can i be in? i want to be with tala and i have brown hair that is always in a ponytail that goes to my middle back with red highlights. i always wear red and black and if i can have a bitbeast i want it to be my own shadow. he's a black dragon with blood red eyes. thnx so much if u add me!

can i be in it?, my name is simone and i wanna be with Robert, i got brown hair, and green eyes

aaw XD Can I be in this story O.o My name's Melissa but I don't like it so.. you can use Misuki ^^;; eto... my looks I look almost the same as Ray I should say =__=;; really I mean it... long black hair, brown/golden eyes no make up no way T_T;; tomboyish most of the time wearing boys clothes and most of the time black... I like Max XD

oooh really nice story =3 it's funny XD

Kitto alsohas pink and red streaks

Kitto kinf of got pink streks

Hi I had to go do something but Kitto is Kai's sister and my oc boy's name is Kurohyou he has black hair, blue eyes, a pair of jeans and a shirt Kitto nickname is Raion, and Kurohyou is Tategami if posible thank you very much! ^^

Can you plese add me my oc girl name is Kitto she has brown hair with red highlights with baby blue eyes with a dress that has no straps more later

Can i be in it?Beyblade is the best(But this is beter!!!)I have black hair,black pants,a white shirt,and i think i want............................
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P.S.My name is Odin.

well, now that i read that kai is taken. i guess you could put me with one of my ocs'. His name is alejandro, but i call him alex and he is based on a boy i used to know in kindergarden....well, bye for now.

so interesting!!

ummm...i would like to be a part of the story. silver hair with black highlights, emerald eyes that shine beautifully and brightly. I have a white diamond mark on my forehead with two little triangles on each of the upper side of the diamond. There are earrings that I always wear: they are violet diamonds with two little red circles. that's it. i don't know who i want to be with. i want to be with kai! but he's taken. can you for now just make it like kai has mixed feelings for me? pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssssseeee?!

%&#%&%&#(&!_!()+$()$*u@&#y# U TOOK REI!!!!! GRRRRRRR....OK THERE ARE OTHER SWEET GUYS LIKE BAKURA,CLOUD,MIGUEL,KAIBA(SETO)...HMMM
IF U PUT ME IN STORY(PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE) PUT ME WITH BAKURA(PLEASE)
REALY LIKE THIS!

That was a cool one!!!^_^
Amaya,you can`t wait ,ha?Well,I think it will be amaya vs. yorda over tala more likely...XXXDDD!!!!JUST KIDDING PEOPLE!!!!
*walks into shadow*
---->Yeah......just kidding....my precious....


BTW,THANKS FOR GREETING ME MY BIRTHADAY!!!!!

I know I'm boring but can you put me with Kadaj from Final Fantasy 7,not Jin Kazama?Please@_@
Can you?@_@

XDXDthis is becoming interestingXDXDlol
can't wait "Yorda vs. Akira"XDXD
@_@*my Tala.....*=^_^=

Oh, ofcourse Daichi likes me! He loves me! Good chapter.

hhehehe! kai iz way to sexy for his shirt! but tyson? i got 4 wordz for him
'DAT AINT GOOD LOOKIN'

shadowlove101 i can only put ur characther in this sotry! sorry and kai's already taken so ur gonna have to choose someone else!=) sorry again!

I would like you to add all of my characters! That includes Hummingbird, Tucan, Jenny, Yin, Yang, Elizabeth, and Damion. I will do ANYTHING if you could make Kai and Hummingbird married like in my story. Also, Yin likes Spencer, Yang likes Bryan, Tucan likes Miguel. now remember..... I will do ANYTHING! A-N-Y-T-H-I-N-G!

OK girl, you better be adding all of my characters in this! And make them play truth or dare. That's da best!
TY☺☻☺☻

And yeah,LOVEEE the story!

Okay,I wanna be in the story!!!And with Brooklyn or Miguel or Johny,or something like that...You choose,I don`t care,coz Tala`s TAKEN!!!*cries*Or nobody!

Amaya I HATE YOU!!!You always take Tala first!And just because I was too lasy to go to the post office and buy some more hours on the internet...

Awwww,por Tyson HAHAHAH...
Great chapter^_^

super cool story 4 thumbs up *Faves*

Kai is soooo lazy.

im glad there some truth in this story..u kno wad im talkin bout... love it! heavey! cant wait for the next one dude! whoop, whoop!

XXXDDD!!!I can't stop laughting!!!lol!
Black kimono or whiteXXXDDD
and that thing with writer!XXDD
*fall from chair*
and MUMMY!!XXDDD
*start to ought of lauthing!XXXDDD*
and ferrari!!XXXDDDDDLOLx100
*my parents start to look me*
can't wait to read more!XXDD

u know kai is dreamin bout me! :)

Wait,wait can I be with Jin Kazama from tekken!?PLEASE??@_@...

My look:black hair with red,green eyes,black close with...Brooklyn!!

I would love to join. Incase you didnt know, i have hair like Tea's from Yu-Gi-Oh, except its green. I have green eyes and wear army clothes. My name is Lisa. I want to be with...

Can you guess?

Daichi!

Myyyy BIRTHDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY!!!
And wow!I'm going to cinema for birthday.Last year I had birthday party in school's cellar...o_O
Great story!!!can't wait next chapy!!^_^
ps:Your birthday was few days ago in the story,right?You are born in may.