Deadly by TeenTitansFreak_18

Chapters

1 - Waking sickness - Submitted 2006-01-16 Updated: 2006-01-16 - 201 views, 1041 words, 5k
2 - Chapter 2 Figuring things out - Submitted 2006-01-24 Updated: 2006-01-24 - 161 views, 816 words, 4k
3 - Chapter 3 Captured - Submitted 2006-01-24 Updated: 2006-01-24 - 173 views, 711 words, 3k
4 - Chapter 4, The escape and a new friend - Submitted 2006-02-02 Updated: 2006-02-02 - 140 views, 1001 words, 5k
5 - Chapter 5 getting to know you.. - Submitted 2006-02-05 Updated: 2006-02-05 - 162 views, 438 words, 2k

19 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

Aug 28, 2007 07:58 PM by: artangel chapter 0

awesomeness!!

Dec 28, 2006 12:29 AM by: Netbug009 chapter 1

Good fic, but this chapter is kinda rushed. I think you'd grab much more dramatic tension if you slowed it down a little.

Nov 29, 2006 04:53 PM by: artangel chapter 5

awesome!!!! great job! *art angel wink*

Oct 26, 2006 03:30 PM by: omek chapter 5

ok if thats the end then u shall burn in hell!*arms get covered with diamond and smashes hand together* MAKE MORE NOW! OR ELSE!
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Oct 26, 2006 03:26 PM by: omek chapter 4

hmmmmmmmmm PIE!

Oct 26, 2006 03:22 PM by: omek chapter 3

jinmay's a robot who got's the hot's for chiro like he does for her.
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Saiyusha: how will they have kids? with a funnel or sumthin?
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Omek: ok dude thats jus fucki...... AHHHHHHHHHHH DISTURBING IMAGES OF THE FUNNEL THING!*smacks saiyusha upside
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Saiyusha: OW!!!!!! WTH I DO?!

Sep 2, 2006 10:23 AM by: naomiintuiton64 chapter 0

Ha this is like my favorite storie u have no idea how many times I'v read this u should make another one I'm totally faving this

I'm suprised it took me so long to do this

May 28, 2006 08:44 PM by: Cyberranger14 chapter 0

I love it man.

Feb 6, 2006 06:49 PM by: Monkey-Ninja chapter 5

Cool! Good chap!

Feb 6, 2006 12:45 PM by: Froze8 chapter 5

Ok more please!
Froze8

Feb 3, 2006 10:06 PM by: alleycat6189 chapter 4

Keep going!!! although it would have been cooler if he was still sick....*wonders if that potion actually worked* OOOOooooOOOOo was it all a trick to make him worse..... O.O

sorry i like to come up with theroy's and see if their right...lol

Feb 3, 2006 05:29 PM by: Froze8 chapter 4

Sweet!
Froze8

Feb 3, 2006 06:26 AM by: Monkey-Ninja chapter 4

That was cool, and so your character comes into the story.

Jan 31, 2006 01:24 PM by: Froze8 chapter 3

Who's Jinmay?
Froze8

Jan 29, 2006 10:06 AM by: Monkey-Ninja chapter 3

That was so cool! Keep going!

Jan 27, 2006 09:34 PM by: alleycat6189 chapter 3

DUDE!! KEEP GOING!!!!! lol....i love it your really good at art and writing!!

Jan 24, 2006 07:01 PM by: alleycat6189 chapter 2

OOoooooOOOOO your tourturing me!!! Keep going!!!

Jan 17, 2006 12:21 PM by: morphin chapter 1

yay monkey story love antauri and sparks[sprx77]

Jan 16, 2006 05:40 PM by: Monkey-Ninja chapter 1

Cool, update.