i'm beeing wired today first Sasuke is mean too Sakura for a huge chunk of the story i was ready to start to cry when u poped in the part about tomatos i like "WTH was that?!?!?!"and started to laugh a bit.Towardes the end of the story Sasuke asked Sakura to go back to his house to have some tomateos on the way he's trying a striaght face and he's blushing while they hold hands!?!?!that's just awsome especially this part:"Those eyes. They lead to the very source of the soul. They lead him to the broken heart he had shattered.
Those emerald eyes which had always shown such admiration, determination, andâ¦love. They were the exact cause of his coarse words and cold exterior, for those eyes had melted his heart. It made him crazy with a need to fulfill a burning desire. The desire to hold her. Even if it was for a moment, that was all he needed. Just that one moment to say everything. To say he loved her."That was awsome^^500 cookies for u for makeing this pairing look so mega awsome^^
Aww, that's so adorable!!! There were a couple of times that I thought I might actually cry!!! And I NEVER cry!!! *watery eyes* you write so well! I have to go back and read it again! Yay tomatoes!
wow that was so beautiful *crys* that was very well written write more stories That WAS SO SWEET!^^
by: abitofdrama on Feb 26, 2007 07:39 PM chapter 1
Just wonderful!!!! This really good and desearves a whole bunch of those gold stars you get in kndergarden. This rocks and I hope other people see the great literacy in here. All the detail, it's just ... wow!
OMG, this is such a good story. When I read it, I just had to add it to FAVES. Umm, this is not criticism or anything, but when Sakura was walking back home, I really thought she should've turned into a shortcut which Sasuke didn't know about and head home that way. And when Sasuke races by the shortcut, Sakura sees him and starts another emotional breakdown. Sorry, but that's just my suggestion.
by: ultima_yunie on Dec 28, 2005 03:07 PM chapter 1
This is a really good story you should write more! ^_^
the story you made is a little bit sad in the start but in the end it was beautiful!!!
The story is great!!