your good i like the darkness it is a vary apelling poem you should wright more of them.

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wow, that's an awesome poem, i know how you feel there, i have quite a few of these poems in my section ;). Love how you did it in 1 stanza, really good rhythm too. Lanfear

OMG how did you write that poem you should be a professional i meen those words were deep i know i could never have came up with your choice of words.....

-blink blink- whoa..... -blink blink- thats.....AWESOME!

this an awsome poem and i will defietly add this to my favs. :p

this would make a good part in slipknot song tatterted and tourn
I dont think i spelled that right

You rule! *sniffs* YOU ROCK!
Your the best! I'm going to make something for you!
Not sure what, but something!