 22, 2005 02:02 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 4

Heehee! Whooo....almost NOBODY likes Murray! :P

Nov 22, 2005 02:01 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

Whahaha! Well, of COURSE I won't stay in my blimp! THAT'S what EVERYONE expects! I'm going someplace where you will NEVER find me! You and none of the rest of the world! >:D

Nov 21, 2005 06:33 PM by: mystic_rat_theif chapter 1

"Watch out!!!" Jazmin Cooper comes and pushes carmalita seconds before a missle hit her.

Nov 21, 2005 01:39 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 5

Whoo! Kara's psycho! I mean, psychic. Yeah, that's what I meant. Anyways, I'm gonna be writing a fanfiction (I hope -_-)! You've inspired me and you see, that's hard to do, so congrats! And keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next part.

Nov 21, 2005 01:35 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 4

lmao xD

Nov 21, 2005 12:34 PM by: carmelita chapter 1

#1)I think you would be in the blimp because that is where you always are.#2)Who says I would stay in the helicopter long enough for you to shoot me down?

Nov 21, 2005 10:03 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

What makes you think I'll be in my blimp? Besides, even if I WERE, I would shoot you down with my NEW turrets! XD

Nov 20, 2005 11:52 AM by: carmelita chapter 1

I have a helicopter.

Nov 18, 2005 04:36 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

Ha-ha! After Neyla's behind barsm I will have no reason to come on the ground again! And I will go to a place where I KNOW where you will NEVER find me! XD

Nov 18, 2005 12:56 PM by: carmelita chapter 1

(Starts shooting at Sly and Arpeggio.Misses and hits nereby flashlight guard.)Next time Arpeggio,you won't be so lucky.After I get Neyla behind bars,I will hunt you down.

Nov 18, 2005 08:03 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 4

Oh-no, no, no, no! Don't worry! She doesn't want you! Did you read about Kara? It's MURRAY she's after. You'd better tell HIM to be alert!

Nov 18, 2005 08:02 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

Wait! Things were just getting start-*SQUAWK!* Let go of me, you fool!!! XC

Nov 18, 2005 06:29 AM by: Sly chapter 4

nice but i am shackie about one thing WHY DOES SHE WANT ME!!!!

Nov 18, 2005 06:14 AM by: Sly chapter 1

Run arpeggio now you got her afther you (grabs arpeggio and runs)

Nov 17, 2005 08:26 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 4

Uh...you're welcome! O_o I feel special!

Nov 16, 2005 02:39 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 4

Laugh now at the typos I made in my girlish excitement.

Oh, and feel free to ask me if you need to know something about Kara, okay?

Thanks again.

-skips off happily-

Nov 16, 2005 02:35 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 4

I can't beleive you actually did it! lol!

Tt's perfect! She was related to Rajan when I made her. She was almost his daughter, but then I finished level three and hated him, so I changed it.

You did a great job with her. Thanks.

I feel so special. ^^

Nov 15, 2005 09:26 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 4

Hopefully I created Kara as an acceptable character! The whole-Rajan-as-her-second-cousin thing was the only way I could think of to make this work! Sorry if I messed with Kara too much, Immortally_broken!! :(

Nov 15, 2005 08:29 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 3

Arpeggio: Well, I AM very smart and quite cute, I must admit. I think it's because of my clothes that's what the artist in my split personality (Whom you may call Zaff or Grievous when speaking directly to her) says,
ME: Alright, ALRIGHT, yes, immortie, I WILL put Kara in my story if it means so much to you. Did you see Toky's story?!? She wrote about ME!!! :D Okay, will start on it now! ;D

Nov 15, 2005 01:39 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 3

But Arpeggio...yer the smartest of the Klaww gang, too...and the cutest.

So, it's okay, man.

Why am I flattering you like this?

No idea.

-cough-putKaraintehstory-cough-

I just like ya. ^^;

Nov 15, 2005 11:28 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 3

Yeah, I kinda DID think about that, but I'm not much older than you, you know! Though I am MUCH more mature, you MUST admit! :D I still am in my 20's! I am the youngest member of the KLAWW Gang! :) It DOES get annoying at times, though.

Nov 14, 2005 01:19 PM by: Sly chapter 3

rigth on get her you sound like me when you said what fun would that be !!!!

Nov 11, 2005 07:15 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

That may be the problem in my story, but now I am over it. Catch her if you like, you shan't be angering me! XD

Nov 10, 2005 01:54 PM by: carmelita chapter 1

(jumps on nereby rooftop and starts shooting guards)That's okay.I don't need any help catching Neyla.I can do it myself.

Nov 10, 2005 12:16 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

Ah, ah, ah! Gaurds! *150 flashlight gaurds walk in front of Arpeggio, ready to strike Carmelita* It CAN be an issue, but in this case, no! >D

Nov 9, 2005 12:42 PM by: carmelita chapter 1

(Points shock pistol at Arpeggio) When you're at the wrong end of a shockpistol,trust is not an issue.

Nov 8, 2005 09:07 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 3

Oh, don't worry! The story gets better! Keep checking back for updates 'cause Neyla's goin' down! I'm working on chapter four right now! (Silly me! Making one and only chapter! NOW just LOOK at my progress!)

Nov 7, 2005 02:10 PM by: Sly_and_ally_forever chapter 3

This is really good! Do me a favor, and kick Neyla's buut!!!!

Nov 6, 2005 08:25 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 2

NEYLA IS EVIL AND THAT'S THE END OF IT!!!! (What kind of person double-crosses EVERYONE to get her way? It's very selfish, uncaring, rude, behavior!)

Nov 6, 2005 08:22 AM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

We'll see, Carmelita...first you have to prove to us your trust...(which I doubt there is ANY...)

Nov 4, 2005 01:40 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 2

Yeeee! You know...I don't know how to feel about Neyla. On the one hand, I really, really hate her and on the other...aw, just kill 'er before I go back to being a decent person when my sugar rush wears off. O_o;

Nov 4, 2005 01:38 PM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 1

It's good that the Cooper Gang and Arpeggio are teaming up, because now Kara can help Arpeggio and still stalk...er...did I say stalk? I meant -cough-kirjiwifitz-cough- Murray. =D

Nov 4, 2005 01:04 PM by: carmelita chapter 1

You and Sly can cut that deal under one condition.Let me in on it!

Nov 3, 2005 05:39 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

Yes, I do! So, then, I hereby decree a peace from war between the Cooper Gang and all of my men (birds) and I. Thanks for reading my stories!

Nov 3, 2005 04:39 PM by: Sly chapter 2

rigth on go and get her

Nov 3, 2005 04:32 PM by: Sly chapter 1

of corus i as you now am more trust worthy the neyla i ll help you stop her

Nov 3, 2005 01:30 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

Very good, Cooper. I think we MIGHT be able to cut a deal. I will forgive you and not go after you, if you come after Neyla with me!
After all, you didn't do that much to stop me. Even in your attempt to stop me you helped me by dropping the Clockwerk Parts only to snap them into place! You also stole all the parts for me and completed most of my plan!
Anyway, what do you say, truce 'till Neyla's jailed?

Nov 3, 2005 01:13 PM by: Sly chapter 1

HAY I AM ON ARPEGGIO SIDE I WILL HELP HIM GET YOU!!!

Nov 3, 2005 12:02 PM by: Arpeggio chapter 1

If I've heard it once, I've heard it one thousand times, Neyla! I'm tired of you saying things that just won't come to pass! Anyway, thank you for the comment!

Nov 3, 2005 09:08 AM by: Neyla11 chapter 1

I likes ur story!!But U or Carmelita and Sly cant catch me!!!