Woah. I stopped commenting your work! Bad me. Sorry, I was in Florida and the computers at DisneyQuest were sucky. Well, I'm back!
^.^ Your work is remarkable. I love Markem and his antics. The worlds you create bring us all to somewhere far away, and that's what I like in stories. You are a wonderful writer, and if writing was like painting or kickboxing, I'd pay anything to take lessons from you. But, -sigh- some people are just born with that talent (the words "some people" would include you, of course.)
GO YOU

-Sly

Oooooo, this is awesome story! I can't wait for the next part! :O

Chapter 5 was every bit as good and intriguing as it’s preceding ventures, accompanied with an interesting plot twist concerning Charlie Wildstar’s relationship with his adopted mother Sergeant Marla Firewolf... How you’re able to come up with preceding situations and circumstances that seem to elevate the story-line to a higher level is just amazing!

Oh geeze! Very good. Whenis Mark gonna meet Sly? I need to find out!

Oh gosh that's good! Even if I don't really know what this game is about, I can understand it alot.

Wow! Very very good! I like it.

Chapter 4 was every bit as intriguing and full of zest as what was to follow... It just seems to me that with each new verse and character introduction the story just kept building to a much more exciting quandary as one reads along... Your continue ability to draw the reader onto a pursuing course of ensuing excitement is just great reading!

Yay! Lyra!! You're really a good writer. Keep it up! I agree with the other commenters. *applaudes you* Go you!

-Sly_Cooper

You've just made my Favorite story and author list... I should have done this from the start!

Exceptional, is all I can say! Your descriptive writing never ceases to astound me; you just have the ability to lure the reader’s attention and growing curiosity with each fourth coming paragraph! The Markem character and the introduction of the teenage squirrel girl’s appearance just defines another aspect of this little rouge... The conflict with Arthur (the big badger sailor) was just a good touch... Just great!

Yay! Awesome story! *Favs* U ROCK!

Awsome! Keep going, keep going! ^^

It just keeps getting better and better! :3

Chapter 2 describes quite a touching scene and heart wrenching moment with his parents in the cell that’ll just melt the coldest heart away! I love the emotional intrigue...

Just wonderful writing, I've always had a deep admiration and respect for people who can draw images with their creative writing... It's a god given talent to be able to captivate and arouse the attention of readers who are compelled to continue reading on, because the journey you have set forth is so compelling!

Ooh! It just keep getting better and better! Please update! ^___^

LOL! I was cracking up laughing! I don't know anything about this game, but even without that knowledge, you describe it so well so that I do understand the chracters and what's going on! ^___^ This story is funny too!

Coolio! Loved it! ^___^

lol, this is a great story!!!!