Unknown Paths by Amadeus - Fanart Central

Chapters

1 - Chapter 1 - Submitted 2006-03-09 Updated: 2006-03-09 - 73 views, 1720 words, 9k
2 - Chapter 2 - Submitted 2006-03-09 Updated: 2006-03-09 - 68 views, 2378 words, 13k
3 - Chapter 3 - Submitted 2006-03-09 Updated: 2006-03-09 - 62 views, 2462 words, 14k
4 - Chapter 4 - Submitted 2006-03-09 Updated: 2006-03-09 - 65 views, 4035 words, 22k
5 - Chapter 5 - Submitted 2006-03-09 Updated: 2006-03-09 - 68 views, 2985 words, 16k
6 - Chapter 6 - Submitted 2006-03-09 Updated: 2006-03-09 - 54 views, 2323 words, 13k
7 - Chapter 7 - Submitted 2006-03-09 Updated: 2006-03-09 - 66 views, 2216 words, 12k
8 - Chapter 8 - Submitted 2006-03-09 Updated: 2006-03-09 - 64 views, 2231 words, 11k
9 - Chapter 9 - Submitted 2006-03-09 Updated: 2006-03-09 - 61 views, 2205 words, 11k
10 - Chapter 10 - Submitted 2006-03-09 Updated: 2006-03-09 - 74 views, 5028 words, 27k
11 - Chapter 11 - Submitted 2006-03-09 Updated: 2006-03-09 - 58 views, 5625 words, 31k
12 - Chapter 12 - Submitted 2006-03-09 Updated: 2006-03-09 - 69 views, 3391 words, 18k
13 - Chapter 13 - Submitted 2006-03-25 Updated: 2006-03-25 - 87 views, 4716 words, 25k

11 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

May 12, 2006 01:49 PM by: Amadeus chapter 11

Actually Motoko's about 20-21 and Amadeus is 25

Mar 31, 2006 01:34 PM by: AnimeMangaLover chapter 13

Good chapter ^^ A few grammatical and spelling errors, but that's pretty much it ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^

Mar 26, 2006 08:52 AM by: Riverwind chapter 13

kyaaahhhhh I like this Chapter! hehe Hide and Seek!!! I want to see Motoko in her outfit ^^ Nice design Amadeus, from what I pictured it to be hehe

Mar 23, 2006 03:36 PM by: Riverwind chapter 8

I'm just loving this story more and more!!

Mar 23, 2006 01:47 PM by: Riverwind chapter 3

HAHA I LOVVVVEEEE this sorty, its sooo funny! Keitaro hehe soooo funny! Funny Funny Stuff here!! I'm adding this to my faves list!

Mar 14, 2006 08:48 PM by: Aaedien chapter 12

Well, good story!

However, I detest the usage of the word 'thru' in replacement of 'through'.

Also, there aren't enough commas when you have the characters speak.

Mar 12, 2006 02:44 PM by: AnimeMangaLover chapter 12

I like that Amadeus and Motoko's relationship is starting to grow ^^ It seems to be a lot of dialogue, so maybe describing things more? I have do the same thing in my stories; a lot of dialogue and not enough description.
Until the next chapter ^_~

Mar 12, 2006 02:26 PM by: AnimeMangaLover chapter 11

Amadeus is in his twenties (I think?) and Motoko's gotta still be in her teens, right? Like 17 or something like that? Ah, anyways, I'm on to the next chapter ^^

Mar 12, 2006 01:54 PM by: AnimeMangaLover chapter 10

I've noticed that you spell "through" like "thru." Sorry, but that kinda irks me ^^; Anyways, this was a good chapter ^^ On to the next one!

Mar 12, 2006 01:35 PM by: AnimeMangaLover chapter 9

Ah, sorry I didn't comment on the other chapters; I remembered I had read them already ^^ This was a good chapter, so I'm on to the next one! ^^

Mar 11, 2006 09:27 AM by: AnimeMangaLover chapter 1

Good chapter ^^ There are some grammatical and spelling errors (as with all online stories, so don't worry ^^), you have some words that shouldn't be there and there are some places where you need words, but otherwise this is good ^^ I'll read the other chapters later ^^