All I can say is (sorry sock_eater).........MEEP! That is an awesome story. I like the way you make Kairi sound. Also, you can really tell all the emotions that Sora is feeling. He is feeling, in my opnion, torn between teo friends! Oh ya! Before I forget... *Gives viicious a Muffin* Enjoy, and off I go to Chapter II! AWAY!!!
This story is awesome i love it. Serously that is a great story.
Soa: PERFECTION.
Kairi: Hello i am the one giving the Reveiw get out of here.Sora: Hey i thought you liked me
Kairi: I do like you
Sora: Then let me stay about me
Kairi: No, like i was saying I lvoe your...
Sora: Please
Kairi: No
Sora: Fine then i will never talk to you again
*Fan girl looks at Sora and grins evily*
Kairi: My boy!
*grabs Sora and runs away*
I love it you think you could make a chapter about, like Kairi and Sora are really together? Well other than Kairi being clumsy, I've never heard a better story in my life! Great job!!!!!