The Mysterious One by Mat_monster_2000

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The Mysterious One by Mat_monster_2000

, Submitted: 2006-04-04, Updated: 2006-04-04, Chapters: 1, Size: 2K, Words: 494, Comments: 2, Views: 163
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this is a story about a "mysterious" person that no one could find. they saw their shadow but never saw their face. a 10 year old girl name Raja is called into action to save the person and bring them into the life of others.

Chapters

1 - The Mysterious One Speaks - Submitted 2006-04-04 Updated: 2006-04-04 - 37 views, 494 words, 2k

2 Comments

Apr 8, 2006 11:15 PM by: Flyinmonkey1010 chapter 1

Hey, I've read ur story! I think it's pretty KEWL so far! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
@(*..*)@ TIS A MONKEY!!!!

Apr 5, 2006 03:42 PM by: bluefairy421 chapter 1

That's a very nice beginning! My only changes would be that "incase" should be "in case" and you are missing quotes at the end of the letter (since you started with them). This sounds great though!

Blue Fairy

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