this one is really cool!!
+favs

i liek the death i worship it^^

YAY! you rymed!!

super, inspiring poem.poems don't have to rhyme, that just the typical thing we think of when we think of a poem, none of mine do but they have rhythm. l8er Lanfear

It doesn't have to ryhme to be good, I like this cause it's awesome, But it's actually better because it doesn't all ryhme. It seems to give it more meaning, it would seem less serious and more silly if it ryhmed.

wow- im sorry for bugging you so- but i cantsee these great poems and not leave a comment! ^^;

you have talent *bows* keep on writing i like the angel of death stuff

I've seen him all too often this spring. I think I'll see him again too.

awesome poem :)

Simple yet very effective. I like the concept of the angel of death. Its amazing.

good poem, i like ur username too :)

cool thats an awsome poem dude

YAY! The angel of death XD good job