cool poem, u hav talent! ;), if you wanna u can check out some of mine and tell me wat u think ! ;),L8ER lANFEAR

sounds like i feel now keep at it. ur awsome

very nice poem!..me likes *faves*

very emotional indeed. ^^ although it is depressing, this poem is deeply expressed, and nicly done. i luv it actually, because it reminds me of myself, and others that walk around with a mask to the world. *favs*

Thats how i feel like everyday of my life. Fakeing a smile when i am really dieing inside you are a great at writeing poems and how your emotion spills on the page i wish i could write like you i love it *adds to favs.

This is sooo good*Sobs* what i feel like somedays...Great poetry keep it up!

Woah... that's DEEP, man. Both poems are just... wooh. *faves author and poems*

reminds me of what my friend writes.

I really lik teh poem Faith, even though it is depressing ^^;;; wish I could write poetry like you cuz I *coughsuckcough* at poetry *adds poem to favs*