Great chapter! There sure was a lot of laughing going on sorta bad for their situation. OMG! When I found out Nibbles was Wellman I was surprised. I remember how Megabarf used to squeeze him... what a jerk! Loved the chapter!
I liked it the whole "Good little Mousie! Good girl for doing what you're told." was a bit of overkill for the predicament but other than that perfect adaptation. I think it would be so tyght if you had Hex come back!