OMG! you are good at poetry. *favs*

Thanks! If you guys like this one, let me know and I'll post some more. I love poems! They're fun to write, but I write metaphorically. Sometimes you'll have to read between the lines. They all tell a story about something!

Thought I'd read some of your stuff--this caught my eye almost immediately because of a story of mine I'm writing with a friend. I really liked it. The rhyme scheme feels natural and unforced, and I like the lack of punctuation. A great poem. +fav